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The Foul City of Akoro
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
Kassy's comment on 2008-07-12 09:39 AM
What EchoMirage said. Go to Comment
Lord Hrothgar
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
MoonHunter's comment on 2008-07-01 04:39 PM
I am amused.

It is just strange enough of a classically fantasy to have that fresheness to it. In some ways, it pains me. In other ways, it is a fun character. Go to Comment
Lord Hrothgar
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Cheka Man's comment on 2008-07-01 10:38 AM
He reminds me of Thor. And the theif who stole his backpack would be in for a nasty shock. Go to Comment
Lord Hrothgar
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2008-07-01 07:19 PM
I like him! Had a similar character, though as a berseker, he was the bear.. Go to Comment
Lord Hrothgar
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Grey's comment on 2008-07-02 02:02 PM
The bear in the backpack is a bit strange, but then so is the whole character. Strangeness really seems to be his strong point, actually. He's an ambulatory boulder of muscle and goodwill with the brains of an addled child who just so happens to be the lord of a town. He can be predictably unpredictable. Go to Comment
Lord Hrothgar
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Golanthius's comment on 2008-07-02 01:52 PM
Reminds me of Haggar the Horrible. I like this character. The bear in the backpack is a bit strange, but I am intrigued by the idea (what else can I put in this backpack?). Go to Comment
Lord Hrothgar
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Kassy's comment on 2008-07-12 09:35 AM
Nice and ingenious idea. Go to Comment
Orcs of Nevermore
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
MoonHunter's comment on 2008-07-01 12:23 PM
A new view on Orcs (not a new take, as they are traditional orcs with a different culture).

Edit note: if you could put an extra line between the paragraphs. It would make the submission easier to read.

In terms of content, I like it.

Carnivore mounts, okay.. fantasy trope.. I can deal with that.

I just have one issue.. metal forging and nomadic peoples. Even the West African metal workers were semi-nomadic, as having a forge and proper anvil requires a great deal of space/ weight/ and installation investment. Even the West African Metal Worlkers, who did beautiful work, tended to work small because of their equipment.

So you will need to flesh this out or find some way for them to move a true forge. (It is a large sled that they shlep with a team of these creaures?) Perhaps their magic users are metal smiths (harkening back to West Africans), thus using magic to make things with less material gear. Instead of the banging of a hammer, the sound of an odd vibration, like a didgeridoo, comes from the magi as he forges the Great War Sword Go to Comment
Orcs of Nevermore
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Maggot's comment on 2008-07-02 10:34 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Orcs of Nevermore
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-07-01 10:35 AM
Nice. It's good to see new takes on Orcs. Go to Comment
Orcs of Nevermore
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Silveressa's comment on 2008-07-01 08:32 AM
A nice take on Amazonian Orcs, and gives a great feel for their culture for those new to using Orcs in their campaign, and can make a nice resource to flesh out the orcish background of a half-orc char. Go to Comment
Orcs of Nevermore
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Grey's comment on 2008-07-01 12:46 PM
Updated: Moon pointed out a bit of a problem related to how they manage to make metal goods and yet are nomadic. I have fixed the problem. Go to Comment
Orcs of Nevermore
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Kassy's comment on 2008-07-28 11:25 AM
And again i forgot to vote. Go to Comment
Orcs of Nevermore
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Kassy's comment on 2008-07-12 09:36 AM
Again quite ingenious. Go to Comment
Blind Mary
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
MoonHunter's comment on 2008-06-16 05:23 PM
I don't see a lot of Medusa with her. I find a wonderful blind priestess that could be any species.

How did she become trained in 3 section staff?

How did the church come to accept her?

I am wondering about the stoning abilities and why they are negated by her blindness. Go to Comment
Blind Mary
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
Drackler's comment on 2008-06-08 09:14 PM
You have kept the Medusa set of subs good. Blind Mary is nicely detailed and usable. I could see a group traveling along, they get attacked by bandits. Once they finally fight off the bandits they stumble wearily toward the nearby town. But, once they get there, they are faced with a foul beast! The ensuing role-playing would hopefully end in the parties comprehension that the "horrible beastie" is actually a helper. Or something like that. Anyway, it was good. Go to Comment
Blind Mary
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2008-06-08 06:54 PM
Interesting, though how does the town overlook her locks of serpents - a typical feature of medusea? Go to Comment
Blind Mary
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
Stephie's comment on 2008-06-15 08:20 AM
Not bad. I admit that I finished reading the sub wanting more to it. Whatever happened between her and Andrew? And the 3 part staff is great that it has some blood in it. Go to Comment
Blind Mary
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
Grey's comment on 2008-06-16 10:02 AM
I try to leave my subs with room to grow in whatever direction anyone using it wants, so it's up to you what happened between her and Andrew really. Also, I'm glad you like the staff. I was a little unsure with that part, so it's good to hear. Go to Comment
Blind Mary
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
Grey's comment on 2008-06-16 11:16 PM
It makes more sense when you read Twin Goddesses of the Medusa, which the word Amarane links to. In my take on Medusa, It's their gaze that turns them to stone, not their face. Go to Comment
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