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The Temple of the First Man
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Forganthus's comment on 2012-06-11 05:05 PM
This is pretty great. You did a great job with description and storytelling. The idea of a place where gods go to be humble is very novel. Could use a little formatting. I like Azar's tree, too. Go to Comment
The Temple of the First Man
Locations  (Establishment)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Dossta's comment on 2011-12-08 05:38 PM


This is one of the first posts I remember reading here before officially joining the Citadel.  Then, as now, it brought a smile to my face.  When spinning tales and crafting the lore of worlds unforged, I often have a tendency to wax grandiose -- Behold! Spires of shimmering glass, trees of silver glittering in the moonlight!  All very pretty, to be sure, but oftentimes completely unecessary.  In its humble simplicity, this place touches the heart.  It's a lesson that I'll strive to remember whenever one of my ideas needs better grounding.


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The Temple of the First Man
Locations  (Establishment)   (Forest/ Jungle)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-07-18 09:37 AM


This has a wonderful old-world mythology feel to it. Makes me think of the Citadel; a haven from the cares of the outside world where we can all meet, tell stories, and have discussions.



This is also one of those subs that hints at a wider, fully fleshed world, and inspires ideas beyond the location.



(The part about stealing the scythe while the god was eating his cookies cracked me up :)



A well deserved 5/5 and an HoH.


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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-04-10 06:55 AM
The tale is very good, a bit long at times, but very good. If this was a scale from 0 to 10 you would have gotten a 9. But on this scale I shall award you a 5 (4.5)

The only things that lowered the score was that it got somewhat boring at times, but recovered very quickly. There were also a couple of grammar issues, but no biggie. Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-04-14 10:11 AM
Didnt read it but i think its good. Hope to c u soon Echo :) Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-05-23 07:29 AM
Don't you understand sarcasm? EchoMirage - Just- arg. It's disgusting how cruel and sad you are. Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-05-24 02:25 AM
If I have something to say, I can say it here. What, you scared of my feedback because your story is unbelievably Long/Boring?stupid?
Do me a favour and get a LIFE Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-05-24 05:06 AM
I think this conflict needs to end here.
Dear barbarian horde, these comments are unprofessional and uninteresting. If you truly think this post is of inferior quality, you should point out WHAT you do not like. You should say WHY the overall score is low. Boring, long and stupid IS a comment, but it rather seems like you do not like roleplaying at all...

If this is some sort of blood feud going on, take it somewhere else. Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-05-24 05:03 PM
"Dear barbarian horde"...
Heh-heh-heh... That's ironic, 'cuz the reprimander is also part of the Horde!
:) Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-25 08:44 AM
Consider it done soon. Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Maggot's comment on 2005-05-24 02:35 AM
Horde,you are most uncivil and rude... Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-04-04 06:23 PM
Not at all what I was expecting. Excellent!
5/5 Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-04-14 05:14 PM
Well, THAT's what I'd call instinct ;p *smirk* *chuckle* Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-23 08:00 AM
Okay, now, normally, I'd not see fit to respond to such a comment - but today is my nice day (yes, even I have those), so:

First and foremost, I'd like to THANK that compassionate person who pities me so much - though I'd be much more grateful if I knew who voiced such a nice comment so that I'm able to thank that benefactor better.

Second, I have understood your point (whoever you may be) well enough. Do not feel compelled to add such a comment to EVERY one of my posts. Actually, the best way would be if you just sent me a private message - if you have got a problem with me, I'd prefer if we could discuss it in the private, and not bother our fellow Strolenites with messages that do NOT pertain to the post in question.

Third, my comment WAS sarcastic - feel free to discuss it with someone who actually has some insight into humor. If you happen to know anyone, unlikely as it may be.

A final note: well aware that this was evoked by my comment on that oh so flawless post by the oh so perfect 'the Phantom' (who 'rox' of course) - I'm honest. If I think someone should burn in hell for soiling a great piece of art with his stupidity, I voice my opinion. Of course, you may think the same of me. How good for me that I like it hot.

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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-25 02:32 AM
I would welcome if someone deleted all this bull$h!+ and left only the relevant comments behind. Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-24 03:23 AM
Well, some people are that way. Anyway: thanks Horde for your feedback, I'd be glad to discuss my long-windedness in the chatroom.
I will try to improve THAT... waaaaait, coming up:

"Arron is a merc and he rox. He;s croode, cuz momma taught him nuffing bettur. Cinthra is an angel-thing but no angel as she works fer teh goddass of luv. Arron likes Cinthra cuz she makes breakfast and had got great boobs. Cinthra likes Arron cuz he saved her arse from slaver guys. Chaotic evil Slaver guys (CR 17) equipped with Leomund's Tiny Huts and Vorpal Lollipops of Tongue-Slaying (+37). Dey wander teh land and help gud people and battle evil cuz dat's wat gud people do."

Short enough? Or shall I get it shorter? "Arron is teh merc sword masta and Cinthra's got teh power of love. They rock."

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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-04-14 02:09 PM
You didn't read it...
But you think it is good...
o_O Go to Comment
Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Nosredna's comment on 2005-06-09 01:58 PM
I can't help myself but love this particular NPC (or is that NPC's? :P) But I find Arron a little bit as one of the stereotipycal 'save all people' type. By this I mean "Despite his intimidating appearance htough, he's got a pleasant quality around him".

It fits perfectly which is the thing that got me. Nice one Echo!

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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-04-09 09:00 PM
Indeed, quite a good tale. These NPCs might find a place in a campaign in the near future.

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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 01:44 PM
A great sub Echo. Love the legendary atmosphere.

Please let me know if you still want the Barbarian Horde comments excised.
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