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Silverbreath
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Chaosmark's comment on 2011-11-14 07:44 PM
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Silverbreath
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-01 10:40 AM
A good item with decent backstory. I would certainly put usage limits on its abilities - especially the destructive ones.
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Silverbreath
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dark_dragon's comment on 2011-11-28 07:40 AM


I love the backstory, but would be keener to have the magical effect be more subtle and music related:




  • A song to bring the wayward home.


  • A song to sooth the angry heart.


  • A song to raise a forlorn hope.



Otherwise, nice item! I like that the horn gets its own legend, and that bards make song in an attempt to attract it. 


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Silverbreath
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dark_dragon's comment on 2011-12-01 03:23 AM


I'm revoting and adding 0.5 on re-reading


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Silverbreath
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Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 11:04 AM
A very nice little thing that came up in my unvoted. Well done Dossta! Go to Comment
Silverbreath
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Redgre's comment on 2011-11-08 06:19 PM


Very enjoyable read.  I really liked the Lore part and how it's design is to improve the luck of the impoverished kind.  I think it would be interesting to further design a full set of drawbacks for those not worthy to use Silverbreath and perhaps more of examples of the benefits.  Good work.


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Silverbreath
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olontur's comment on 2011-11-15 11:53 AM


Is the drawback really a drawback?



Being a fan of subtle magics, I'd prefer the horn to be just luck-fortifying, more so as I cannot find why poisonous or molten hot mists would be useful to a simple, however brave, shepherd. The refreshing/healing property fits quite well though.



 



:)


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Silverbreath
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olontur's comment on 2011-11-16 09:15 AM
How about a calming tune, especially for your herds? Or a warding tune against predators prowling about? Both would help any shepherd.

Now that I come to think of it, many shepherds I've met (that's quite a few I must add), often lose some of their animals. Maybe playing on the horn would be a homing beacon for any lost ram?

A drawback could be a ongoing sacrifice, like a prize ram sacrificed a year. Alternately, wild sheep might get attracted to your ewes and steal away with some of them. Then again, the few that return bear extra vigorous and beautiful kids. Go to Comment
Silverbreath
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Dossta's comment on 2011-11-15 01:09 PM
You've made a good point, and I was hesitant to include them but could think of no other powers to bolster the luck/healing properties. Hot/poison breath has also been long associated with dragonkind. I'll mull it around in my head for awhile longer, though, and see if I can come up with some more benefits that would fit the horn's character better. Go to Comment
Silverbreath
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bookwormwen's comment on 2012-06-26 02:48 PM
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Silverbreath
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rickster's comment on 2013-05-10 07:05 PM
The idea of a sacrifice is a good one. Perhaps it would be too restrictive to require that the prize ram would have to be given to the original dragon (or maybe by now its offpring.).

If that dragon were slain, would the item stop working? Perhaps a quest to find the dragon's cousin be mounted? Go to Comment
The Thunder Sphere
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Scrasamax's comment on 2011-11-14 10:23 AM
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The Thunder Sphere
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Cheka Man's comment on 2011-11-08 11:13 AM


A shocking submission, and very orginal, the most orginal way of shooting lightning bolts I've ever seen. I would not want someone wearing this to come too close to my computer.


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The Thunder Sphere
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Cheka Man's comment on 2011-11-11 07:38 PM


I want this to win the Quest.


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The Thunder Sphere
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Phaidros's comment on 2014-03-18 05:41 PM
Good item, I would only like some more on that history, with both heroes and villain (ab)using the Sphere. And who made this? Go to Comment
The Thunder Sphere
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Chaosmark's comment on 2011-11-14 07:46 PM
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The Thunder Sphere
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Murometz's comment on 2012-06-26 09:15 AM
I just love the image of someone donning these seeming "shackles", as well as the image of someone drawing every last lightning bolt from a monstrous thunderstorm, (with hordes of stunned, wide-eyed onlookers nearby), as well as the image of an elecrical overload, and the consequent, disastrous discharges. Boy, thats a lot of images :) Like the Twist too! Also, what d_d said. Go to Comment
The Thunder Sphere
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dark_dragon's comment on 2011-12-01 03:22 AM


I like those! I would totally see this being a campaign side-track, ith the five rings separated across the kingdom, to be reunited by the plucky PCs before taking on the big bad or going up the mountain to query the trhunder god. 



Good work Dossta! 


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The Thunder Sphere
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Morte's comment on 2013-01-15 03:21 AM
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The Thunder Sphere
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Redgre's comment on 2011-11-08 06:10 PM


I really like the overall idea and concept, reminicent of the old Spiderman villian, Electro.  However, the thing I'm having a hard time wrapping my mind around is how one 'wears' this five link chain.  It seems awkward at best.  It reminds me of full body shackles on an inmate, with perhaps less flexibility.  I've read it a few times now and I still get stuck on this.  Am I missing something?


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