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The Princesses Nemithia
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Murometz's comment on 2009-01-25 12:09 PM
BUMP. A well-conceived, well-nuanced plot! A pleasure to read. Will be used! Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
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valadaar's comment on 2007-09-24 09:56 AM
Wow!

Truely impressive - I think this is your best so far! Nicely done! Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-09-24 12:02 AM
(I had no idea that I was issuing a call to arms... Princesses just seemed a worthwhile Freetext)

This is an excellent plot, with a variety of political repercussions and different ways it could be explored by the PCs. Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
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dark_dragon's comment on 2007-09-23 04:48 PM
very cool! and also very creepy. having you daughter grow up to be your old GF is scary on its own, but having your entire kingdom like this would probably send you insane. the king would probably be on the edge of sanity when the PCs intervene. ohhhh, goodies... and if you include cheka's suggestion, you could also have a kingdom ripe for the taking by power hungry PCs... Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
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Stomphoof's comment on 2007-09-24 10:53 AM
I like this, ALOT. I think I am gonna use this with my current game that I just started....perhaps linking it to this bizarre idol I am gonna have my PC's find. This will lead them into dungeon crawls, research, ALL sorts of things.

Amazing. This, plus my OTHER plot line, will make for a VERY interesting game.

Just gotta modify it a bit, to fit the world, and BAM, there I go. Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
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Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 03:49 PM
Kind of creepy when I put more thought into this, well done for creeping me out. Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
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Silveressa's comment on 2008-10-03 04:39 AM
Very impressive sub, and one I;d nominate for a golden sub if I could.

An interesting twist would be to do a campaign with the char being a "Nemithia" whose mother fled with her from the kingdom soon after she was born, thus making her a unknowing pawn of forced beyond her comprehension. (struggling to resist possession by the evil spirit while finding the reason behind this strange creeping possession/haunting and how to put a stop to it would make for a fun campaign.

5/5 Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
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sverigesson's comment on 2008-10-02 07:44 PM
This is a great idea. Wish it had been mine! Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
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Dossta's comment on 2010-10-27 01:57 PM


. . . What he said.  Also, I will be trying to use this soon -- just need to adapt it a bit.  I like Silveressa's idea as well.


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Tallyorans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
manfred's comment on 2007-09-22 03:12 PM
Nice update! Go to Comment
Tallyorans
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manfred's comment on 2007-09-21 11:40 AM
I like how the cold-blooded nature distorted their development - along with the solution. A few more comments:

- I find the concept of a gas giant concentrating sunlight on another planet hard to accept... it would have to be a truly unique composition of gases indeed; a strange kind of atmosphere; and a strong relation between the positions of the sun, the gas giant, and the planet (Lagrange points would do the trick). But, it is probably not impossible, and there are other ways a planet could gain a Heat Zone, so let's keep it.

- Weather is made in a large part by differences in temperature. So if there are radically different regions, like on this planet, there will be quite some exchange of air between them. Methinks you should add some really strong weather to this world.

- How is Tallis actually made? The exact process is not important, but it seems that it can be only produced on their homeworld. No matter how difficult it is, there will be a) attempts to reproduce it, and b) replacement drugs, experimental even.

Still a good submission, these fellows have some colour. Go to Comment
Tallyorans
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dark_dragon's comment on 2007-09-22 07:39 AM
Me likes too. I agree about the weather also. Good idea, and worthwhile execution. Somewhat reminded of Dune, but the reptillian take and the pirating show this is original. And the implementation of the suggestions answers some questions. A well deserved 4/5! Good one. Go to Comment
Tallyorans
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Stomphoof's comment on 2007-10-05 09:54 AM
*thumbs up* Go to Comment
Tallyorans
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MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-09 08:26 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tallyorans
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-09-09 07:24 AM


The little details really made this sub for me, like how the drug pushers take pride in their stuff, in a kind of Coca-cola-ish way. And how like the introduction of the car, the side effects are ignored for the greater gain. Plus, a viable explanation for humanoid reptilian mammaries, in fact I might use that for some of my dragonborn.

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The Tomb of Agellar
Dungeons  (Plains)   (Rooms/ Halls)
manfred's comment on 2007-09-09 01:59 PM
Nice! I admit that I have been surprised - and had to laugh. Everything seems to fit in this dungeon. Great work! Go to Comment
The Tomb of Agellar
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-09-11 02:37 AM
Being quite fond of horses, I found the twist at the end of this quest to be the best part. The rest of the submission is good solid tomb-raiding.

+.5 for the horsey armor. Go to Comment
The Tomb of Agellar
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-09-14 09:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Tomb of Agellar
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-09-10 06:03 PM
I could have SWORN I voted on this earlier today!

Anyhow: I like it. Nothing much to say really, except that I love the twists. Also it reminds me somewhat of Caligula, that old Roman dog. Feels nice to say something that would have cost me my head 2000 years ago :) Go to Comment
The Tomb of Agellar
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2007-09-07 12:24 PM
Updated: Well, when I first submitted this into In Work, I didn't nominate it as a Quest entry, but it obviously is intended to be one. Is there a way that I can make it so? Go to Comment
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