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The Ecto-Burner
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valadaar's comment on 2009-11-07 08:13 PM
Really bloody good my good sir!

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The Ecto-Burner
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Lockheed's comment on 2009-11-03 04:01 PM
I'm of two minds about this one. Much of the description and writing style is really awesome and enjoyable. And the weapon shoots flaming ghosts at people. Which is sweet. Thats the good stuff.

On the other hand, some of your stylistic choices don't fit well with the piece, like all the pseudo-biblical "many were his factories" bits. Its a touch on the purple side, and seems out of place. It also feels goofy and ghostbusters in some places but not in others, which makes the goofiness feel strange and uncomfortable. Its like you weren't sure wether to make the thing hilarious and fun, the type of thing to make PCs snort with glee as they blast baddies with it or solemn and cool, the type of thing that makes a PC feel like a total badass.

I really like the idea though, and a "precursor technology" version is sure to find its way into an upcoming campaign. Go to Comment
The Ecto-Burner
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Robopoop's comment on 2009-10-28 10:45 PM
Very interesting weapon that can quite easily corner the market. I can picture seeing it in a d20 game too. How about adding a few rival companies who produce their own version of the weapon? Go to Comment
The Ecto-Burner
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hylandpad's comment on 2011-10-23 01:31 PM


I hear the Ghostbusters theme song playing in the background. And that's a good thing. steampunk/clockpunk themed ghostbusters spring into my brain.



Have a five for a new take on an old favorite (of mine.) An old dog with some radical new tricks.



Now lets throw Bill Murray in some chainmail and go demon-busting.


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30 Treemen
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manfred's comment on 2009-04-12 02:41 AM
No hurrying has paid off and I could savor parts of it over several days. Great work!

What I like is, though they may be solitary, you get a feel of the community of these long-living creatures. At times it felt almost officious, which didn't feel quite right, but all other elements are in sync. All the expected ones and all the exceptions, they are brief and full of substance. Me likey. Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-04-14 03:28 PM
You beat me to it, I've got a 30 Treefolk sitting in work for months and months now that just refuses to be finished. Kudos Echo, I like these fellows Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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EchoMirage's comment on 2009-04-11 06:17 AM
I actually did google and wikipedia research for those... took the better of four mornings. Really, don't hurry. Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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EchoMirage's comment on 2011-10-28 05:40 AM


Scrasamax has some nice treemen too!



Go check them out.



http://strolen.com/viewing/Operation_CWAL


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30 Treemen
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Cheka Man's comment on 2009-04-09 12:56 PM
A great submission from you, each one unique. Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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Cheka Man's comment on 2009-04-10 08:33 PM
I wish I could do a 30 as good as yours. Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2009-04-14 02:23 PM
Sweet work! Like Manfred I have enjoyed this during the span of several days. It is not always in line with my vision of treemen which would be darker and more alien. But it is a well presented, usable and well written submission and we don't have too many of those these days!

Bravo sir. Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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Murometz's comment on 2009-10-05 03:25 PM
Excellent! Each one tickles the imagination. An awesome resource. Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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valadaar's comment on 2009-04-09 01:38 PM
I agree with Cheka here. This is how I like the 30's - each rich with potential. I know this is a step beyond the original definition of the 30s, but I like these better.

Well done Echo! Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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valadaar's comment on 2009-04-10 08:54 PM
Take your time Cheka. Don't rush them. Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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sverigesson's comment on 2009-04-10 08:15 PM
This is fantastic. Definitely going to inspire me to use tree people in anything I write. And not the tired, cliched old tree people, but really putting some character into them! Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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klauston's comment on 2009-04-12 01:24 AM
Awesome... Deserves a Golden Submission Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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DrTurtlesse's comment on 2009-05-17 11:35 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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Dossta's comment on 2010-10-05 01:38 PM
There are some real gems here. I especially love 10, 21 and 26. 5/5! Go to Comment
30 Treemen
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CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-11-13 11:44 AM
love stuff like this Go to Comment
Pinker and Strotz
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Regional)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2009-05-17 11:15 AM
Two of Pinker's research assistants are working on ways to make the effect switch off after three days of continuous use or project a warning to others that the ring bearer may be infectious. Go to Comment
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