The origins of the first zombie and the creation of the Art of Necromancy. Not a small feat!
The only thing I wanted a bit more of was her background of medicine and magic and how she used it through the years as she visited all these different places/people to fix herself. I had a need to see her taking that eclectic knowledge as her own and experimenting with it or something. Then when the big reveal comes and she brings her husband back, it isn't such a stretch that she could figure it out. Took me a second read to remind me that she did have a magic/medical background from family for it to make more sense, but that still leaves me hanging a bit.
I love the narration, I like the story and I like the idea. As a write up for NPC though, you give us history, but you don't give us her. We don't have a sense for her style or current state. Go to Comment
Just awesome!! I immediately begin mentally festooning the beards of various dwarven npc's in my head (worlds) with these lovely add-ons. These are so fun, they beg to be used. Great details! Go to Comment
As far as I can remember, axle got us all thinking along these lines with his Beardspiders. You submitted Undead Beard Fleas a few hours later, and then axle expanded his sub to include beard flea lore. I watched the whole thing in fascination, and this 30 grew out of my inability to let the idea go at just two lifeforms. So, thank you both for the inspiration! Go to Comment