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Sanguine Widowmaker
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maximo's comment on 2005-01-14 05:01 PM
I love this idea. An intelligent item that will certainly not be able to be "bullied" by it's owner. It's good to see an item that is truly intelligent! 5/5

I wonder...when it speaks to it's owner, does it actually speak, or is it some sort of telepathic link? Or does the owner even hear actual words...is it just a feeling or a sense that he "knows" what to do? Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
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oakleafbard's comment on 2005-02-11 01:12 AM
Great storyline. Most people would have stopped with a really cool weapon concept but you went that extra, unexpected step.I didn't mind the appearance but anything involving "...the whine of tortured infants.." makes my fatherly skin crawl. Not a criticism, mind you just being a dad. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 09:58 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
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valadaar's comment on 2006-08-21 08:20 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Voonsai
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-01-19 06:33 PM
I like this one alot, as well as the other bios I read from EchoMirage, but I have a question for Siren. What does your name mean? Go to Comment
Voonsai
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manfred's comment on 2004-12-06 09:29 AM
(Note: there are a few typos here and there.)

Animistic worldview? This is a good character for many settings. The idea of dispossed spirits is excellent!

Oh, and what are those metal items it can materialize?


I like it. 5/5 Go to Comment
Voonsai
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manfred's comment on 2005-10-21 08:46 AM
Voonsai
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manfred's comment on 2005-12-27 12:20 PM
Actually, this submission could be easily converted into a Codex, with all those "children". Will you, Echo? Go to Comment
Voonsai
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2004-12-07 11:50 AM
This is a a beautiful concept, Echo. Absolutely beautiful.

How indeed does man-kind interact with the primal things? He is a creature of nature, yet he is self defined. Such a spiritual being, and the world he comes from, must pose some powerful philosophical questions.

Thank you. Go to Comment
Voonsai
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2005-02-07 10:42 PM
Very little. I got it from a Crackerjack box. .
Echo! Can I talk you into cross linking Alia here? :) Go to Comment
Voonsai
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2008-05-07 06:33 PM
Bumpity bump for the latest quest. The Wyldlings fit the intent. Go to Comment
Voonsai
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Scrasamax's comment on 2004-12-04 07:57 AM
Certainly an interesting angle, the new primitives. I like the concept.

4/5 Go to Comment
Voonsai
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EchoMirage's comment on 2004-12-04 06:23 PM
From a certain angle, they might seem primitive, but aren't they just seeking a release, being ... free?

This is intended for a setting with a rather animistic worldview. Go to Comment
Voonsai
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EchoMirage's comment on 2004-12-07 05:38 AM
Small metal items...
like lockpicks. Hairpins. Small daggers. Keys. Files. Screwdrivers. He likes nifty stuff like that himself, and collects it ... while of little use in nature, he managed to learn a few new tricks since he started living in the city, like "food lying around was laid there for SOME reason" or "how to kick a groin - selfdefense in three easy lessons". Having nifty stuff handy is but another of them. Go to Comment
Voonsai
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EchoMirage's comment on 2005-10-22 04:08 AM
I checked the typos. Go to Comment
Voonsai
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2008-01-13 05:53 PM
I never actually voted on this guy, but he's always been one of my favorites.

Anyways, here's my vote. Go to Comment
Voonsai
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Pariah's comment on 2006-07-13 07:58 PM
I remember reading this when I was first looking around this site. Beyond that, I wouldn't hunt down those kids for a pretty penny, they've got spunk and'll make dang good adventures when they get older. Go to Comment
Voonsai
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Murometz's comment on 2006-03-22 11:48 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Voonsai
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-10 11:45 AM
This is quite cool - a spirit to knock things loose, create heros and NPCs and cause chaos. Go to Comment
Arjanelle
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Scrasamax's comment on 2004-11-15 07:37 AM
Very interesting, a radical elf who has strayed away from the tree-hugging, poetry singing, green clad Ranger of the North ideal. The back story is suitably fantastic to make it epic (such as sneaking into the abode of the gods) while at the same time tragic enough to make it more believable.

A few questions come to mind, though not the this could be better sort, but the I want to know more sort. I want to know more about the downfall of the elven kingdoms, and are their others who survived, their small realms hidden away by magic or geography, or sold their kin to the humans for a piece of safety. With many being taken into bondage, what is the status of elven slaves, and their inevitable half-elven children?

Well done.
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