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Lake of Rage
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-03-02 08:24 PM
BLARGH!
TOOOOOOOO D&D!
Plus, it needs a better backstory.

3/5. Go to Comment
Lake of Rage
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-03-04 08:11 AM
Hey, Fast, chill out.
We aren't making personal insults against you.
We are just providing constructive criticism for your setting. Go to Comment
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FASTFIRE's comment on 2004-03-04 04:27 AM
Thats caust I posted it on one of the forums way back so I could make better. But I'm not a good story teller and tried evey every thing I could think of to make it better and it didn't work (AD&D the only game I know). So sents you so good at this, why don't you make it non-D&D and give it a better back story then!!!!! Go to Comment
Lake of Rage
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FASTFIRE's comment on 2004-03-05 04:37 AM
err, sorry? Go to Comment
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Magus's comment on 2004-03-03 01:56 PM
this idea sounds unorigional. I'm sorry, but this sounds like something ive heard before. I cant really make any recomendations though, which is a good thing. Go to Comment
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Magus's comment on 2004-03-04 02:03 PM
Yes, im sorry if you got the wrong idea. I am a extreamily pessimistic person, so anything i can find wrong with anything i will yell it out for all to hear. I didn't mean to insult you, I too, have made a few items that have been rather unorigional to others. But back to my previous comment, im sure it is not something that ive seen at this site, so it wasn't you i heard it from. Go to Comment
Lake of Rage
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agentorange's comment on 2004-03-29 11:25 AM
Good hook. It's somewhat sketchy, but the idea is good. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-06-05 05:30 PM
This is one of those subs that needs rewriting. Go to Comment
Lake of Rage
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valadaar's comment on 2007-01-26 10:40 AM
An interesting idea - it can be made non game specific simply by indicating that the drinkers will be affected by magical rage and leave it at that. Timing, how to resist, etc, can be implemented by whoever uses it.

What this post really needs to improve it is _why_ the lake causes rage? Is there an imprisoned evil god buried in the sediment below the waters? Did 100 berserk demons die in a battle eons ago on the site? Etc. Go to Comment
Lake of Rage
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-06-05 05:50 PM
Perhaps the rage effect preceded the druids' falling out: Let's say the lake of rage was where millennia earlier (gleefully ripping off Valadaar's idea!), a legion of demonic Furies were bound into the living stone. The druidic ceremonies on the site were meant to keep the Furies' baleful influence from contaminating the land, but the druids eventually fell under the sway of the very power that they struggled to confine. Overcome by a mood of demonic wrath, they fought until only a handful were left.

As time passes, the spells binding the demons gradually grow weaker and their influence grows stronger... Go to Comment
The Paper Shrine of Laymeret
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manfred's comment on 2007-07-19 03:37 PM
I still like it, too!

The stuff around can be ignored, the architecture alone is what it makes a great idea. Go to Comment
The Paper Shrine of Laymeret
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-03-02 08:26 PM
S'allright.
It's not terribly special, but I enjoy the way the architecture is described.
But please don't include your D&D.

4/5. Go to Comment
The Paper Shrine of Laymeret
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-19 02:49 AM
Updated: Updated: fixed special characters and replaced presumed quotation marks with italics. Go to Comment
The Paper Shrine of Laymeret
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-19 02:50 AM
I love the name and the concept is novel. Go to Comment
The Paper Shrine of Laymeret
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Murometz's comment on 2006-02-26 01:08 AM
I just LOVE the name!

I just made up my own version :), while reading the name. It was built by Giant Wasps, under the guidance of the high priestess, Enessa Xygg, in honor of the god of industry and insects, out of actual specially-treated wasp nest paper! sorry it's late I'm loopy. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-19 04:26 PM
still one of my favorite 'titles' of all time! (subs) Go to Comment
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