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The Cup that Floweth Over
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
Pieh's comment on 2014-07-09 07:03 PM
Ooh. Very fun. I was really enjoying it up to the last paragraph and then that sent me over the edge. Very, very nice. Stored in the brain for later use. Thanks. Go to Comment
The Cup that Floweth Over
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-06-29 01:59 PM
The Cup that Floweth Over
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-16 10:23 AM
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The Cup that Floweth Over
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
Kassy's comment on 2014-06-28 06:43 AM
I like this. Go to Comment
The Cup that Floweth Over
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
rickster's comment on 2014-07-02 07:24 PM
Well done! A very nice setup with lots of loose ends to play with. Go to Comment
The Face on Every Coin, Dini the Goddess of Currency
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-06-02 09:06 AM
A nice cult that can fit into any game world. Go to Comment
The Face on Every Coin, Dini the Goddess of Currency
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-02 07:32 AM
A very impressive submission! I was going to say first but you've been a member for a while - nice to see you posting.

A great idea - goes coin in purse with Dozus's The Way of Divine Wealth, with that religion's focus on commerce. Plots, detail, interactions with the PC's - great job!




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The Face on Every Coin, Dini the Goddess of Currency
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Kassy's comment on 2014-06-02 10:00 AM
Sweet! Well done Harold. Go to Comment
The Spirit of Urban flora
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Scrasamax's comment on 2010-01-01 04:39 PM
Well done, having recently watched the Happening by M. Night Shamalamadingdong, I felt this was superior in quality. Good work Mr. Wiggle Go to Comment
The Spirit of Urban flora
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-12-29 03:50 PM
A very good floral adventure. Go to Comment
The Spirit of Urban flora
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-28 11:36 AM
This is quite original and detailed. Lots of good stuff here.

Putting the flower in the Chum Bucket is quite an interesting idea :)
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The Spirit of Urban flora
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Fallen Angel's comment on 2010-01-11 04:13 AM
The Spirit of Urban flora
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Redgre's comment on 2009-12-29 05:15 PM
Good submission. I think any PC would thoroughly enjoy the final battle where you have no idea what this plant-demon thing is going to do next. It is clear that you put a lot of thought into this creation. I cannot deny having several questions though:

1) When you say 'spores' do you really mean 'pollen'? Pollen makes more sense to me than spores.
2) At the end of the background section you tell us that SOUF has been copying itself but never make reference to those copies again. Are those copies the symbiotic plants that form part of the golem and then are destroyed? It does not appear like those plants are true copies of SOUF, merely extensions.
3) I'm confused at what point in time did SOUF became a pacifist. Was it at the moment of defeat or earlier?
4) You describe SOUF as being an instinctive being, following an urge for self preservation, however, weapon manufacture (the strange hot bark/bone spear held by the mayor's daughter and the oversized, I'm guessing 20' scythe) shows that it was premeditated at least in some form. Could you explain?
5) Finally, it seems like SOUF has more tricks than Houdini (i.e. possession/mind control, telekinesis, area effect plant control, animal control, golem creation, making super humans through plant umbelical, etc.) yet once it goes passive, it only acts as a charm that provides a little spell protection, a plant fertilizer, and a very strange looking scout. Now I'm all for limiting PCs in getting their hot hands on uber items, but we are still missing the why. Why is it weaker after the final battle? Does it retain those powers but just refuse to use them?

I think this is a great side-quest and plan on using it. I look forward to you completing your demon essence series. I hope my questions in no way deter you from writing. Keep up the good work. Go to Comment
The Spirit of Urban flora
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-07-16 01:19 PM


This is quite the submission. I am not sure it needs all the text you have given it, some simple ideas as far as invading the town and the final battle might have gone farther for a DM than fully detailing it all yourself. The base concept is great, but I think the name is a bit misleading given that it is a fragment of deamon and not actually a spirit of flora. Overall thumbs up.


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Chum Bucket
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
manfred's comment on 2009-12-27 08:36 PM
I would actually think, that if someone was running away, the bucket would attempt to drag itself after them... but that would make it even more of a nightmarish device.

Weird and suitably evil. Looking forward to the next fragments! Go to Comment
Chum Bucket
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Siren no Orakio's comment on 2010-01-02 04:59 PM
NPC: I has a bukkit!
CB: Om nom nom!

Cute. Looking forwards to the rest, as it's a (relatively) unique way of using a demon, and therefore, I approve. Go to Comment
Chum Bucket
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2010-01-01 04:46 PM
I am liking the exploded demon spawning random magic items idea. I can also imagine a scene of disbelief.

GM: You are now being attacked by an angry demonic wooden bucket.

PC: What?

PC2: They be stealin mah bukkit!

GM: PC2, roll armor check, you are being attacked by five fish hooks

PC2: D'oh! Go to Comment
Chum Bucket
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-12-26 04:04 PM
A useful little thing. Go to Comment
Chum Bucket
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2011-02-19 10:36 PM


Cute, creepy, and evil. I'd like to see the "other fragments" HaroldWiggle. :)


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Chum Bucket
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-12-28 11:55 PM
Excellent first sub! Welcome aboard!
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