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Essus's comment on 2004-05-16 12:10 PM
I fixed the tattoo problem. Sorry about being so vague originally! Go to Comment
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-12-02 09:22 AM
Hmm - one thing I don-t get (in fact I'm surprised nobody else has pick up on this)

"That night, he killed the man who had beaten his friend to death, along with many of the other humans."

If he was that efficient, and that deadly, all the way back hen, how did the humans ever manage to enslave him - and how come he remained a slave for 30 years - just doesn't seem to make sense

Apart from that - not bad at all - not quite in the same class as the Simon character, but pretty good nonetheless

3.5 / 5 - but I think I'll downgrade half a point for the anomaly regarding his enslavement - 3/5 Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 08:55 PM
Writing is good, spelling good. Idea...

I think I've seen this fellow before. Everyone seems to need to write up their own Jason Bourne.

A sentient sword named .. sentient?

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       By: Scrasamax

A group of humans living in a mountainous area have spent generations mining, drinking home made liquor, and generally not spreading the gene pool around enough. The end result is a sub-race of humans who no longer have necks, rather their heads protrude from the upper portion of the torso between the shoulders. They have beards, and lacking the ability to turn their heads, can only see what they are directly facing. They are simple and to the point, and direct to the point of bluntness.

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