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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-24 04:23 AM
Well, some people are that way. Anyway: thanks Horde for your feedback, I'd be glad to discuss my long-windedness in the chatroom.
I will try to improve THAT... waaaaait, coming up:

"Arron is a merc and he rox. He;s croode, cuz momma taught him nuffing bettur. Cinthra is an angel-thing but no angel as she works fer teh goddass of luv. Arron likes Cinthra cuz she makes breakfast and had got great boobs. Cinthra likes Arron cuz he saved her arse from slaver guys. Chaotic evil Slaver guys (CR 17) equipped with Leomund's Tiny Huts and Vorpal Lollipops of Tongue-Slaying (+37). Dey wander teh land and help gud people and battle evil cuz dat's wat gud people do."

Short enough? Or shall I get it shorter? "Arron is teh merc sword masta and Cinthra's got teh power of love. They rock."

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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-04-14 03:09 PM
You didn't read it...
But you think it is good...
o_O Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Nosredna's comment on 2005-06-09 02:58 PM
I can't help myself but love this particular NPC (or is that NPC's? :P) But I find Arron a little bit as one of the stereotipycal 'save all people' type. By this I mean "Despite his intimidating appearance htough, he's got a pleasant quality around him".

It fits perfectly which is the thing that got me. Nice one Echo!

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Arron and Cinthra
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Chaosmark's comment on 2005-04-09 10:00 PM
Indeed, quite a good tale. These NPCs might find a place in a campaign in the near future.

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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 02:44 PM
A great sub Echo. Love the legendary atmosphere.

Please let me know if you still want the Barbarian Horde comments excised.
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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
the Wanderer's comment on 2006-12-19 09:15 PM
A very interesting pair.... Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
manfred's comment on 2007-08-31 02:02 PM
That is certainly possible. Some more polishing of the text would be nice, but that is work for the author... the characters are gone. Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-03-15 09:47 AM
History and setting elements deftly incorporated into an item.

:) Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-03-15 04:18 PM
May it fall where it is needed.

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Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-11 07:02 PM
A staff that can make a person immortal as far as aging is concreaned, but only if he or she spends their life righting wrongs and helping others. Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-11-11 07:26 PM
Ah, EchoMirage! You have such skill I may just have to nominate you for a Hall of Honour or three when I have the chance ;) Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-22 10:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Wulfhere's comment on 2007-08-31 01:44 PM
This well-conceived item deserved another visit to the Hall of Honor. Could someone take a little while to clean up the odd characters that have inserted themselves? Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-01-16 07:27 PM
Dragoon God here, I love how you made the history so extensive, and rich with detail. the sword is terrifying to look at, yet good hearted as any noble knight, with some awsome magic skills,great job! Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Kassil's comment on 2006-08-30 05:34 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-01-13 10:53 AM
It is nice to see intelligent items having their own needs rather than just being someone to do PC's biddings and just be an extra NPC for the GM to play.

This is an item worthy of a novel. And given the size of the post, you are well on your way :)

The only comment I can really make on this one is that you could put an extra return between paragraphs to make it easier to read. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-02-11 09:47 AM
Actually you should note it on the top of the post - first line, so they can't miss it... and if they do... and are offended... it is their own fault. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Iain's comment on 2005-01-14 05:30 AM
I don't know - I quite like your original appearance. An excellent post though. 5/5. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-01-13 04:27 PM
First let me voice my one, and only criticism. I dont like the physcial description of the blade, in that it is purple steel with glowing runes that writh about, and emitting the wail of tortured infants. This is a masterful post, but the description lacks the subtly deserving of such a weapon.

When drawn, young children will find themselves wailing. Their mothers will not be able to sooth them so long as the blade is drawn within their immediate vicinity (say 100 to 200 feet). Shadows cast by fires will take on the form of macabre plays of silent violence, massacres and slaughterings seen only in shade and shadow. Fires pop and hiss more vigorously when the blade is drawn. This way, it is the enviroment reacting to the drawn blade, rather than a moaning sword with wiggling squiggles.

Now for the praise. I was enthralled by this piece. I generally despize magical weapons as so few are done well, rather being Sword of +X superpower. I love the story, and read it twice just to make sure I didnt miss anything really good in it. Well done! Kudos. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-13 04:33 PM
Okay, your desription is scarier, that's true ;) Go to Comment
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