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The Hek
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2006-07-25 09:11 AM
Now that is simply bizarre – I love it – 5/5 Go to Comment
The Hek
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Pariah's comment on 2006-07-24 01:30 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Spark's comment on 2006-08-13 11:32 PM
VERY cool idea. For some reason it even feels a little Asimov-ish to me, but I don't know why. I always love those high-tech ancients, and ditto to what the others said about creating a wonderfully unique and exotic creature. Brings a welcome splash of creativity into any dull world! Go to Comment
The Hek
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-23 07:56 PM
Hmmmm, a cyborg-submersible-Nemo-UFO-type-of-thingy. Ofcourse! Why didnt I think of that! :P A little competition for the The Characon

Visual Recorders-Nice! Go to Comment
The Hek
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Murometz's comment on 2007-12-13 04:56 PM
Bumping this perverse, bizarre, and nifty thingy :) Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 10:03 PM
I love this - so odd and strange. We should do this again. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Strolen's comment on 2009-08-23 09:16 PM
Update: Updated graphic Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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manfred's comment on 2006-07-20 03:53 AM
Watch out - the pirates rise in the Citadel!

A classical plot with many juicy details. Entertaining, and the picture gets the feel of the place nicely. Good work. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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manfred's comment on 2007-10-02 04:01 PM
BUMP for another dungeon of some notoriety (and also featuring an image). Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-07-21 05:59 PM
Wow. This is awesome. It's one of those "Congratulations! You're screwed!" that repeats itself about six times. So many plot twists are possible, and there are a lot of ways that this can be used. Nifty. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-20 01:31 AM
Corvorane's Cave
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-20 10:44 AM
Two paws up. A nice brief history, good characterization, and a lot of potential. Really, you can do no better for a good adventure not involved in "saving the X".

The Image helps "sell" the piece. However, it also interferes with the text some. Can we reformat the post so the image is first and the text follows. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-07-20 03:32 AM
A thoroughly enjoyable post - Keep up the good work! Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-07-20 12:55 AM
Lets see, pirates, a nest of hidden treasure, a huge betrayal, a civil war, a giant albino crocodile, cowards, crabs, cannibalism, and a fight scene in a half flooded treasuse room. Everything looks to be in perfect shape here. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-20 01:35 PM
Yo ho ho and 5/5 points! Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-07-23 06:26 AM
As have been said it is a classical plot and probably one that the elder GMs here have tried variants of. Jules Verne and his Captain Nemo as well as the recent Pirates of the Caribbean films do come to mind.

As for the dungeon itself: It is obvious that you put much labour into this. It is well written and very interesting at times. However I cannot escape that feeling of deja-vu. It all feels so predictable... A series of fights so the party can get treasure. A big nasty Pirate Captain and his pet Crocodiles.

Regardless: You have done well and the Citadellians obviously cherish your work. Congratulations! Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-07-26 05:10 AM
As such it excels! My bet is that this will give you one very good evening with the crew :) Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-07-23 10:10 AM
Not much to say that already hasn't been said. Entertaining all around. Good job. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Pariah's comment on 2006-07-20 09:34 PM
Yeah!!! New AND improved, without that sentance contradicting itself. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Dozus's comment on 2006-07-20 01:39 AM
Updated: Adjusted a few measurements and corrected a grammatical error. Go to Comment
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