Intriguing. The background holds little surprise, but the current situation has potential. Let me throw one question that seems to be unanswered: Why is it prison wardens?
One thing may be his job, but I'd like to think that it was a choice on his part. After all, if a prison warden is corrupt, it will sooner or later show. Also, they can learn much from the best sources on the crimes and immoralities of those in power, and sometimes can nudge their prisoners on a useful path...
It's not unknown in real life for prisoners to become guards. It happened in the Nazi system (the "kapos") and in the Soviet Gulag system as well. And there used to be US prisons that used "trusties" as guards until they were shut down because of gross abuse. Go to Comment
Why would a prisoner (accused of murder) become a guard? Why not just escape? What kind of "odd jobs" can a prisoner do to earn money from guards? Alot of this doesn't make much sense. I could see him bribing the guards to leave a gate or two open, but that is about it. Go to Comment
I like weapons of repute with minimal to no magic. In Runebearer ( www.runebearer.com / http://www.cs.cmu.edu/~tpope/bostonia/frameset.html and a shout out to Chris Magoun who is a member here), weapons gain in power as their stories/ legends grow and wielders learn more of the item's history.
However spellish magic is not required. It is all about the reputation here. And that can be the greatest magic of all. Added to Interesting Weapons- Non-Magic While it is not a "class of weapons" as normally is the case for that submission, it is clearly appropriate.
This weapon, even if you don't use it directly, serves as a great example for your own world. It shows the power of reputation. Go to Comment
Finally got the idea for an orcish currency:
A cold-hammered piece of raw iron, resembling some kind of a dagger. The Dagger is easy to carry, hard to forge, may be used as a crude weapon in case of emergency AND the iron being a valuable resource... may be used directly for weapon-making. May be carried openly on the belt of a mighty Orc. A new insult: 'to beat someone with someones money' . Self-explanatory.
Ideas ( System ) | August 15, 2002 |