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A Brief History of County Siogal
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Cheka Man's comment on 2016-11-16 12:42 PM
It sounds a bit Irish. Go to Comment
A Brief History of County Siogal
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Dozus's comment on 2016-11-15 08:00 PM
Indeed! Trying to kick some In-work stuff into full subs, using it to springboard more of the setting. My sub from earlier this week, Gléasanna an Cruthú, is from the same setting. Go to Comment
A Brief History of County Siogal
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axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-15 07:19 PM
This is a nice note, and the setting has a nice mixture of the mundane and the fantastic. You laid out the bare bones of county with history, pride, mystery, unorganized power and perhaps a long history of internal strife (assuming the people at the time this writing still remember all this stuff). Are you planning to build on this? Go to Comment
A Brief History of County Siogal
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valadaar's comment on 2016-11-16 12:31 PM
Great formative material! Again love the celtic feel. Go to Comment
Gléasanna an Cruthú, or the Instruments of Creation
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Cheka Man's comment on 2016-11-13 09:29 PM
Very original. 5/5 Go to Comment
Gléasanna an Cruthú, or the Instruments of Creation
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2016-11-17 01:43 PM
I didn't explicitly say so, but ideas for other songs and such are welcome. :D Go to Comment
Gléasanna an Cruthú, or the Instruments of Creation
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axlerowes's comment on 2016-11-21 12:27 PM
This is fantastic (more people should read it). I am a fan of novel creation myths for the "D&D hetro normal" setting and this is great one. As I can see it you took the typical fantasy cannon-dwarves Dragons an so on-and worked backwards to create this myth. I also like how subtle yet dramatic the value embodied by each " diety" and instrument is, this is really great. I loved the magical song examples. Go to Comment
Gléasanna an Cruthú, or the Instruments of Creation
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valadaar's comment on 2016-11-14 09:16 AM
I love the Celtic feel of this one. Excellent items and atmosphere!
A handful of quests, a creation myth. Awesome.
I'd like to see more Songs, but this is a very good submission.

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Gléasanna an Cruthú, or the Instruments of Creation
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Mageek's comment on 2016-11-17 01:31 PM
This is legend. The way it is written feels like a vast adventure is opening up, the challenges and objectives clearly laid out before me. An excellent, excellent creation myth and world feel. The powers have clear applications in addition to flavor. I love the synergy between pairs of instruments given by the songs of creation. This is an entire world wrapped in one post. Go to Comment
Vaakri's Empyral Bow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Heroic)
Scrasamax's comment on 2015-04-21 01:09 PM
NICE!!!

I like the tone and presentation, and it has a very mythical magical feeling to it. Like Val says, the details of the bow itself do not matter, it could be nothing more than a plain bow from a fortuitous source or a mythic powered item of exceptional ability. Go to Comment
Vaakri's Empyral Bow
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Cheka Man's comment on 2015-04-21 11:48 PM
A nice backstory. Go to Comment
Vaakri's Empyral Bow
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Murometz's comment on 2015-04-22 09:26 PM
Concur with the lads. Great legend/myth! Almost doesn't matter what it does Go to Comment
Vaakri's Empyral Bow
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valadaar's comment on 2015-04-21 11:12 AM
Wonderful legend here! The bows powers are entirely beside the point - it could be a mundane relic for all we care.

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30 Barbarians
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Scrasamax's comment on 2015-04-12 06:55 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
30 Barbarians
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Cheka Man's comment on 2015-03-17 01:04 PM
30 very original barbarians. 5/5 Go to Comment
30 Barbarians
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Dozus's comment on 2015-04-28 09:17 AM
It's a subtle jab at the stock, Conan-esque barbarian character: huge, Nordic men with battleaxes from the inexplicable north. Go to Comment
30 Barbarians
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Murometz's comment on 2015-04-26 08:52 PM


This grew on me the more I read. Lovable bunch! Love the this one likes that one and that one fears this one stuff. Makes them come alive and feel real. The names based on traits/personalities is a nice touch as well.



I get a bit of a Black Company vibe too.



Zerk is Hulk! Bones is Rattleshirt (GoT)! And you have to love gramps!



I have to ask though, why is Rock the secret laughing stock of the group? We're not offered a clue as to why.



Great job!

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30 Barbarians
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-04-09 07:21 AM
This is really fun. Reminds of the bio blurbs on the back of action figure packaging. I like the connected nature of this ready made horde, I like the use of archetypes and cliche, and the write up is smooth and accessible. Go to Comment
30 Barbarians
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valadaar's comment on 2015-03-17 12:13 PM
A quality 30 with lots of detail. Certainly some well used tropes here, but that works well in a 30. I like the inter-linkage between them that suggests the plots that could arise from using the lot of em.


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30 Barbarians
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Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-23 11:33 PM
The inter-linkages between them all are certainly a nice touch. Go to Comment
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