the herd beast resemble bulls but they emit steam from there maws and there teeth glow white hot water trickles from there throats. there horns are like spears and there hooves have spikes below and around and there made of iron
I don't have too much to say on this. I like the twist that they're actually summoning portals (which also fits well with the circles not working smaller than .5m). Go to Comment
I'll echo Moon here and say that this is an awesome post. Just to be absolute;y sure, the physical transformation that they undergoe is determined by the unique social situations surrounding them right? Man, these are the kind of warriors that just have to be pitted against the most fearsome foes that exist in fantasy RPG. Go to Comment
The Gauran Dau Society/ Organizations (Political)
(Country/ State)
I echo once again, "Woah". These men, or beasts, if you like, are well rounded, with an interesting backstory. They have more than a touch of flavor, and are also useful. Echo, if you're rusty, then I'd like to read what you wrote at the top of your game. Go to Comment
Manfred captured some of my thoughts. A long flowing story that was very well done. The interspersed quotes broke up the reading quite well and gave me some concrete sections to capture, might be too unwieldy without them. Go to Comment
In some way, she reminded me of Galadriel - not due to any similarity, but for all the contrast, and yet akin epical impact on the surroundings the 'Lady of the Forest' will have. She would prove to be an amusing benefactor, just don't forget your position, ever.
Lifeforms (Constructed) (City/ Ruin)
denari iron herd
the herd beast resemble bulls but they emit steam from there maws and there teeth glow white hot water trickles from there throats. there horns are like spears and there hooves have spikes below and around and there made of iron
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