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The Celestial Gavel
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Kassil's comment on 2007-12-30 02:38 PM
This appeals to my twisted sense of humor - a divine, potent holy weapon, forged with the heart of evil hidden within it. A clever way to cheat death, even if they way to unlock it isn't exactly something I'd expect to be easy.

A question: does 'unlocking' it make it possibly to revive/restore Vautu in some way, or does it just make the maul a weapon of darkness and evil? If the latter, I could see it being insturmental in the fall of a Guardian from being a paladin to an anti-paladin/blackguard... Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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Kassil's comment on 2008-01-02 06:23 PM
In restoring him, transforming the Guardian into Vautu's new form - a fallen paladin become host to a dark god - would probably be an intriguing twist. Perhaps the restoration would be incomplete, with the fallen Guardian becoming host to Vautu's power and spirit, but hybridized with the original mortal, or sharing space with it somehow, egging the unfortunate on to fully restore and release the god into the world once more, if only to be rid of the darkness suffusing him. If the Guardian is still somewhat himself, it might even make for a troubling issue for the PCs - the Guardian can be redeemed, in theory, but to do so you have to purge him of Vautu's spirit and power - which just might bring the god back to corporeal form. Picture the fallen Guardian, manipulated like a puppet, fighting to kill the PCs while pleading with them to destroy him and Vautu... Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-12-30 11:54 PM
Now this is the sort of thing I was thinking we need for the quest; not made by a wizard, in this case being made by a demon as a quasi-phylactary and then being reforged by the divine into a holy weapon. I like the role of the guardian and an entire knighly order built around tht position and the hammer. Excellent work Dozus and well done. Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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EchoMirage's comment on 2008-01-02 04:35 PM
Excellent story, though the powers of the mace could be described better. Still, a highly original take - earns a HoH from me. Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-30 09:01 AM
So it would turn from good to evil in seconds. Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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Dozus's comment on 2007-12-30 12:11 PM
Theoretically, yes. There is a "key" that unlocks the Gavel to reveal its true form, but that's for another sub. Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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Dozus's comment on 2007-12-30 10:56 PM
It's primary purpose is to restore Vautu to strength after his defeat, yes. Then the "Gavel" - or, in this case, Seraph Hammer - would function as an evil weapon, but it's main purpose would be to act as a focusing point for Vautu's power. It had never actually occurred to me to have a Guardian be the one that restores Vautu's power, but that would make for a fascinating turn of events. Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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Murometz's comment on 2008-01-02 02:38 PM
Great one, Dozus! Intricate and absorbing and evokes great imagery. Then again, I am a sucker for anything Sectarian Wars related. Got to this one late, so I will also echo Scras' comment. Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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valadaar's comment on 2008-01-02 07:23 PM
The reforging aspect is quite nice and the overall post is excellent! Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-21 08:43 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Darkstand's comment on 2013-08-23 11:00 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Celestial Gavel
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Darkstand's comment on 2013-08-23 11:09 AM
I like the weapon, and the idea of using in a 'fallen Paladin' quest is a great idea. I will post this as a alternative to the weapon causing the fall: A fallen Paladin finds the Maul, unlocks the evil within, but turns away from its power? In doing so he could break the curse, and seal Vautu's power away for good, and restore his own nature. This 'fallen' guardian could have been chosen for exactly that reason.
Second note: its implied in the article that each guardian is chosen, but what if that's NOT the case? What if it requires some special property of the wielder to use, perhaps a sufficiently tormented soul with both good and evil in their soul, to match the weapon they wield? Choosing a guardian could be a much more difficult proposition if each and every choice to wield this immense power has, by definition, a tendency to 'Fall'. Go to Comment
Adaleer's Reflective Quiver
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manfred's comment on 2007-10-25 11:09 AM
I like this one! I cringed when you mentioned the four classical alignements, but you made good use of them - and left enough place for other ways of characterizing the wearer.

Since the power works for those 'true souls', I wonder what a wearer that is not particularly remarkable would get... I guess just the ordinary arrows he put in. :) Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-10-25 12:23 PM
Good backstory, good effects, good submission.

Kudos Dozus. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-10-25 11:41 AM
I like it, it's good to have a magical weapon that is not the typical sword. Go to Comment
Adaleer's Reflective Quiver
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Dozus's comment on 2007-10-25 08:17 AM
Updated: Add to the scroll other gem colors and effects! Go to Comment
Adaleer's Reflective Quiver
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Dozus's comment on 2007-10-25 11:11 AM
Yeah, I cringed a bit too at the alignments. They're meant primarily as an example, a template for far more exciting varieties. Go to Comment
Adaleer's Reflective Quiver
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Dozus's comment on 2009-03-23 09:24 AM
Rose - There are some whose hearts fight only out of love. Souls in true love who hold the quiver will turn the gem pink. These arrows are made from red maple and fletched with swan feathers which, when fired, will turn sharply toward the direction the archer's true love lies.
Aquamarine - Some find that they have no home on dry land, but only in the great deep. Those old salts whose souls are only home at sea will turn the gem aquamarine. Arrows drawn from the quiver are carved from driftwood, fletched with large scales and tipped with shark's teeth. These arrows fire as easily beneath the waves as above; on land, one of these arrows that strikes the ground will produce a quart of sea water from the earth.
Silver - Despite the turnings of the secular world, some a truly devoted to their deity above all else. Such devoted religious souls will turn the quiver's stone silver, and their arrows made of white oak are barbed with quicksilvered points. These arrows deal divine damage on striking. Go to Comment
Adaleer's Reflective Quiver
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Dozus's comment on 2008-01-29 08:23 AM
Red - In a few hearts, there lurks nothing but the desire for vengeance. If a vengeful soul takes the quiver, the gem turns blood red. Arrows from the quiver will be made of red oak, their heads obsidian. The arrows will only strike those guilty of grievous sin, falling short of the innocent to leave them unharmed. Go to Comment
Adaleer's Reflective Quiver
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Murometz's comment on 2007-10-25 08:32 AM
A faithful adherent to the Church of Divine Water, the austere Adaleer once knelt beside a sacred reflecting pool for six years. It is said that afterwards, he could see own reflection in every creature he met, understanding them as deeply as he understood himself.

wow, very nice! Good work, Dozus!

We're missing a red gem, I may have to add one.

Be proud, you have created the Citadel's first ever magical quiver! Go to Comment
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