Ooo... I have a penchant for insane cults, and I like the way their precognition works. Honestly, I really can't think of anything to add to this. (Note to self, may have at last found a use for The World's Largest Dungeon...) Go to Comment
I wasn't overwhelmed when I started reading, but by the time that I reached the dance competition, I was impressed. You found an original way to approach the "tough bar full of tough guys" meme, and for that I congratulate you.
At last, I have a way to punish the player I have that invariably takes "Perform: Dance" as one of his skills and breaks into a jig at the slightest provocation. Go to Comment