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The Mausoleum
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MoonHunter's comment on 2007-08-03 11:39 AM
This is so very wrong, yet so very good. I like the existing details and the various uses (though I would think the nobles would not pile out early...) It would of liked more "flavor details" about the location.

I would of made Darius his own submission (he would be a good alternate necromancer) or stub. Or, the NPCs could be linked stubs. These people have other applications. Go to Comment
The Mausoleum
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MoonHunter's comment on 2007-08-05 02:02 AM
The two big advantage of the stubs is the hypertext function and the building add.

Hypertext function is much what it says, it is additional information that is useful, but would clutter up your submission if you had to explain it right there. If you are going to use the same "little bit" of information in more than one submission, it is more efficient and asthetically functional to use a stub for hyperlink purposes.

The Building function allows you to take existing small pieces of work and casually add them to other subs. For example Rydlin Steel from http://www.strolen.com/content.php?node=2975 could easily be incorporated in yours or anyones work. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2007-08-07 02:55 PM
and cue the crowd clapping Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-08-03 11:55 PM
What Manfred said! Go to Comment
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2007-08-03 01:16 PM
Okay, I haven't been around the Version 2.0 Citadel long enough. What exactly is a stub? Go to Comment
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2007-08-04 08:12 PM
Thank you. That's a big help. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-08-07 01:27 PM
Just noticed the stub additions. Well done, Dragonlordmax! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-08-03 01:43 PM
Nice detail. Always like an inn with blurbs on its patrons. Nicely done. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-08-02 07:38 PM
woot! A detailed inn.

link to the Establishments and/or Taverns scrolls! be back later to review fully. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-08-08 01:53 PM
added to Spark's Tavern scroll Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-06-11 07:53 PM
This is quite good, and another take on the necromancer.

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Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 03:52 PM
I am definately using this is my next game. It fits the feel I am going for perfectly. Go to Comment
The Mausoleum
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Fallen Angel's comment on 2009-07-14 02:37 AM
Your characters are missing, or misplaced. Do please clean it up.

I like it, even without the characters. Take 3.5. Go to Comment
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klauston's comment on 2009-02-01 12:27 PM
I like this tavern. A very suitable locale for a budding necromancer whose skill is put to good use after hours. I like the additional NPC's used to flesh out the tavern too. 5/5 Go to Comment
30 Musicians
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manfred's comment on 2010-05-20 04:33 PM
This submission has been featured on Roleplayingtips.com, Issue 488. Congratulations to the author - may he be celebrated in song for ages!

See it here.
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30 Musicians
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MoonHunter's comment on 2007-07-18 01:27 AM
Adding the 30 freetext and adding it to the codex for you.

A good idea, but there is not much meat to this one. It does not catch my interest. I have to do more work to make these useful for me. But others milage may vary. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-07-18 02:30 AM
This makes me think of a plate of buffalo wings, tasty and good, but lacking in substance. Nice work and some solid angles on the overlooked musician. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-07-17 06:00 PM
Delightful *imagines them playing in an orchestra* Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-07-19 11:18 AM
I kinda like this one. 30 Musicians is a good idea!

Like Moon and Scras though, i was hoping for a little more intricacy with the musical theme in this one. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2014-07-18 09:27 AM
A good 30, not as deep as some but still very usable.

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