This is more the begining of a story than a scenario. There is no information for any other characters to be hooked in. There is no dramatic element, except the implied "king to get daughter back".

I would rather you write up the two characters, with this story as the basis of their conception/ history, then delete this mini-plot summary. Go to Comment

Interesting... so this is a way for two members of the party to meet, yes? A rogue and a mage, on the run together? Go to Comment

I agree with Moon - this reads more like the flyleaf page for a fantasy novel than an RP scenario

Character write-ups for Elyke and Nitsujj would be interesting though - and one for the princess as well

Hope to see all three soon Go to Comment

I think it's nice to be put in the beginning, just like MoonHunter said...but where did the princess go if she knows Nitsujj will go at the tower? Just asking...don't be offended... Go to Comment

Looks like we are still waiting for this one to grow. Go to Comment

Yeah, were I to vote on it, it'd be rock bottom. Go to Comment