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MoonHunter's comment on 2004-12-24 04:04 PM

This is more the begining of a story than a scenario. There is no information for any other characters to be hooked in. There is no dramatic element, except the implied "king to get daughter back".

I would rather you write up the two characters, with this story as the basis of their conception/ history, then delete this mini-plot summary. Go to Comment

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EchoMirage's comment on 2004-12-24 02:09 PM

Interesting... so this is a way for two members of the party to meet, yes? A rogue and a mage, on the run together? Go to Comment

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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-06-16 08:20 AM

I agree with Moon - this reads more like the flyleaf page for a fantasy novel than an RP scenario

Character write-ups for Elyke and Nitsujj would be interesting though - and one for the princess as well

Hope to see all three soon Go to Comment

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sTYkE_monDsHEIn_347's comment on 2005-06-15 11:26 AM

I think it's nice to be put in the beginning, just like MoonHunter said...but where did the princess go if she knows Nitsujj will go at the tower? Just asking...don't be offended... Go to Comment

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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-15 07:01 PM

Looks like we are still waiting for this one to grow. Go to Comment

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RGTraynor's comment on 2010-07-13 07:39 AM

Yeah, were I to vote on it, it'd be rock bottom. Go to Comment

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Swords form a bond to their wielder. A symbol on the grip that is absorbed through the user's hand and appears on the back of the hand. Maybe only visible to them or others that have the abilities. Could give unique powers depending on when it happened and what they did to get it. It takes a specially made sword that only few can receive and made by a certain race. Then they must do something really heroic to unleash the swords power. Once unleashed it is theirs till they die then the sword goes dormant again till another accomplishes another feat.
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