This is one of the better, angelic/ demonic posts. It shows someone "thinking" through what their existance will be like, rather than just falling into cliched responses (1/2 Demons are only good to be assassins... sigh.. You people have watched too much Vampire Hunter D and the ilk). Go to Comment
Does she want revenge for the people who misjudged her? Or does she just feel its time she got a share of life?
Well, I like evil, magic, undead and specifically necromancy, so you've managed to capture my interest. I must say this character is far more in-depth than a lot of posts, lately, so this is refreshing. Keep it up.
When I read posts such as this, I rejoice. But: when i think of series like... Charmed, for example, it makes me wonder. For those writing the script, it would be far easier to browse an RPG forum and gather ideas, that to put their unelaborated creations into the series. Go to Comment
I like SE's comment. Especially when considered from the modern Strolenite perspective.
Beyond that, you've shown that thought has gone into this in but a couple of lines, which is solid writing. It might be a little sparse, and lack flavor text, but still good. Showmanship and flair are always excellent skills. Go to Comment