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Essus's comment on 2004-05-16 12:10 PM
I fixed the tattoo problem. Sorry about being so vague originally! Go to Comment
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-12-02 09:22 AM
Hmm - one thing I don-t get (in fact I'm surprised nobody else has pick up on this)

"That night, he killed the man who had beaten his friend to death, along with many of the other humans."

If he was that efficient, and that deadly, all the way back hen, how did the humans ever manage to enslave him - and how come he remained a slave for 30 years - just doesn't seem to make sense

Apart from that - not bad at all - not quite in the same class as the Simon character, but pretty good nonetheless

3.5 / 5 - but I think I'll downgrade half a point for the anomaly regarding his enslavement - 3/5 Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 08:55 PM
Writing is good, spelling good. Idea...

I think I've seen this fellow before. Everyone seems to need to write up their own Jason Bourne.

A sentient sword named .. sentient?

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Soup Dragon A Tale of Mysantia

       By: Aramax

This hedonistic dragon,sets up camp in a cities alley exchanging his hot tasty breath weapon for strong drink.

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