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Corvorane's Cave
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-07-26 05:10 AM
As such it excels! My bet is that this will give you one very good evening with the crew :) Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-07-23 10:10 AM
Not much to say that already hasn't been said. Entertaining all around. Good job. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Pariah's comment on 2006-07-20 09:34 PM
Yeah!!! New AND improved, without that sentance contradicting itself. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Dozus's comment on 2006-07-20 01:39 AM
Updated: Adjusted a few measurements and corrected a grammatical error. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Dozus's comment on 2006-07-20 12:45 PM
Yes, we certainly can. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Dozus's comment on 2006-07-24 04:36 PM
Deja-vu can't be helped. It's an olde skool plot that kinda follows a predictable formula. I tried to punch it up with the mad prisoners and Threll the thief, but it's mainly meant to be a well-done classic dungeon. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-20 09:42 AM
hmmm..you were holding back in chat a bit werent you?..:P

This is wonderful!! Great atmosphere, juicy details, and not a "high-level" world-changing adventure, but an old-fashioned "low-level" yarn, high on imagery and descriptions!

Thumbs all the way up! Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-10 12:11 PM
Most Piratical indeed - nice adjective Lockheed. Though the practicality of having so many prisoners seems off, it delivers a cool scene.

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Corvorane's Cave
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Lanfear57's comment on 2008-01-12 07:09 PM
Kudos, I like, I'm going to use this in a campaign I'm running this coming semester ^_^ Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
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Lockheed's comment on 2009-10-24 12:03 AM
Cool! Exactly the kind of Piratical adventure I've been looking for. Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2009-02-08 03:08 AM
my name is josias and i really enjoyed this story.. would like to see more Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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manfred's comment on 2006-07-13 03:26 AM
Cute, and sad NPC at once. Good work! Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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Alec_Shadowkin's comment on 2006-07-12 08:07 PM
I think this is an extremely interesting character with a great deal of utility as an NPC. A miriad of uses come to mind just offhand and the proposed adventure is a good one. Nice job! Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-12 10:49 PM
Poor him. 5/5 Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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Pariah's comment on 2006-07-12 10:02 PM
Oww. Those poor sword swallowers, having that gag reflex kick in right when it gets down to the bottom. It hurts just to think about. Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-12 10:30 PM
Great mythology! The Sword of Water cutting Josias' ties to his god, the sword-swallowers, matches not lighting, and Old Debts...very nice work!

Oh and you feel for the guy Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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valadaar's comment on 2014-03-19 11:56 AM
A neat NPC that could be worked into the tapestry of one's world. Adjust the gods as needed.

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Sekkitan blood diamonds
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
manfred's comment on 2006-06-30 04:42 AM
Surely there will be legends of curses connected to precious stones - but there are always some.

I definitively like the deity, and the curse that it sent on enemies of ist people (note that the curse is not even terribly powerful, it may be more of a minor spirit, than a true deity). Those that wish to remove the curse have to destroy, or sacrifice all the diamonds (it is not easy to part with them though), or perhaps help the Sekkitans to reclaim their island and continue their life. An alternative would be to find through research the night when the curse strikes, and simply avoid looking at it (that may be hard too - human curiosity and love for the diamond are hard to overcome).

A blood diamond could even bring luck to a Sekkitan, if it is held for the purpose of later sacrifice.


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Sekkitan blood diamonds
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-06-29 07:07 PM
Nifty idea. I like the description of the history of the diamonds. I also like the curse. These diamonds could make a nifty tool for assassination, assuming someone knew the secret. And sooner or later, everyone is going to forget Seenu, so no one will have a clue what's going on. Go to Comment
Sekkitan blood diamonds
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-30 09:44 AM
Let me join the cavalcade of praise here. Nicely executed, good explanation, good hooks, and something for the unwary. Really a great piece. Go to Comment
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