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The Denari Iron Legion
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-04 01:40 AM
Nice. Fantasy terminators desgined to hunt down mages and wizards with no mercy. I'm sure many of Danari's nieghbours are simply dying to get their hands on a few of these war machines. Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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EchoMirage's comment on 2008-12-04 07:16 AM
Mind you that many of Denari's neighbors do have mages amongst their populace... and the Iron Legionnaires CANNOT be de-programmed from killing mages :D so, they might steal a few, even come up with a program for them, only to watch the machines romp off into the night as they seek that mage to kill. Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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EchoMirage's comment on 2011-02-07 01:47 AM
There vs their vs they're...
"There" indicates direction.
"Their" indicates possession by them.
"They're" = they are. Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-12-03 03:24 PM
Stupid mages, lol. Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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Murometz's comment on 2008-12-04 10:30 AM
I like this as well. The tale itself isn't unique, but well-told nonetheless, and the automatons well described. Specifications section is nifty too. My biggest takeaway from this is that these things just can't kill enough mages and wizards, which can only lead to fun times :) Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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valadaar's comment on 2008-12-04 10:17 AM
Quite cool Echo Mirage! Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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gulkien's comment on 2011-02-06 10:35 PM


denari iron herd



the herd beast resemble bulls but they emit steam from there maws and there teeth glow white hot  water trickles from there throats. there horns are like spears and there hooves have spikes below and around and there made of iron  


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Radiance Unlimited
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Country/ State)
Cheka Man's comment on 2008-11-18 12:48 PM
A useful but dangerous power source. 5/5 Go to Comment
Radiance Unlimited
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Chaosmark's comment on 2008-11-18 08:19 PM
I don't have too much to say on this. I like the twist that they're actually summoning portals (which also fits well with the circles not working smaller than .5m). Go to Comment
Radiance Unlimited
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valadaar's comment on 2008-11-19 10:06 AM
Another excellent powersource for our steampunk creations!

Cool, though you need to split up your freetexts with commas. Might not use quite so many. Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
Strolen's comment on 2008-10-27 09:17 PM
Congratulations to Echo for this second place quest winner!! Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
Strolen's comment on 2008-08-24 08:36 PM
That is some twisted milk!

The explanation of why the tower was built so oddly was very inspirational as well. Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2008-08-13 09:21 PM
I stand in awe of this. Worlds better than my Muggar. Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
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Maggot's comment on 2008-08-14 03:34 AM
I will be voting for this without doubt when the judging for the quest finally commences. Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
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EchoMirage's comment on 2008-08-13 06:49 PM
I will edit this a little in the morning. But! Enjoy! Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2008-08-14 09:59 AM
This deserves first place. 5/5 Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-08-14 03:43 AM
Wow... I am stunned. This sucked me right in. My kind of submission Echo. Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
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Murometz's comment on 2008-09-01 01:10 PM
Good writing, great villain, and as Mike said, I was sucked right into this tale! Quite atmospheric. Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
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valadaar's comment on 2008-10-28 10:42 AM
Woah dude!

Nicely done - congrats on quest! Go to Comment
Belsethra, the Mother of Sin
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-10-31 02:39 PM
Good one, Echo. Just the title "Mother of Sin" gives me shivers... Top-notch in originality and structure, I especially like the "commentary" boxes.

/David Go to Comment
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