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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
the Wanderer's comment on 2006-12-19 08:15 PM
A very interesting pair.... Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
manfred's comment on 2007-08-31 01:02 PM
That is certainly possible. Some more polishing of the text would be nice, but that is work for the author... the characters are gone. Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-03-15 08:47 AM
History and setting elements deftly incorporated into an item.

:) Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-03-15 03:18 PM
May it fall where it is needed.

5/5 Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-11 06:02 PM
A staff that can make a person immortal as far as aging is concreaned, but only if he or she spends their life righting wrongs and helping others. Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-11-11 06:26 PM
Ah, EchoMirage! You have such skill I may just have to nominate you for a Hall of Honour or three when I have the chance ;) Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-22 09:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Caerrven's Regret
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
Wulfhere's comment on 2007-08-31 12:44 PM
This well-conceived item deserved another visit to the Hall of Honor. Could someone take a little while to clean up the odd characters that have inserted themselves? Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-01-16 06:27 PM
Dragoon God here, I love how you made the history so extensive, and rich with detail. the sword is terrifying to look at, yet good hearted as any noble knight, with some awsome magic skills,great job! Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Kassil's comment on 2006-08-30 04:34 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-01-13 09:53 AM
It is nice to see intelligent items having their own needs rather than just being someone to do PC's biddings and just be an extra NPC for the GM to play.

This is an item worthy of a novel. And given the size of the post, you are well on your way :)

The only comment I can really make on this one is that you could put an extra return between paragraphs to make it easier to read. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-02-11 08:47 AM
Actually you should note it on the top of the post - first line, so they can't miss it... and if they do... and are offended... it is their own fault. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Iain's comment on 2005-01-14 04:30 AM
I don't know - I quite like your original appearance. An excellent post though. 5/5. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-01-13 03:27 PM
First let me voice my one, and only criticism. I dont like the physcial description of the blade, in that it is purple steel with glowing runes that writh about, and emitting the wail of tortured infants. This is a masterful post, but the description lacks the subtly deserving of such a weapon.

When drawn, young children will find themselves wailing. Their mothers will not be able to sooth them so long as the blade is drawn within their immediate vicinity (say 100 to 200 feet). Shadows cast by fires will take on the form of macabre plays of silent violence, massacres and slaughterings seen only in shade and shadow. Fires pop and hiss more vigorously when the blade is drawn. This way, it is the enviroment reacting to the drawn blade, rather than a moaning sword with wiggling squiggles.

Now for the praise. I was enthralled by this piece. I generally despize magical weapons as so few are done well, rather being Sword of +X superpower. I love the story, and read it twice just to make sure I didnt miss anything really good in it. Well done! Kudos. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-13 03:33 PM
Okay, your desription is scarier, that's true ;) Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-14 03:58 AM
I will think about the appearance and alter it a bit. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-17 03:31 AM
Thanks for the laurels...
As for speech, the Sanguine Widowmaker can speak out loudly yet rarely does so... most often, he will simply nudge a person he has not forged a relationship with yet into the right direction, and will speak into the mind of a friend. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-11 11:20 AM
Good hint, MoonHunter. Thanks. Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-11 01:55 AM
Don't worry, I've got several younger siblings, several being justkids, and plan to have kids someday myself, and would never harm a kid, nor wish harm on a child.
Mature people can handle such topics responsibly, and certainly do not delight in them, but they may be useful for gameplay to evoke a certain emotional response - for example, if youwere amongst the players encountering the Sanguine Widowmaker, the response would be exactly as intended - to creep you out, get scared and certainly not trust that cursed piece of iron, even though it might state that its intentions are lily-white.

Perhaps there should be a box to check if a post is not suitable for audiences under a certain age, due to violence, or sexual content? Go to Comment
Sanguine Widowmaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-01-13 12:59 PM
At first I thought...not another Magic Sword. But this is different, it has it's own personality. :) 5/5 Go to Comment
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