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The Elemental Defenders
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-14 07:33 PM
I like the history you wrote and I like that you have "void" as well as the 4 elements. There are some things I don't understand about the item (for example what is Draw Magic? does this just mean it draws a magic sword? if so, how come this armor doesn't have the power to create the fireball mentioned in the above, because I don't see call fireball mentioned anywhere... but maybe I'm just missing the point).
Also, and this isn't to belittle your work, which is very nice, this is just a comment/challenge to everyone here at the citadel. I notice every time elemental things exist the fire one is violent and aggressive. I think that's lazy. I mean, sure fire can be violent and water can be calm. But you could also say water is violent (hurricanes, tsunamis, fire hoses) and fire is calm (candle, fireplace warming you bringing blood back to frozen limbs).
Other than that, my feelings mirror Pariah's.

(Note - codex/citadel is weird today, so this post is meant for Pyre only) Go to Comment
The Elemental Defenders
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-10 07:02 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
manfred's comment on 2005-11-07 06:17 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-06 06:21 PM
Very dangerous if they have strong magic.5/5 Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2005-11-22 11:18 PM
Agree with Zyliathan, a few unanswered questions here.
Answer those and I think you would jump up a few more swords. Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-06 08:15 PM
Updated: Merely fixing category to Any, not just city/ruin. Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-14 07:37 PM
Can they cast parts of themself and lose parts? Can they absorb other parts? How do they behave? What intelligence level do they have? I think you need to add more details and description to this. It's a really cool start of an idea, but I don't think there's enough for a full post.

(p.s. I appreciate that you cite your inspiration. I'm new here so I don't know the etiquette for that, but I think it's important.) Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-07-26 04:29 PM
Battle of the Golems! Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-30 07:05 PM
Not bad but needs work. How does it attack? From the statement "each with a varying set of scrolls it has absorbed and can use" I assume it casts the spells on the scrolls that it is made of, but generally scrolls are one-shot items, so as it casts spells, it is going to weaken itself.


As others have said - flesh it out, and I think the votes will go up. Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Maggot's comment on 2005-04-09 09:43 PM
I like the way it does the reverse of what it was supposed to. 3/5 Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-04-10 04:55 AM
Poetic justice? A good item. Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-04-10 07:23 AM
4/5. I liked it. :) Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-13 06:22 PM
I get to vote again! Yay! Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2005-11-22 11:20 PM
Great idea. Different and handled well. Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2005-11-22 11:21 PM
Forgot my vote. Thumb up. Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Kinslayer's comment on 2005-09-19 01:28 AM
The armour has a nice dualistic vengeance thing going for it. Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-11-04 05:48 PM
Good one Chaosmark! Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-02-08 02:56 PM
I saw the 3.5 vote and was worried this wasn't going to be good. That total vote doesn't do it justice. I love duality among items that are magical. Bad but good. Its great. Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Preacher's comment on 2005-04-12 04:46 PM
4/5, that is one nice item to use. Go to Comment
Armour of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-05 09:53 PM
Muchos gracias AG. Coming from my GM, a comment like that holds quite a bit of weight. Go to Comment
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