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Kesthor, the Shattered Atheneum
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Murometz's comment on 2007-10-02 08:51 PM
Great location, good tale, interesting twists. Lots of room for adventure. Well done! Go to Comment
Kesthor, the Shattered Atheneum
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valadaar's comment on 2007-10-03 11:02 AM
Truely awesome indeed! This could easily become a cornerstone plot for a campaign! Go to Comment
Kesthor, the Shattered Atheneum
Locations  (Ruins)   (Underground)
Wulfhere's comment on 2007-10-02 05:27 PM
Excellent work! A mysterious library of forgotten lore, a sisterhood with powers strange and uncanny, and a sinister demon driving the daughters of prophecy to madness!

That's one heck of a library! Go to Comment
Kesthor, the Shattered Atheneum
Locations  (Ruins)   (Underground)
dark_dragon's comment on 2007-10-03 05:05 AM
Excellent! Will definitely use. The twist on the demon writing in the Library's books is ace! He basically writes straight into their subconscious. Very cool and creepy. Go to Comment
Kesthor, the Shattered Atheneum
Locations  (Ruins)   (Underground)
Thewizard63's comment on 2007-10-03 03:36 PM
Evocative, and campaign worthy Go to Comment
Kesthor, the Shattered Atheneum
Locations  (Ruins)   (Underground)
Stomphoof's comment on 2007-10-02 05:13 PM
I was looking for a good dungeon to use as a search for information..

And this covers it! NICE JOB! 5 stars! :)

I totally missed the demon bit.. Holy cow this fits perfectly into my current adventure/plot line.

Must...favorites...sub! Go to Comment
The Sledge
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
manfred's comment on 2007-09-27 05:34 PM
This IS actually funny! And very feasible. And original, as mentioned.

(Aside: and you know, with some work could this be turned into a 'troll bar' scenario for us fantasy-ists.)


Great submission, DLM. You made me smirk through the whole thing.You made me smirk through the whole thing. Go to Comment
The Sledge
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-09-27 03:23 AM
I LOVE IT, SERIOUSLY, I LOVE IT.
It's simultaneously funny, cool, and very original, and I'm definitely gonna' work it into my next sci-fi style game somehow. Two thumbs up. Go to Comment
The Sledge
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Cheka Man's comment on 2007-09-26 11:21 PM
I like it. Go to Comment
The Sledge
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valadaar's comment on 2007-09-28 03:21 PM
Nicely done indeed! I love it!

Am thinking Stainless Steel Rat for some reason... Go to Comment
The Sledge
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Wulfhere's comment on 2007-09-27 01:47 AM
I wasn't overwhelmed when I started reading, but by the time that I reached the dance competition, I was impressed. You found an original way to approach the "tough bar full of tough guys" meme, and for that I congratulate you.

At last, I have a way to punish the player I have that invariably takes "Perform: Dance" as one of his skills and breaks into a jig at the slightest provocation. Go to Comment
The Sledge
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Stomphoof's comment on 2007-10-01 12:07 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Sledge
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kaos2571's comment on 2007-09-26 10:05 PM
Interesting, not my flavor, but nice. Go to Comment
The Sledge
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Victor-N's comment on 2007-10-02 04:50 PM
I agree with penguin; funny, cool and very original. I like it. Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2007-10-14 12:45 AM
Or maybe if several reach maturity they'll all collaborate to seize the throne. Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
manfred's comment on 2007-09-23 06:18 PM
Whoa. Now this is a mind-blowing plot. Kudos for thinking of such a story.


You can bet the king won't be loved, the more babies he has killed, the more precarious will be his situation. You can expect people to flee his kingdom, and others scheming to overthrow him. Those, who know of the curse (and that knowledge will spread), will have some hard choices indeed. Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
manfred's comment on 2008-10-02 09:51 AM
So??? How did it work out? Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2007-09-26 02:00 PM
Wow, I really like this. Definitely gets the "Wish I'd Thought of That" award. So much possibility for havoc, so much fun. Intrigue and madness with a pretty nifty twist. I'm going to have to find a way to use it, I think.

It's entirely possible as a Nemithia grows to maturity, fewer new ones will be born. After all, she's interested in the throne, not in competing with herself. I also have to wonder... did she arrange for her husband to become king? Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
MoonHunter's comment on 2007-09-24 03:35 PM
An incredible piece with a great deal of detail. It has history. It has drama. It has dozens of ways to be plugged into a campaign. A truly worthy piece. Go to Comment
The Princesses Nemithia
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-09-24 02:41 AM
As a strong proponent of the Princess freetext, this submission just blows me away. I like the mechanics behind how the similar births and and slow change to a similar form is explained, as well as the social responce to the king getting batty and kill-happy. Very well done! Go to Comment
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