A fascinating piece with detail in all the right places.
Usually goblins in my games have been mostly faceless minions or greater powers. It's nice to see a bit of focus on goblin society in a way that isn't bloody & murderous, yet still grossly golbinesque. Go to Comment
She makes a good action/romantic heroine, Kinslayer summed it up nicely.
One hole to be filled is her sudden jump from noble daughter to a frontline warrior. There should be a mention of where she gained the skill (also a potential for plot hooks). The rest flows straightforwardly on, no surprises there: drama and adventure awaits. Go to Comment
Plausible backstory? Check. Graphic description, both physical and social? Check. Distinctive character colour? Check. No eye-rolling moments reading the write-up? Check. Motivation independent of the pc's? Check. Good potential for interaction with the pc's? Check. Distinctive and memorable? Check. Go to Comment