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Arjanelle
NPCs  (Major)   (Natural)
EchoMirage's comment on 2007-10-12 08:22 PM
Well, a part of her body may turn to raw creation - whether it would be to her adversary's benefit is the question. Go to Comment
Arjanelle
NPCs  (Major)   (Natural)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-01-29 11:53 AM
An elf who thinks of all the other races as inferior. If an amulet gets damaged or plucked out in a fight, does a part of her body vanish? Go to Comment
Arjanelle
NPCs  (Major)   (Natural)
Pariah's comment on 2005-12-23 10:06 AM
Wow, epic and sad. A wonderful ragedy. Go to Comment
Arjanelle
NPCs  (Major)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-13 06:40 PM
Awesome!

This is a neat take on the Elf.
Hmm, Elf freetext? Go to Comment
Avenel Iloven-Deone
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2008-05-06 09:55 PM
BUMP! I looooove how you touch on each of the twelve. Go to Comment
Avenel Iloven-Deone
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-10-27 08:45 PM
Enjoyable.
Sort of a female Frankenstein. Well, that's fine, and I like the part about the children- you described them all. Very good.

4/5. Go to Comment
Avenel Iloven-Deone
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
Scrasamax's comment on 2004-10-27 07:03 AM
It would have been simple to merely state that twelve children were sacrificed to create a Frankensteinian monster that looked like an elf and had higher motivations. The extra effort to create, and name the twelve is worthy of more than five flames, but as that is all that I can give, that is what I will give. Very well done!

5/5 Go to Comment
Avenel Iloven-Deone
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
Acacia's comment on 2005-04-22 04:17 AM
Entertaining. Long, but kept me interested. Nice job.

4/5. Go to Comment
Avenel Iloven-Deone
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-08 08:20 PM
Excellent! I agree with Scras, blurbs on each of the twelve is wonderful! I have a thing for this type of detail. Go to Comment
Anrathi
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Strolen's comment on 2007-02-11 08:19 AM
This is a good one and an npc that can walk into and out of your games and/or your rumors. Go to Comment
Anrathi
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
MoonHunter's comment on 2004-09-18 07:24 AM
A story line that can be shoe horned into most campaign. It has catchy lyrics and a beat I can dance to, I rate it an 85. :) Go to Comment
Anrathi
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 01:27 PM
a most excellent dichotomy between beauty and evil, between form and function, and why those legendary bards would want to make stones weep. Go to Comment
Anrathi
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Dozus's comment on 2012-12-12 06:41 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Anrathi
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-12 04:40 PM
You had me at 'semi-sentient guitar' Go to Comment
Korrney
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-01-20 05:39 PM
Wow, I love the character. The classical villian, powerful, yet a coward. Likable, and quick to anger, selfish and greedy. the item is astounding, but shouldent he destroy it? You know, so no one can use it against him? Or, is it so that if he destroys it he will revert back to his weak state, and even be consumed by the clock?

Dragoon God Go to Comment
Korrney
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-09-08 04:50 PM
Yep.

4/5. Go to Comment
Korrney
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-11-22 09:15 PM
Exodus Storm, you don't need to comment on ALL of your GM's characters... Go to Comment
Korrney
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-02-06 12:03 PM
Korrney
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Taxus's comment on 2004-09-08 10:36 AM
I have a question. If Korrney could get enormous powers with the bell, why hasn't he already used it in a town of, say, 2 millions of people? Then he would be like a god. Hasn't this occurred to him or something?

Anyways, a good character, with strong points, and weak points to make him feel real, not some munchkin guy, with powers to blast you into oblivion in the blink of an eye. Strong background, although finding the lost city was almost funny, the way he did it, it's a wonder it wasn't found before. Anyway.

4/5 Go to Comment
Korrney
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-09-10 02:45 AM
I forgot to mention:
The bell works only once for each person without much risk and work - using it more than once would be coupled with quite some risk - and Korrney was to lazy/cowardly to work on using it another time. As he is written, I doubt he would risk losing what he has for an uncertain gain... Go to Comment
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