Well done, having recently watched the Happening by M. Night Shamalamadingdong, I felt this was superior in quality. Good work Mr. Wiggle Go to Comment

A very good floral adventure. Go to Comment

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Good submission. I think any PC would thoroughly enjoy the final battle where you have no idea what this plant-demon thing is going to do next. It is clear that you put a lot of thought into this creation. I cannot deny having several questions though:

1) When you say 'spores' do you really mean 'pollen'? Pollen makes more sense to me than spores.
2) At the end of the background section you tell us that SOUF has been copying itself but never make reference to those copies again. Are those copies the symbiotic plants that form part of the golem and then are destroyed? It does not appear like those plants are true copies of SOUF, merely extensions.
3) I'm confused at what point in time did SOUF became a pacifist. Was it at the moment of defeat or earlier?
4) You describe SOUF as being an instinctive being, following an urge for self preservation, however, weapon manufacture (the strange hot bark/bone spear held by the mayor's daughter and the oversized, I'm guessing 20' scythe) shows that it was premeditated at least in some form. Could you explain?
5) Finally, it seems like SOUF has more tricks than Houdini (i.e. possession/mind control, telekinesis, area effect plant control, animal control, golem creation, making super humans through plant umbelical, etc.) yet once it goes passive, it only acts as a charm that provides a little spell protection, a plant fertilizer, and a very strange looking scout. Now I'm all for limiting PCs in getting their hot hands on uber items, but we are still missing the why. Why is it weaker after the final battle? Does it retain those powers but just refuse to use them?

I think this is a great side-quest and plan on using it. I look forward to you completing your demon essence series. I hope my questions in no way deter you from writing. Keep up the good work. Go to Comment

This is quite the submission. I am not sure it needs all the text you have given it, some simple ideas as far as invading the town and the final battle might have gone farther for a DM than fully detailing it all yourself. The base concept is great, but I think the name is a bit misleading given that it is a fragment of deamon and not actually a spirit of flora. Overall thumbs up.

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I would actually think, that if someone was running away, the bucket would attempt to drag itself after them... but that would make it even more of a nightmarish device.

Weird and suitably evil. Looking forward to the next fragments! Go to Comment

NPC: I has a bukkit!
CB: Om nom nom!

Cute. Looking forwards to the rest, as it's a (relatively) unique way of using a demon, and therefore, I approve. Go to Comment

I am liking the exploded demon spawning random magic items idea. I can also imagine a scene of disbelief.

GM: You are now being attacked by an angry demonic wooden bucket.

PC: What?

PC2: They be stealin mah bukkit!

GM: PC2, roll armor check, you are being attacked by five fish hooks

PC2: D'oh! Go to Comment

A useful little thing. Go to Comment

Cute, creepy, and evil. I'd like to see the "other fragments" HaroldWiggle. :)

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Excellent first sub! Welcome aboard!
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Interesting object, strange history, and unique powers. I take it the demon essence in the bucket wasn't it's mind if it behaves like a dog. Where did the other fragments go? What happens if the bucket get's near the other essence fragments? Just curious. Good submission. Go to Comment

It wasn't the mind, that and the other fragments found their way into other items which will be appearing shortly. Go to Comment

Highly disturbing with a good origin, but I simply do not see many applications for this in a game. The base concept would be as a foe or trap, but why not use a tentacled monster than irk your players with a construct? 

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