Updated: I re-worked my whole submission for clarity (it was needed), and I put a few more specifics on how I envisioned the animation process to be. I also figured out a way around the melt-the-gold-down procedure, but I am afraid that I did not properly explain it. The idea was to use a heat metal charm of some sort so that the gold would melt itself down, then rise back up as a snake. I was also unsure whether to quote Moonhunter's comment or simply to reference it in my submission Go to Comment
Well, the idea is that the snakes themselves are amazingly weak, but a pair of fangs in the throat is a pair of fangs in the throat (especially when they are pumping poison.) Go to Comment
Great fun bit of history that has plenty for a campaign backstory.
Give me a little more on the chaos and what your idea of it is and that would bump up the rating for me. Would have to come into play and right now I have some ideas about it but would be nice to have a bit more info on it. A detailed talk about the madness, a first-hand description by one of those affected, something. Go to Comment
I like this submission, even though I am no fan of psionics. I am especially intrigued by the plane of chaos that as far as I can tell, lurks near the center of the world. Go to Comment
This has many points of merit. It could use a clean-up text-wise, but otherwise an interesting tale. Not crazy about D'Karr as a name, but hey, thats all subjective.
I sense hints of drow and forgotten realms obviously (Underdark). I need to reread this for more feedback. Getting late here.
You can tell you love your setting and it shows. Nice work. Go to Comment
Updated: I wanted to tell a bit more about the D'Karr government, and how to creep your PC's out, if they've seen albino cannibals before in stuff like the Time Machine book. Go to Comment
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