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The Saintmakers
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valadaar's comment on 2014-01-15 11:15 AM
This is a demon. Nasty, somewhat obscene.

Really, really well done.
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The Saintmakers
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-01-16 12:09 PM


A unique and surprisingly subtle demon that is likely to catch most groups by surprise, and ill prepared. One of these nasties in disguise as a rich merchant with a few indentured servants, (that loathe the merchant) being escorted by the party can lead to all sorts of misadventures. (When discovered it can also lead to some false accusations and a fun role playing scene.)



4.5 over all and +.5 for their unusual origins and the methods these demons sow the seeds of chaos. 



A small suggestion to improve the visual appeal would be to perhaps put the individual plot hook titles in bold so they each stand out a bit more?

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The Saintmakers
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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-05 04:27 PM
4.5/5

What Dossta said, and well done! Go to Comment
The Saintmakers
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slartibartfast's comment on 2010-11-21 09:03 PM


I really liked this; well-written and fun to read.  A very interesting idea; "feeding" off of people's malevolences.  It's been done before, but you've added some excellent twists in all the right places.  The plot hooks were very enticing as well.  Very well done!


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The Saintmakers
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Dossta's comment on 2010-11-22 12:37 PM


You know a submission is good when:



a)  It brings an evil smile to your face



b)  You can think of at least 10 ways to use it off the top of your head



c)  It leaves you wanting more



This is a fantastic sub on all three counts, and is very well-written to boot.  The only thing I would nitpick on is what Pieh already mentioned -- the floating body parts are not compelling enough to me.  I would probably not give them any "natural" form.  If forced to lower their assumed disguise, their appearance would shift rapidly between all of the "victims" whose thoughts they have consumed, with flashes of the Empress and Kharn- Salog reappearing most frequently throughout.  5/5


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The Saintmakers
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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-07-27 03:01 AM


I think the plot hooks are where this creature shines, the fact that they leave people who have been consumed with hatred and evil as simpletons creates a moal dilemma. I love the little backstory about "the devil who just wasn't evil enough" but wish it was linked to some other posts so I knew more about this badass woman that tore his mind asunder. 


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Scrasamax's comment on 2010-10-26 07:30 AM


Good job, i enjoyed this thoroughly. I like the gifts they can bestow, and that some are beneficial, some are merely artistic and some are perfectly demoniv.


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-25 02:11 AM
We'll be like the 30-Brigade, Cheka, piling up useful 30-whatevers in the Citadel. Get working on those 30 elvish gifts! Go to Comment
30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-27 01:04 PM
As long as the personality is pleasing to your senses, it can be all kinds of scrumptious. Go to Comment
30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-10-24 05:34 PM


Another very good 30.


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-10-25 08:00 PM


Impressive format and presentation. I enjoyed every last one of these badboys. After recently reading 30 treemen again I must say that your 30s seem to be pure quality.


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Phaidros's comment on 2011-09-15 04:47 PM
I do not use tieflings, but these descriptions are fantastic. Go to Comment
30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Murometz's comment on 2010-10-27 10:04 AM


I hate tieflings and don't use them, but i LOVE every word of this masterful post! My favorite kind of "30" compilation. Chock full of plot hooks and fascinating details, and scrumptious personalities (can personalities be scrumptious?).



 



The 'Gifts' are a great addition!



 



 



5/5


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2010-10-26 08:29 AM


This is a 5/5 if I have ever seen one.  I cannot think of anything that I would change.



Well done!


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Silveressa's comment on 2014-05-30 12:11 AM
Great stuff, really adds to Tiefling uniquity, well worth a 5/5 and Hoh! Go to Comment
30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-30 09:28 AM
5.0/5

There isn't anything 'not' to like about this sub!

Well done Echo!

I'll go +1 in favor of the Golden too. Go to Comment
30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Moonlake's comment on 2010-10-25 02:19 AM


A very coherent set of 30s (as in a set that flows well together)


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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slartibartfast's comment on 2010-10-24 05:32 PM


Awesome!  I thought all thirty (actually 31, considering the twins) were very colorful and unique.   What I particularly liked was that you were able to really capture  these characters without having to go into exhaustive detail or backstories; making them highly usable on a moment's notice.  Some of these guys'll definitely make it in my campaign.


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
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Dossta's comment on 2010-10-25 05:34 PM


I'm hard pressed to find something NOT to like about this one.  All entries are unique, coherent and succinct, and most of them provide some quest-able material.  Good show!  5/5 


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Ramhir's comment on 2010-10-24 04:01 PM
Some of these could make it into my campaign. These are quite good and show a lot of imagination. 4/5 Go to Comment
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