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Jardan , the Oak Sage
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-12 07:01 PM

Wow, unvoted is bringing up gems.  I love this one! Top marks!


 


 

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Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-25 09:47 AM
Other than being hugely long, I am very impressed. An NPC with more depth, development, and impact on the world, than most PCs.

Of course that is what might make her difficult to use in a game, as she "shows up" the PCs in many ways. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Alec_Shadowkin's comment on 2005-05-26 08:26 AM
Absolutely magnificent. You have done a wonderful job, Echo. I wonder if I can fit her into my world anywhere :) Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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Maggot's comment on 2005-05-25 10:58 AM
Regarding her dad,I'm getting a Rachat vibe here. The simmilarity is pretty strong,since both are bastard half demon spawn that loath their respective sires. 4/5. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2005-05-25 10:48 PM
Speaking of linking,how does one do it? I have yet to figure it out. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2005-05-26 01:35 AM
Oh,and I have to say I like the idea that Kira and Rachat may be siblings. Makes a possible show down all that more exciting. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2005-05-26 07:23 AM
Thanks for the tip,Echo. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
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EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-25 06:30 AM
Done. Done? I don't know. Any ideas? :D Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-25 05:06 PM
I said I was unsure whether to post her - I had her made up long before Rachat, and was quite dismayed when he appeared - a day or two before I wanted to post her originally.

She does not loathe her father - she's pissed at him because he's responsible for her existence, and has not showed up for twenty years, in some of which she's been through hell.

Actually: they may share a father, she and Rachat. They may meet at some point - as allies or enemies.

I linked her to Rachat. "See, he's not a hellspawn, he's just... an old man who's.. eh, immortal, and has these burning eyes and yes, weird teeth and stuff. Yup, he's totally O.K." Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-26 01:53 AM
Though, their fathers seem a bit different... may be the same fiend still. Or they may be COUSINS.

As for linking, write something like "itm=23" into the linking section at the bottom of the post. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-05-25 10:57 AM
5/5 Very good. Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-12-01 09:24 AM
Welcome to the site, player of EchoMirage's group. We appreciate your GM here. You are very lucky you know ;) Go to Comment
Kira Savarin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
forgotten adventurer's comment on 2005-12-01 09:20 AM
Really good, as most of your NPC in games are. Go to Comment
The Pilgrim's Torch
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-05-11 10:02 AM
Wow.


(Ashamed 5/5 voter.) Go to Comment
The Pilgrim's Torch
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
manfred's comment on 2007-01-16 06:02 PM
So, um, do we ever see a little polished version of this jewel? Go to Comment
The Pilgrim's Torch
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Agar's comment on 2005-05-11 09:54 AM
5/5

For the others of you who are voting 5's and not commenting, shame on you. If it's that good, you should leave a comment, even just "Wow".

Wow.

Seriously though, this is a great item with a great story. It's almost too much story. Almost. I almost voted 4 because the sword is more like a plot device than a weapon, just something to move the story along than an item with it's own worth, but it's a really good story.

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The Pilgrim's Torch
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-11 05:46 PM
I was the other secret 5/5 voter. I refuse to say "wow".

To quote Neo, "Woah" Is that better?

This is almost a campaign seed. If you put this item into your campaign, without reworking it seriously, you have defined much of the setting, major organizations, and the main artifact of faith. Go to Comment
The Pilgrim's Torch
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Scrasamax's comment on 2005-05-11 04:03 PM
DL is entirely correct that magic swords are a dime a dozen, yet this one stands out quite effectively. The backstory sets it in high regards, with other luminary blades that were as often plot devices as they were weapons of magic power, such as Excaliber and Durandahl. The story is excellent and reflects the journey of the hero who in coming to terms with power must make the ultimate sacrfice at the apex of his power. Kudos for creating a truely 5/5 post Echo. Go to Comment
The Pilgrim's Torch
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-11 05:00 PM
Thanks a lot...
The story just came over me, I had to write it - I ran from the kitchen to the computer to post it before I forget.
I will edit the powers into a more structured form as soon as i have the time, though.
Hm. As for the "another magic sword?" thing... what other archetypal knightly weapon is there? Should I have made it a nunchaku? Guessed so :D Go to Comment
The Pilgrim's Torch
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-05-11 06:05 PM
At last, after all the 0/5,1/5 and 2/5 things, a real jewel of an item,a magic sword that stands out from all the rest. 5/5 Go to Comment
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