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Corvorane's Cave
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-20 12:31 AM
Corvorane's Cave
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-20 09:44 AM
Two paws up. A nice brief history, good characterization, and a lot of potential. Really, you can do no better for a good adventure not involved in "saving the X".

The Image helps "sell" the piece. However, it also interferes with the text some. Can we reformat the post so the image is first and the text follows. Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-07-20 02:32 AM
A thoroughly enjoyable post - Keep up the good work! Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-07-19 11:55 PM
Lets see, pirates, a nest of hidden treasure, a huge betrayal, a civil war, a giant albino crocodile, cowards, crabs, cannibalism, and a fight scene in a half flooded treasuse room. Everything looks to be in perfect shape here. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-20 12:35 PM
Yo ho ho and 5/5 points! Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-07-23 05:26 AM
As have been said it is a classical plot and probably one that the elder GMs here have tried variants of. Jules Verne and his Captain Nemo as well as the recent Pirates of the Caribbean films do come to mind.

As for the dungeon itself: It is obvious that you put much labour into this. It is well written and very interesting at times. However I cannot escape that feeling of deja-vu. It all feels so predictable... A series of fights so the party can get treasure. A big nasty Pirate Captain and his pet Crocodiles.

Regardless: You have done well and the Citadellians obviously cherish your work. Congratulations! Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-07-26 04:10 AM
As such it excels! My bet is that this will give you one very good evening with the crew :) Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-07-23 09:10 AM
Not much to say that already hasn't been said. Entertaining all around. Good job. Go to Comment
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Pariah's comment on 2006-07-20 08:34 PM
Yeah!!! New AND improved, without that sentance contradicting itself. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-07-20 12:39 AM
Updated: Adjusted a few measurements and corrected a grammatical error. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-07-20 11:45 AM
Yes, we certainly can. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-07-24 03:36 PM
Deja-vu can't be helped. It's an olde skool plot that kinda follows a predictable formula. I tried to punch it up with the mad prisoners and Threll the thief, but it's mainly meant to be a well-done classic dungeon. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-20 08:42 AM
hmmm..you were holding back in chat a bit werent you?..:P

This is wonderful!! Great atmosphere, juicy details, and not a "high-level" world-changing adventure, but an old-fashioned "low-level" yarn, high on imagery and descriptions!

Thumbs all the way up! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-10 11:11 AM
Most Piratical indeed - nice adjective Lockheed. Though the practicality of having so many prisoners seems off, it delivers a cool scene.

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Lanfear57's comment on 2008-01-12 06:09 PM
Kudos, I like, I'm going to use this in a campaign I'm running this coming semester ^_^ Go to Comment
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Lockheed's comment on 2009-10-23 11:03 PM
Cool! Exactly the kind of Piratical adventure I've been looking for. Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2009-02-08 02:08 AM
my name is josias and i really enjoyed this story.. would like to see more Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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manfred's comment on 2006-07-13 02:26 AM
Cute, and sad NPC at once. Good work! Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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Alec_Shadowkin's comment on 2006-07-12 07:07 PM
I think this is an extremely interesting character with a great deal of utility as an NPC. A miriad of uses come to mind just offhand and the proposed adventure is a good one. Nice job! Go to Comment
Poor Josias
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-12 09:49 PM
Poor him. 5/5 Go to Comment
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