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The Temple of the First Man
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EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-12 01:28 PM
BUMP? I stumbled across one of my posts in the darkness ;p #pester, pester# Go to Comment
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EchoMirage's comment on 2011-04-12 10:58 AM
I corrected all five typos pointed out by the spell checker and re-did formatting. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-02-03 08:16 PM
I love this tale. 5/5 Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2005-11-25 03:27 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2009-03-11 10:12 AM
I concur! Now for a la BUMPAGE! Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-04-12 10:50 AM
And "Pride and Prejudice" boils down to: "A young English woman from a peculiar family is pursued by an arrogant and wealthy young man." Or, "The Lord of the Rings" boils down to: "A hobbit learns that his magic ring is the key to saving Middle Earth from the Dark Lord."

So, I am not confident that I understood the point you made RGT, could you please explain? As for typos, I would rather point them out to the author rather than subtract for finding them. But thats just me:) Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-08-16 03:36 PM
Loved this one as much as I did when I first gave it HoH. It is great, really. The tale itself flows like a poem, like the currents of a stream. Only things I did not like as much were the plots, but they were good old 4.0s. Won't pull your score down for that. The tale is fantastic. Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2011-04-12 12:52 PM
Guys, we don't need this kind of behavior. It is taking us nowhere fast.

I strongly urge you to remove your vote RGTraynor, for it is blatantly obvious it was a vote made while under influence of strong negative emotions towards Echo.

You may very well honestly mean this is a substandard sub, that is your privilege, but your timing is off. Voting perfect 5.0 subs low during an ongoing dispute with its author is suspect at best. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-13 09:58 AM
5/5

Nice to have a blast from the past, even if it is from 69.

This I think is the most refreshing setting I have read thus far. Go to Comment
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Phaidros's comment on 2011-12-11 02:08 PM
I am only on this site for at most six months, but finding posts as these make my time here more than a nice diversion. The first part is almost an epic of the old, golden days. Go to Comment
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Priv8eye's comment on 2006-01-24 03:11 AM
Just came across this one today.

Lovely idea. Nicely crafted. Go to Comment
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Pariah's comment on 2006-08-16 03:55 PM
Wow... You put a lot into this. It's pretty. Go to Comment
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Spark's comment on 2006-02-14 02:53 PM
Like everyone else, I seemed to stumble across this one at random. It's clear you put a LOT of effort into this one, and it shows. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-03-30 03:57 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2009-01-15 09:29 AM
Aye, its a beaut! Go to Comment
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Nap's comment on 2006-05-13 02:55 AM
One of the most enjoyable contributions I've read thus far on this site, and certainly deserving of five stars. While I would need to adjust it to fit my homebrew mythology, I would love to find a way to include something like this in my campaign. Great job! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-02-03 05:41 PM
I agree with the others - Great Sub!!!! Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-05-01 05:56 AM


Would it be possible to toss in some line breaks between the paragraphs? Right now it is a solid wall of text and serious eye sore to read. (Will gladly read, vote and comment afterward.)

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Silveressa's comment on 2011-07-13 12:11 PM


Apologies for the late return to vote and comment until now, but this sub got lost in the shuffle.



I;m not sure I have much unique to add beyond I really enjoy this tale and the plot hooks at the end are a nice bonus and some truly unique. (Especially the child support one)



5/5 and a HOH


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nightmareshadow's comment on 2009-01-15 03:25 AM
Very nice, wonderful story. I don't know about some of the plots but this is a post to aspire to for a young strolenite like myself. Go to Comment
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