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Lady Evica
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Forganthus's comment on 2012-05-23 03:51 AM
Update: Another edit. Edited a lot for clarity and sectioning, some rewrites, and some new content, too. Extended Plot Ideas #2 a modest bit and #4 a little, but with more history and names. Go to Comment
Lady Evica
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Forganthus's comment on 2012-06-05 09:16 PM
Update: A new intro paragraph. The old one sucked. Go to Comment
Lady Evica
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Forganthus's comment on 2013-01-05 05:02 AM
This is healthy criticism. I suppose I agree with all of it. Go to Comment
Lady Evica
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MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-26 06:43 PM

This is one of those subs where I might have a minor quibble or two about the execution but love the idea and the surrounding details so much I'm giving it a 5/5.

Evica (for some reason I hear that name in Helena Bonham Carter's lispy voice) is the kind of recurring character that can really give the sense of a changing world. She changes and develops (though keeping certain players from finding a reason to kill her might be tricky at times) over time in a way that can give a sense of passing time. The PCs meet her at one point and she appears to be completely devoted to the faith. Meet her later on and she's booking passage to take up her demonic legacy.

I also like that she's a conflicted villain. It makes the story more poignant, in my eyes. She also seems both oddly naive and monstrous. A tricky combination which I believe you have nailed. She really resonates with me.

I find myself trying to figure out how much I need to do to adapt this figure to bring her into my own game, even though it's a departure from my current plans. I will definitely need to adapt some of those scenarios for a system that doesn't make the characters as tough as level-based systems do.

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Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Maggot's comment on 2010-07-12 11:37 PM
Interesting take on dark unicorns. I have to echo Echomirage(forgive the unintentional pun) and say that the part about the Mordanfey's abilities being limited by human observation is an excellent touch. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Scrasamax's comment on 2010-07-02 04:50 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Scrasamax's comment on 2010-07-02 04:50 PM
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-07-01 12:43 PM
The sub has two great elements - the description of the chase, and the idea that the Mordanfey's abilities are limited when it's being watched.
As for the unicorn, methinks it was always kinda neat, but this is an interesting twist. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Cheka Man's comment on 2010-06-30 09:26 PM
Undead unicorns. 5/5 Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Drackler's comment on 2010-07-28 10:12 PM
I will agree with what the others have said before me. I am especially intrigued by the rumors of the Mordanfey protecting something in the forest. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2010-07-05 07:12 PM
Quite cool - though you have two unobserved sections :)
Some info about the dendrognaths would have been nice too.

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Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Redgre's comment on 2010-07-02 11:18 PM
Very nice. I like this opposite to a unicorn. I would have appreciated more description of what the beast looks like, but I can fill in that blank for myself I think. I enjoyed the story portion as well. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Nafar's comment on 2010-09-26 11:35 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Forganthus's comment on 2010-07-03 11:23 AM
Wewt. I'm glad you guys like 'em. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Forganthus's comment on 2012-05-24 01:38 AM
Update: Added links, some small rewrites, clarifications. Go to Comment
Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
hylandpad's comment on 2011-09-14 09:22 AM


top notch sub. excellent narration - wish I could write half so artfully. Very unique idea for a "Dark" unicorn that isn't the stereotypical "nightmare."


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Mordanfey
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Tundra's comment on 2011-09-14 07:38 AM
Absolutely beautifully written. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2010-05-27 03:10 PM
I loved it. I had minors issues as the Echo about the actual sentience of it but the idea is great.

I had doubts at first about it at first but it wrapped up in something pretty dang fun. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-05-21 04:40 AM
Intelligence without sentience? Is that even possible? Perchance intelligence without awareness of self, or without sufficient will to have one's self stand up to the self of others? Or a semblance of intelligence, much like a computer has?

It's a complicated concept, and needs to be clarified. Go to Comment
The Staff of Seryl
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-05-21 12:22 PM
A man-hater who wanted children would want this. Go to Comment
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