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Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-06-20 08:22 PM
5/5 which is what it deserves. Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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Pariah's comment on 2010-11-08 12:21 AM


I will agree that this is very much a 5


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Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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Dozus's comment on 2010-06-09 12:30 AM
Any suggestions/edits before I submit? Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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Dozus's comment on 2010-06-20 07:50 PM
Okay then, fully submitted.

Full disclosure, I heavily borrowed the idea for the fiddle from the Tuvan igil: http://www.alashensemble.com/instruments.htm Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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Murometz's comment on 2013-11-26 08:59 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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Murometz's comment on 2013-11-26 09:03 PM
Masterfully done. Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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valadaar's comment on 2010-06-13 07:21 PM
You'd get a 5 from me, so no :)
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Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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valadaar's comment on 2010-06-22 11:38 AM
Very well done and I like the inclusion of the picture.


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Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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Moonlake's comment on 2010-12-22 03:58 PM


A highly atmospheric piece. HoHing it so that more eyes can see this well-written piece.


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Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
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Dossta's comment on 2013-03-12 01:39 PM
Can't believe I haven't voted on this one before. This is one of the very first pieces I ever read on the site, and is undoubtedly one of the reasons I chose to join -- I was struck by the piece's quality and atmosphere, and was inspired to write some of my own. High time for another HoH! Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-06-11 04:23 AM
A good one!
What I'd welcome in addition: rites, a patron, perchance exceptional members, something peculiar to set them apart besides being aquatic. Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
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Cheka Man's comment on 2009-05-31 09:50 AM
They would be great for an Acqua based game.I wish I had thought of them. Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-06-09 11:16 AM
This is a great submission, but unless it won a competetion...100XP? Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-06-10 11:19 AM
I'm happy for you-I just thought it was a glitch, that's all. Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
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Dozus's comment on 2009-05-31 01:49 AM
Any suggestions before I submit? Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
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Dozus's comment on 2010-06-09 11:58 PM
When I first created this sub, it was part of a quest, but it was still "In Work." I guess I got the XP then, but since I just now promoted it to a full-fledged sub, it doesn't classify it as a quest sub, but it didn't change the XP.

At least, that's the only explanation I can come up with. Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
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valadaar's comment on 2009-06-02 08:31 PM
Plot ideas perhaps? Other then that, a unique order of knights! Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
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Moonlake's comment on 2009-05-31 05:03 AM
Only suggestion is to fix up the typos, I found a few:
Under History, 3rd paragraph- deemed "too" expensive;
Under Grand Order, I was under the impression that the proposition after the word "preside" should be "over" rather than "of";
Cuttlefish Order- "breathing" is spelled w/o the h
Coral Buckle- in the 1st half of the 1st sentence, you mean to say "Considered to be", right? the current phrasing is weird
Ray- should be "likened" rather than "liked"
Beyond Boshic- "fiery" spelled as firey

Other than that, I would say it's very structured and the details are very good. Go to Comment
Stalagmen
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manfred's comment on 2008-09-30 05:25 PM
They seem to be fun, you basic stone elementals given a good overhaul. If nothing else, they can be used as a spooky story about the dangers of the depths. Go to Comment
Stalagmen
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MoonHunter's comment on 2008-09-30 05:48 PM
They are a nicely done random monster for underground adventuring (and Dwarf annoyances). You did add some touches towards the end that made them a bit more that suprise/ pounce attackers of the lower depths. So they are a mysterious monster people race of the deep.

Still, they are underground Gnollish/ Orcish bags of hitpoints with suprise options.

Nicely written though. Go to Comment
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