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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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valadaar's comment on 2010-10-26 08:29 AM


This is a 5/5 if I have ever seen one.  I cannot think of anything that I would change.



Well done!


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Silveressa's comment on 2014-05-30 12:11 AM
Great stuff, really adds to Tiefling uniquity, well worth a 5/5 and Hoh! Go to Comment
30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-30 09:28 AM
5.0/5

There isn't anything 'not' to like about this sub!

Well done Echo!

I'll go +1 in favor of the Golden too. Go to Comment
30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Moonlake's comment on 2010-10-25 02:19 AM


A very coherent set of 30s (as in a set that flows well together)


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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slartibartfast's comment on 2010-10-24 05:32 PM


Awesome!  I thought all thirty (actually 31, considering the twins) were very colorful and unique.   What I particularly liked was that you were able to really capture  these characters without having to go into exhaustive detail or backstories; making them highly usable on a moment's notice.  Some of these guys'll definitely make it in my campaign.


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Dossta's comment on 2010-10-25 05:34 PM


I'm hard pressed to find something NOT to like about this one.  All entries are unique, coherent and succinct, and most of them provide some quest-able material.  Good show!  5/5 


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Ramhir's comment on 2010-10-24 04:01 PM
Some of these could make it into my campaign. These are quite good and show a lot of imagination. 4/5 Go to Comment
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herrozerro's comment on 2010-10-27 08:54 AM


great list I love it!


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Unthar, the Sun of the Dead
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Pieh's comment on 2010-09-09 05:25 AM
I have typed several things trying to find an exclamation to do this justice. Alas, I succumb to pure explanation. I thoroughly enjoyed this submission. I really want to use it in one form or another. Excellent work. Go to Comment
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Pieh's comment on 2010-10-17 06:13 PM


Congratulations on going Golden. Echo and Unthar. I absolutely love this piece and can't wait to use it.


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Scrasamax's comment on 2010-09-04 09:14 PM
This I like, the sun of the dead. It is vast in scope, the appearances of Unthar are rare enough to be the stuff of legend rather than an astronomical fact. Visuals are nice, and one thing that did come to mind while I was reading this was the music video for Soundgarden's song Black Hole Sun.
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-09-04 12:38 PM
Hm - shall I add a passage describing the world under Unthar from the eyes of a denizen? Go to Comment
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-09-05 03:57 AM
Also check out http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qT_CtFMQouU
Sol Niger...
The lyrics "that what never was shall always be" are quite fitting.

As for the visuals - yes, Unthar will be a disc of nothingness, surrounded by a swirling nimbus of chaos, undoing and mad possibility. Go to Comment
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-11-01 03:23 PM
There is no !space! reality behind this one. There indeed was a divine womb from which sentient "suns" sprang forth, beings that happen to roam the sky, shed light for creation, and at night, they actually go home, dim, cool down and drink tea with dad.

This being a "fantasy" sub, it is about a world where this is reality. There is no orbit, there is but the sky, and in it three suns. They fly because they are divine. They shed light for the same reason. You could measure the power of the sun, but the reading could be "317 milliJesus" or something like that. It's just that in that world they never heard of our savior, they have their own.

So. Unthar is an undead divine entity. Those do not fly in elliptic paths around anything. It is locked in a real sub-dimension that is the Houses of the Dead, where you could sneak in and chat up your dead grandpa. It has a mind.

So. Suspend disbelief, there's lots of stranger subs than this one inthe citadel. Go to Comment
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-11-04 03:45 PM
It can be a fold in space.
The N-th dimension above mundane reality.
The lint in the navel of the Vogon Lord of Poetry.
A computer simulation.
The inside of an effed-up bag of holding.
The biggest holo-deck ever built gone haywire.
An existence created by the eternal dream of Bakuki the Slime Prophet (you can enter it by getting stoned on a joint dipped into his mucus).
It could be a reality before our time, before the universe was remade into what it is now.
An alternate reality.
On the other side of a black hole.

Being open-minded does not make the brain fall out.

Also, the fact that a submission does not fit into one setting does not mean it requires a compatible explanation, nor is it a flaw of said submission if it comes without such a compatibility pack. Go to Comment
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EchoMirage's comment on 2011-09-13 07:31 AM
I did not give Unthar a motivation per se - it's a stillborn undead sun, an aberrant force of nature. But the room for an actual agenda is there - the dead sun may want something, and its escapes may have meaning (with the true horror being revealed once the consequences are understood).

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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-09-04 07:44 PM
Good idea. 5/5 Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-09-09 12:17 PM
I look forward to giving this an HOH. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-10-04 07:37 PM
This should win the Quest, I think. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-10-26 01:35 PM


Congratulations for winning the Quest.


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