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Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-07-01 01:43 PM
The sub has two great elements - the description of the chase, and the idea that the Mordanfey's abilities are limited when it's being watched.
As for the unicorn, methinks it was always kinda neat, but this is an interesting twist. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Cheka Man's comment on 2010-06-30 10:26 PM
Undead unicorns. 5/5 Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Drackler's comment on 2010-07-28 11:12 PM
I will agree with what the others have said before me. I am especially intrigued by the rumors of the Mordanfey protecting something in the forest. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2010-07-05 08:12 PM
Quite cool - though you have two unobserved sections :)
Some info about the dendrognaths would have been nice too.

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Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Redgre's comment on 2010-07-03 12:18 AM
Very nice. I like this opposite to a unicorn. I would have appreciated more description of what the beast looks like, but I can fill in that blank for myself I think. I enjoyed the story portion as well. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Nafar's comment on 2010-09-26 12:35 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Forganthus's comment on 2010-07-03 12:23 PM
Wewt. I'm glad you guys like 'em. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Forganthus's comment on 2012-05-24 02:38 AM
Update: Added links, some small rewrites, clarifications. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
hylandpad's comment on 2011-09-14 10:22 AM


top notch sub. excellent narration - wish I could write half so artfully. Very unique idea for a "Dark" unicorn that isn't the stereotypical "nightmare."


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Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Tundra's comment on 2011-09-14 08:38 AM
Absolutely beautifully written. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2010-05-27 04:10 PM
I loved it. I had minors issues as the Echo about the actual sentience of it but the idea is great.

I had doubts at first about it at first but it wrapped up in something pretty dang fun. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-05-21 05:40 AM
Intelligence without sentience? Is that even possible? Perchance intelligence without awareness of self, or without sufficient will to have one's self stand up to the self of others? Or a semblance of intelligence, much like a computer has?

It's a complicated concept, and needs to be clarified. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2010-05-21 01:22 PM
A man-hater who wanted children would want this. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-06-14 03:44 PM
This would make an interesting setting/premise for a fantasy novel actually. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 06:11 AM
What an odd and interesting item :) I would agree with redgre on the intelligence front. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
sverigesson's comment on 2010-05-21 09:07 PM
At first glance, this seems like one of those stupid ideas.

But the way you wrote it just made it good somehow. A very interesting item. One question: who made this and why? Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Redgre's comment on 2010-05-31 11:27 AM
I really like this one as well. Like Strolen and Echo, I have the same concern. What I would probably do with it is make the golem 'unreadable'. For example, magically reading it's aura, alignment, mind, etc. would turn up nothing, leaving most spell casters a little disturbed that they have no idea of the golem's motives. Finally, not that I see it coming up in my campaigns, but what would happen if an already pregnant woman were to use the staff? Very good. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Forganthus's comment on 2010-05-24 02:20 PM
Google the homunculi of spermists. The staff was made in a past age, pre-history, to allow the creation of similcra even after men had run out of tiny men inside tiny men inside tiny men.

The world has been ending in a series of half-apocalypses of geologic upheaval and incomplete societal restarts. The homunculi issue, real or imagined, is a threat of the distant past. Go to Comment
The Madness of Avool
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
Strolen's comment on 2010-05-29 11:08 PM
Oh, yes! Love that mages and philosophers sought it out as they may not have believed that a simple parchment could do something like this.

Brilliant idea!

The worms don't do anything for me but I see what you are doing with them. Go to Comment
The Madness of Avool
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Pieh's comment on 2010-11-20 07:27 AM


Awesome! Next time I see a guy on a street corner preaching doom and hellfire, I'm going to give him a hug... In hopes of preventing this kind of disaster in our world. Imagine those giant purple bile-and-bone-spewing worm-beasts attacking busses and crawling through subway tunnels... What a mess that would be. Not to mention that only the most evil of people are safe from it, relatively anyway. This is a nasty thing to spring on a game world. I approve.


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