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Unthar, the Sun of the Dead
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Kassy's comment on 2013-06-12 07:39 AM
4.5/5

Just when you think you've read some of the most mind-bending material here, more are added.

Well done Echo :) Go to Comment
Unthar, the Sun of the Dead
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Nafar's comment on 2010-10-01 09:43 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Unthar, the Sun of the Dead
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Forganthus's comment on 2011-09-12 08:50 PM


I like the sun.  Everyone likes the sun.  It'd be a pretty cool centerpiece for any campaign.  Or dinner table.



I'm left wondering, though, at the nature of Unthar.  He/It is a being of godlike power and sentience, but all of his ambitions? seem to resemble the motivations of a gerbil I used to have: escape my cage, run around for a bit, and then get caught and put back in.



I'm not bothered by it.  Gods are supposed to be inscrutible, sometimes.  But the sub leaves more room for development, which I am thankful for.



Maybe Unthar actually has the mind of a gerbil?  Maybe he's friendly, naive, and just wants to hang out with his siblings?  Or maybe he's plotting thier murder (I would like to see the suns fight in the sky, please)?


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Unthar, the Sun of the Dead
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Dossta's comment on 2010-10-04 02:48 PM
Stunning. Harull would make a great campaign Boss, especially if one of the PCs or someone close to them was a sunchild. Though the sunchildren are intriguing and compelling enough to provide several adventures' worth of material. Well done! 5/5 Go to Comment
Unthar, the Sun of the Dead
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Dossta's comment on 2011-09-13 03:13 PM
Have an xp for the "mind of a gerbil" comment. A friendly, naive, gerbil-like deity whose mere presence causes untold catastrophe makes me laugh. Go to Comment
Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Strolen's comment on 2011-02-27 05:55 AM
Update: Updated freetext Go to Comment
Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-07-22 04:04 PM
You know, I wonder why nobody bothers to comment as well. I know she's not perfect, and input would be welcome. Go to Comment
Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2015-02-16 06:35 AM
I swayed back and forth as I read this submission. First and foremost, the visual that was created before my inner eye as you described her on her carriage, carried by servants and delivering the will of the emperor to the people was superb.

Her birth was another stunning visual.

Yes, she seems human in her desire, almost mundane, but I fail to see why she would love or respect the emperor after he threw her to his soldiers. It does not seem logical.

As a visual representation, and a bringer of goose bumps, she is great.

Her personal story I find less useful in a roleplaying setting. Most of all because she can attain so little, and the amusement her struggles will bring stand in stark contrast to the respect she demands as the voice of the emperor.

4.0 / 5.0

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Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
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Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 02:46 PM
She's nice and creepy, but very human. Val's right, there's some great imagery here, and you really get a feel for who she is emotionally. I think it's great. Go to Comment
Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
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valadaar's comment on 2010-07-15 07:51 PM
Not sure why no comments, but this is pretty darn cool. The visuals are excellent. The origin makes is a bit of work to customize, but I think she's worth the effort.

Nicely done! Go to Comment
Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
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Aramax's comment on 2015-02-16 09:34 AM
5/5 Simply magnificent! Go to Comment
Farrach, Flamekin
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manfred's comment on 2009-11-08 09:18 AM
A silly little thing, and a good foil for many a knightly fantasy. Like the dirty old snoop! Wonder how often someone throws water in his face? Go to Comment
Farrach, Flamekin
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Pieh's comment on 2009-11-14 08:30 AM
Very cute and a lot of fun to read. This is the kind of thing I really like to use in my games. Well done. Go to Comment
Farrach, Flamekin
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-11-15 08:52 AM
I found the poetry to be good, and reading it aloud demonstrates the time and effort that went into the writing. I like Farrach, and think he could be used in anything from a comic themed light hearted adventure to something dark and gritty, and heaven help someone who did a Call of Chthulu themed swords and sorcery game with Farrach being the chaotic servant of some alien horror Go to Comment
Farrach, Flamekin
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EchoMirage's comment on 2009-11-10 06:16 AM
Not often enough, according to some. Go to Comment
Farrach, Flamekin
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Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-06 04:51 PM
A good addition to most roleplays. 5/5 Go to Comment
Farrach, Flamekin
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Murometz's comment on 2009-11-16 11:53 PM
Quite entertaining! I loved the poetry bit! Wish i wrote it. I'd use him with that 'dark twist' plotline you suggest.

Had to look up Hebephrenic, which was fun. Go to Comment
Farrach, Flamekin
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valadaar's comment on 2009-11-16 07:15 PM
Very good! This is very well written and is something I want to use.

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The Ecto-Burner
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-11-04 12:26 AM
Now this is cool, nothing quite like a flaming spectre to ruin your day, and add in beaurocratic stockpiling and missed maintenance, and a brilliant mad nutter... What's not to like? Go to Comment
The Ecto-Burner
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Cheka Man's comment on 2009-10-28 06:28 PM
Who ya gonna call? 5/5 for this. Go to Comment
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