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Muggar the White Despiser
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Strolen's comment on 2008-08-03 08:06 AM
Always love the names and the way they are spun like I already know them without having to have their full story. As the army grows, so shall their influence as they will need a lot of resources to sustain a desert kingdom. Won't be long till the region will be embroiled in the fight and hopefully the gods will still be available. Go to Comment
Muggar the White Despiser
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
manfred's comment on 2009-04-12 02:00 AM
Goats are not always evil... see here. :-> Go to Comment
Muggar the White Despiser
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2008-12-03 03:48 AM
Thank you, Horde, that was enlightening, to say the least. Go to Comment
Muggar the White Despiser
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2008-07-29 04:21 PM
For some reason, I cannot add this to the quest. Any help? Go to Comment
Muggar the White Despiser
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Cheka Man's comment on 2008-07-29 07:14 PM
Ewwwwwww. Disgustingly good. Go to Comment
Muggar the White Despiser
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-08-09 11:37 PM
This is Penguin material for sure. The long names and epic proportioans are proof of that;)

This write-up has in my opinion a bleak and sad touch to it. I have always enjoyed your style and Muggar shines trough as well. Go to Comment
Muggar the White Despiser
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2008-08-11 07:04 PM
Very Lovecraftian! Veddy Good! Go to Comment
Muggar the White Despiser
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2009-04-11 06:25 PM
Have you tried feeding them at a petting zoo? Case closed!

:P Go to Comment
Muggar the White Despiser
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
angryscotsman93's comment on 2009-04-11 12:39 AM
When did goats become evil? Heh heh heh, just bein' weird. Excellent prose, very cool! Go to Comment
Skalfian Vampire
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-05-16 09:18 AM
Nice description. Finish please:) Go to Comment
Skalfian Vampire
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
Kassy's comment on 2008-07-29 08:04 AM
Finish it, it sounds intrigueing. Go to Comment
City Image- Sarkushen
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
manfred's comment on 2008-03-21 04:37 AM
It really came out that well. A dying city with a dark past, it appears the heritage of old, that was thought suppressed, will strangle the newcomers' will to live at last... restoring the original population, and the rites of the true god. Go to Comment
City Image- Sarkushen
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
MoonHunter's comment on 2008-03-20 11:57 AM
A lovely, in that disgusting evil city sort of way. Echos touches of Lovecraft as written by Borroughs or Carter.


Pulled the City Image Freetext. Added it to the codex.

We really should do more City Images. While they can be tough to write (with that focus on architecture and form to illustrate the history and society of the place), they come out so well. Go to Comment
City Image- Sarkushen
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Cheka Man's comment on 2008-03-21 11:08 AM
It reminds me of Technoticlan the Aztec city. Go to Comment
City Image- Sarkushen
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2008-04-27 12:10 PM
Hoo-Yah! Great writing makes for great visuals! Good one, Cap! Go to Comment
City Image- Sarkushen
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2008-03-25 09:22 AM
Excellent work Captain! Wonderful Lovecraftian vibe too! Go to Comment
City Image- Sarkushen
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Misanpilgrim's comment on 2008-03-22 11:55 AM
Oh yes, this WILL be used. Go to Comment
Sshpah (Wordfishes Of Hloth)
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
manfred's comment on 2008-03-06 03:05 PM
Darn! I am constructing a vaguely similar intelligent lifeform, and I think I can steal a few things from you. Thank you in advance. :)

But what is their ultimate goal? It doesn't have to be meaning-of-life stuff, but what do they pursue? Where are they going? Are they simply floating around and thinking all their lives? What are the advances of their civilization? (Do they actually have one?) What about technology?

It is reasonable to assume that they are only on the beginning of this path, but I'd still like to hear a few thoughts on this.

Great idea! Go to Comment
Sshpah (Wordfishes Of Hloth)
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-03-07 02:55 PM
Amazingly bizarre, and yet the entire thing works very very well! I can see a scenario where a local tribe starts fishing and after killing several Sshpah and mentally truncated several others, an effort is made by the intelligent fish.

Kudos and have a HoH for your troubles. Go to Comment
Sshpah (Wordfishes Of Hloth)
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Cheka Man's comment on 2008-03-06 12:00 PM
How sharp are their teeth? Go to Comment
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