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Jardan , the Oak Sage
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Iain's comment on 2006-04-26 12:07 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Jardan , the Oak Sage
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EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-31 03:40 AM
So. Finished. Go to Comment
Jardan , the Oak Sage
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-05-27 12:33 PM
This could be a 5/5 post soon. :) Go to Comment
Jardan , the Oak Sage
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-25 08:13 PM
A case of "The DruidFather".No doubt the non human races have their own organized crime gangs. Go to Comment
Jardan , the Oak Sage
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-05-27 09:48 AM
Whoe - a reluctant druid - now that IS an original idea and I already gets my Wish I'd thought of that award.

I think I'll hold off voting until the rest of the story is posted, but I will say that if it's even half as good as this you're on to a winner here. Go to Comment
Jardan , the Oak Sage
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-05-31 09:28 AM
So - Derek "Del-Boy" Trotter meets Merlin the Druid - this is every bit as good as promised - the Wish I'd thought of that award as well deserved indeed - 5/5 Go to Comment
Jardan , the Oak Sage
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axlerowes's comment on 2012-11-09 07:51 PM
This is fun story, reminds me of Moses, the Green lantern, the Blackhood, the Phantom, and others. What I really like about this is how the story justifies the pay off. If you were to write up the fairy mafia with Trent enforcers, people would not buy it, but you story of Jardan takes us there and makes us believe it accept it and see at as a natural extension of the story.

I agree could use some polish, but the goal, execution and style are fantastic. Go to Comment
Jardan , the Oak Sage
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valadaar's comment on 2012-05-12 07:01 PM

Wow, unvoted is bringing up gems.  I love this one! Top marks!


 


 

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Kira Savarin
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-25 09:47 AM
Other than being hugely long, I am very impressed. An NPC with more depth, development, and impact on the world, than most PCs.

Of course that is what might make her difficult to use in a game, as she "shows up" the PCs in many ways. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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Alec_Shadowkin's comment on 2005-05-26 08:26 AM
Absolutely magnificent. You have done a wonderful job, Echo. I wonder if I can fit her into my world anywhere :) Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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Maggot's comment on 2005-05-25 10:58 AM
Regarding her dad,I'm getting a Rachat vibe here. The simmilarity is pretty strong,since both are bastard half demon spawn that loath their respective sires. 4/5. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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Maggot's comment on 2005-05-25 10:48 PM
Speaking of linking,how does one do it? I have yet to figure it out. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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Maggot's comment on 2005-05-26 01:35 AM
Oh,and I have to say I like the idea that Kira and Rachat may be siblings. Makes a possible show down all that more exciting. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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Maggot's comment on 2005-05-26 07:23 AM
Thanks for the tip,Echo. Go to Comment
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EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-25 06:30 AM
Done. Done? I don't know. Any ideas? :D Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-25 05:06 PM
I said I was unsure whether to post her - I had her made up long before Rachat, and was quite dismayed when he appeared - a day or two before I wanted to post her originally.

She does not loathe her father - she's pissed at him because he's responsible for her existence, and has not showed up for twenty years, in some of which she's been through hell.

Actually: they may share a father, she and Rachat. They may meet at some point - as allies or enemies.

I linked her to Rachat. "See, he's not a hellspawn, he's just... an old man who's.. eh, immortal, and has these burning eyes and yes, weird teeth and stuff. Yup, he's totally O.K." Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-26 01:53 AM
Though, their fathers seem a bit different... may be the same fiend still. Or they may be COUSINS.

As for linking, write something like "itm=23" into the linking section at the bottom of the post. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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EchoMirage's comment on 2017-11-05 03:18 AM
Thanks for reminding me of her, I can use her in a current game of mine :) Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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EchoMirage's comment on 2017-11-05 03:24 AM
Update: Corrected a few typos Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-05-25 10:57 AM
5/5 Very good. Go to Comment
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