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The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-10-26 09:30 PM
It's cool, and i would love to read more on it. A bestiary of biomancy mutants and animated book-beasts and such will be a nice addition, should you ever choose fo expand this.
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The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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Scrasamax's comment on 2013-10-27 07:40 AM
Fun stuff! Go to Comment
The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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Chaosmark's comment on 2013-10-26 12:45 AM
A quick oekaki submission to get the juices flowing again. This was inspired by a comment Dozus made somewhere, reproduced below:

"*Bibliorynth - noun, a maze-like library. Origin: Me, like five minutes ago. Combination of the Greek biblio (book) and labyrinth (labyrinth)." Go to Comment
The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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Chaosmark's comment on 2013-10-26 09:57 PM
And thus was the freetext added. Go to Comment
The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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Chaosmark's comment on 2013-10-31 09:06 PM
A fair point. I consider places with massively-lethal environments to be, frankly, realistic. We DO have places on the planet where one wrong move will kill you dead. However, they should be rare, as such places are in real life. And, unlike in real life, you should probably let your players observe the deadliness first-hand before subjecting them to it. That seems like the best compromise between not coddling your players while still preventing them from stumbling into something their PCs would have known not to do. Go to Comment
The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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Murometz's comment on 2013-10-31 10:03 AM
Ah, an Oekaki. well, I guess in that case, i can't say, "This needs more!" (But it does).

Nice setting though for adventure. I always wondered if we'd ever get that Bibliorynth sub after Dozus coined the term. :)

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The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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valadaar's comment on 2013-10-31 06:45 PM
Very interesting!

When locations as lethal as this are brought up, I have to wonder about how they would be used in play? Complete obliteration from one wrong move? Lost, sure, but unrecoverable? Of course it is easy for a GM to change to suit their own game.

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valadaar's comment on 2013-10-31 06:45 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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caesar193's comment on 2013-10-26 09:39 PM
If its an oekaki, it should have the oekaki freetext. So that people know going in what to expect. Other than that, a good idea. I agree with SE on the bestiary of dangers within the bibliorynth bit. Go to Comment
The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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rickster's comment on 2013-10-31 08:52 AM
This gives a whole new meaning to "a little learning is a dangeeous thing."
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The Bibliorynth of Zhao Zweh
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rickster's comment on 2013-10-31 01:46 PM
This gives a whole new meaning to "a little learning is a dangerous thing."
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Quarantine of Light
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-10-09 07:13 PM
Like i mentioned in chat before - there are some small similarities between this and a sub I made a while back, but yours is much better :D Far more polished!

This would be great fun to impose on some PC's to surprise them. Have them come back from a massive adventure, thinking that Shardis is just their port-of-call to heal and rest up, and then unleash this invasion on them! Nothing like perverting their perceptions of safety :D Go to Comment
Quarantine of Light
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Murometz's comment on 2013-10-03 12:14 PM
I love the stages format presented here! Makes it really easy for a GM to utilize the series of events. Also, well done on making "The Event" change the city permanently afterwards. Many scenarios leave out the, what happens after part. The bit about some demons remaining and 'hiding away' after the portal is closed is also a nice touch for an ending, and another beginning (follow-up visits/adventures) Go to Comment
Quarantine of Light
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valadaar's comment on 2013-10-09 09:00 AM
An excellent and very reusable location!

This would be a great place for a McGuffin to be found. Go to Comment
Quarantine of Light
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-10-18 06:24 AM
This was an awesome and very professional sub that wouldn't be out of place in an official WotC module, like Muro, I loved the stages and the detailing of the events.
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Shardis, the Shining City
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-10-20 06:28 PM
Very Nice, CM. Shardis should be Central city around many scenarios; a place where the pcs can return to for many games and levels, to rest and purchase goods. During their many stays they can learn more and more of the city,

and then one day, months down the track while the pcs are resting up in town, the eclipse occurs...

not only will it be a massive scenario in itself, but it will change up the entire campaign, as even if/when they make it out or stop the demons, their home city is done fir. They must venture out into the world. Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-15 09:28 PM


At long last, the next installment to The Bringers of Midnight arrives! Rejoice! Rejoice! (Or just comment, you know, whichever you prefer.)



Many thanks go to MysticMoon for proof-reading this, as well as to all those in the chat who helped flesh portions of it out.

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valadaar's comment on 2013-09-20 08:51 AM
The Eclipse certainly makes this submission - the city as it was was a nice high-magic city, but not overly remarkable. The transformation into the war zone gives it a desperate air and like Gossamer said, having the PCs there when all hell breaks loose would make the greatest impact.

Well done! This would make a very interesting mini-campaign. Go to Comment
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Renlim's comment on 2013-10-02 08:39 PM
Awesome! Go to Comment
Shardis, the Shining City
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-09-16 01:08 PM
First of all, let me just say that the proof reading really shows, me likey! The first description of the city put me in mind of Gloomwrought, Sunnydale (Buffy the vampire slayer) and Bright Falls (Alan Wake), but then it didn't deliver, with a very standardized city. But then, BAM! You turn the whole thing into a huge mega dungeon. If the PCs were already present when the eclipse happens, that would probably be easiest, as I dunno what else would prompt them to enter such a place afterwards.

I immidiately thought that Jorge was a woman, otherwise why would he/she hide his identity like that, using a marital aide to impress the girls, no doubt. Very thought provoking and inspiring. I don't normally go for horror, but if I did, I would use this. A great submission, full score! Go to Comment
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