Nice. Very full, and robust.

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Entertaining read. Good work! Go to Comment

For the Horde! WAAAAAAAARG!!!

Nice piece, and great story. Go to Comment

A Shaka-like orc. Go to Comment

Nice character, only the end is a bit unsatisfying. Go to Comment

Love the style! Well done! Go to Comment

(Ummm, could it be that it was relased by mistake? I refer to the two abandoned titles at the end. The plot has the basics for us to fall upon and comment, just want to make sure that you really want it public. ;) ) Go to Comment

It was mistakenly not marked IN WORK, yes Go to Comment

Ah, done. Enjoy. Go to Comment

BUMP!
Voting time! Go to Comment

Same. I assume it merely didn't get marked with "In Work". Go to Comment

It definately has a lot going for it, very interesting concepts on race and religion. It just seems to be lacking something, though...

It's like you've got a skeleton and musculature, but there needs to be a little skin. The sub itself is a little hard to follow with the formatting. I feel like there should be a few more details about these factions as well.

Overall, a 4.0 You've definately got something, it just needs a bit more to make it great. Go to Comment

I was just about to ask the same question. Go to Comment

hopefully, this all ties together at some point, because I'm very confused Go to Comment

This was a forum moveover, so may not have been refined for the main citadel during it's inception. Go to Comment

Only voted Go to Comment

That does not mean he/ or someone who move it, could not spell check it. Go to Comment

Spellcheck man! some of the words are run together and you might want to go over and compress the text a bit into more readable blocks. The idea is pretty cool, so I will wait for a brush up before I vote on this one. Go to Comment

They make mages burst. :) Go to Comment

I like them! Go to Comment