(Ummm, could it be that it was relased by mistake? I refer to the two abandoned titles at the end. The plot has the basics for us to fall upon and comment, just want to make sure that you really want it public. ;) ) Go to Comment
It definately has a lot going for it, very interesting concepts on race and religion. It just seems to be lacking something, though...
It's like you've got a skeleton and musculature, but there needs to be a little skin. The sub itself is a little hard to follow with the formatting. I feel like there should be a few more details about these factions as well.
Overall, a 4.0 You've definately got something, it just needs a bit more to make it great. Go to Comment
Spellcheck man! some of the words are run together and you might want to go over and compress the text a bit into more readable blocks. The idea is pretty cool, so I will wait for a brush up before I vote on this one. Go to Comment