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Scorpio 2.4 Hovertank
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Murometz's comment on 2009-03-25 10:27 AM
Yeah, another good one. I can't write these types of subs, so have great respect for them. Another one for my 'tech stuff' gm binder. Go to Comment
Scorpio 2.4 Hovertank
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axlerowes's comment on 2009-03-23 07:16 PM
So nothing new here really, but a great write up and an entertaining read. I like the detail you placed into how difficult the stinger/scorpio is to operate.

In game terms how do you bring those difficulties in piloting to the table top? Go to Comment
Scorpio 2.4 Hovertank
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axlerowes's comment on 2009-04-17 09:42 PM
I know posting stats is faux pas around here, but for some of the tech game stuff I wouldn't mind seeing some of the stats. Not to replace the post, but in addition to the post. Go to Comment
Scorpio 2.4 Hovertank
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valadaar's comment on 2009-03-25 10:08 AM
A great tank with character! This is really well done. Go to Comment
Scorpio 2.4 Hovertank
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Nocontrivedname's comment on 2009-03-23 09:22 PM
Hey all,

Wouldn't you be compensating for something by putting a big gun on your tank? I mean this whole post seems to be a dick metaphor, this is a huge ram rod with a wam-bam attitude. No, this whole post is about one guys desire to "give it" to someone quickly and get out of there. You should rename the tank the bachelor.

Great work 5/5

NCN Go to Comment
Scorpio 2.4 Hovertank
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Nocontrivedname's comment on 2009-03-23 10:45 PM
"Any pretense at being someone's ego booster is blown when one observes the (in comparison) huge particle projector cannon which is as long as the hovertank itself, mounted on a rotating platform"

hey man he opened the door. Go to Comment
Lady Argent
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Strolen's comment on 2009-04-26 03:20 PM
Congratulations to you for this second place winning submission in Expand-a-30 Quest!! Go to Comment
Lady Argent
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-03-02 03:13 PM
Very nice expansion Echo, I approve! Go to Comment
Lady Argent
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Cheka Man's comment on 2009-02-26 06:37 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lady Argent
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2009-03-01 10:57 AM
I dont't have much to add to this, except that it has the echo flair and is all in all a good submission. Go to Comment
Lady Argent
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valadaar's comment on 2009-02-26 06:30 PM
Yes, a very good expansion indeed! The reference to the demon she absorbed is there - but it is not obvious as first. Perhaps in the original reference to Akhazereth the Blade you could elaborate on the fact he was a demon. Demons do not have a monopoly on possession. Go to Comment
Lady Argent
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angryscotsman93's comment on 2009-03-01 12:52 AM
Heh heh heh, her mercenary character reminds me of the character Nobby from Discworld. During his career in the armies of the world, generals on either side could tell how the battle was going based on what uniform Nobby was wearing at the time. So, in that sense, she's like Nobby- except with a sense of decency. Go to Comment
Lady Argent
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Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-26 05:34 PM
Compliments on the completeness of the expansion.
A bit of a loose end with respect to "the demon she absorbed" part as I see it but doesn't detract from the quality of this piece. In fact, I much prefer the current length. Go to Comment
Lady Argent
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Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-26 07:06 PM
Apology to the author for making the unsubstantiated comment on the demon part, I wasn't reading things probably. I thought the sentence read "Akhazareth the Blade (AB) tried to possess the duchy" so thought AB is a person. Didn't realise that until valadaar pointed it out. Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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Kassil's comment on 2008-12-05 06:22 PM
I imagine the farther reaches of the world have some rather interesting stories of murderous iron daemons... And I can only imagine what must go through the mind of some hapless traveling spellcaster when he encounters one of these things and suddenly finds it marching toward him with weapons deployed.

How would they react to a thaumavore? Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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Pieh's comment on 2011-02-07 04:00 PM


Very fun submission.



I think the programming methods with the "Ether Crystal Resonance Array" and "Ether-pods" was interesting, even if it felt somewhat above my head. I would love to see a submission all about these "Ether-pods" and what they can do with the "ECRA," because I'm not sure I'm entirely getting how they're suppose to work, and I think much has been left unsaid.


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The Denari Iron Legion
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Maggot's comment on 2008-12-04 01:40 AM
Nice. Fantasy terminators desgined to hunt down mages and wizards with no mercy. I'm sure many of Danari's nieghbours are simply dying to get their hands on a few of these war machines. Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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EchoMirage's comment on 2008-12-04 07:16 AM
Mind you that many of Denari's neighbors do have mages amongst their populace... and the Iron Legionnaires CANNOT be de-programmed from killing mages :D so, they might steal a few, even come up with a program for them, only to watch the machines romp off into the night as they seek that mage to kill. Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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EchoMirage's comment on 2011-02-07 01:47 AM
There vs their vs they're...
"There" indicates direction.
"Their" indicates possession by them.
"They're" = they are. Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-12-03 03:24 PM
Stupid mages, lol. Go to Comment
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