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Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2008-04-03 07:59 PM
I like it. Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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Scrasamax's comment on 2008-02-02 01:51 AM
THe backstory is good, I like how instead of immortality or vast wealth, she is looking for just a single ring. Kudos Dozus. Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-01-27 12:48 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-11-06 08:47 AM
All you need is her appearance, some roleplaying notes, equipment and some plot hooks. The hard part is done, and it's great. Love her story! Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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Kinslayer's comment on 2008-01-26 03:26 PM
Plausible backstory? Check. Graphic description, both physical and social? Check. Distinctive character colour? Check. No eye-rolling moments reading the write-up? Check. Motivation independent of the pc's? Check. Good potential for interaction with the pc's? Check. Distinctive and memorable? Check. Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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Dozus's comment on 2008-01-26 01:42 PM
Then here it is, submitted for your approval! Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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Murometz's comment on 2008-01-29 08:35 PM
Heh, yep, Kinslayer did sum it up nicely.

'Rings' has a nice ring :) Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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valadaar's comment on 2008-01-29 10:03 AM
She is quite well done, though need to echo Manfred on her jump in roles. Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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Misanpilgrim's comment on 2008-04-04 01:44 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-01 06:23 AM
4.0/5

It has everything it needs to, and would be ideal for an ongoing naval campaign.

The only slight issue I have with her has already been voiced by manfred.

Other than that I like this sub.

P.s. Some interesting reading: By The Mast Devided - David Donachie Go to Comment
Aerophin
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-01-12 12:47 PM
Are they dangerous? Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2008-01-20 11:20 AM
I like these aerodolphins. Epoa is shaping up nicely, Scras. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2011-04-17 12:04 PM


Why do I have images of how this would fit right into a Hitch Hikers Guide to the Galaxy story. Very Douglas Adams.


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Aerophin
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Chaosmark's comment on 2009-04-10 12:46 PM
He most certainly can. He's using evolutions in the sense of biological modifications: they're several evolutionary steps beyond dolphins. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2008-01-12 10:58 AM
Updated: A bit more polished and expanded. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2008-01-13 10:49 AM
Not terribly. Usually if provoked, they'll run off, and they're not very territorial either. But if one were to rile an aerophin up enough, it could fight back and cause some nasty bites. Go to Comment
Aerophin
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Dozus's comment on 2014-02-04 09:29 PM
I just glanced over this comment and read the last line as "dolphin meat." Made me think what might happen if you ate a lot of aerophin. Would the consumed pantarbe build up in one's system, perhaps even to the point where they too can fly or at least float? Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2016-12-06 10:00 AM
In retrospect, I agree with Axle. "Several evolutions" sounds a bit silly. I've edited it out. But the discussion was great! Go to Comment
Aerophin
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Murometz's comment on 2014-03-13 06:01 PM
like RGTraynor, I find the notion (and visual!) of aerial dolphins irresistible. Go to Comment
Aerophin
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axlerowes's comment on 2009-04-10 02:47 AM
I am not voting here, just an edit

"They are several evolutions beyond dolphins"

You can't say "evolutions" it implies a unit, and I don't think it is a word. Try saying derived. The use of the word "beyond" works if you have a defined starting point, an intermediate and a end point. Go to Comment
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