Bringing forth an old spectre from the depths of the Citadel, a submission from 2003, when our standards were not as they are now. Also, one of the former members I would like to see return to the Citadel, if he is still out there, wandering somewhere.
The basic commentary on the submission would be a default link to Moonhunter's Gold standard guidelines, as Asarth is, we have a description and a vague motive and a hint of a goal.
This would be a worthy submission for being expanded on/rewritten for the Citadel at large, so long as it was done in the lofty Melnibonean/Lovecraftian style of the Good Penguin himself Go to Comment
Maybe the king has gotten fed up with Olbzan's continued failure to capture her, and has hired someone (like the PCs) to get the job done. Also, do the people know that the Former Lady and the Bandit are the same person? People might think that Lady DeHansen simply went missing, or maybe died. They might even think that Olbzan had something to do with her disappearance! This of course could lead to some well meaning, but ill-informed, people hiring the PCs to find the Lady and/or "bring Olbzan to justice." Even funnier would be if people thought that the Bandit and Olbzan were in cahoots to get rid of the Lady (literally true, but missing the point entirely.) Go to Comment
I suspect that a female Robin Hood could be an amusing addition to a game, especially once the rumor mill went to work:
"Why, everyone knows that the Lady DeHansen ran off into the forest to be with that dashing bandit, the Scourge of Witherwood! I've seen her myself, giving his loot back to the villagers! I wonder how much longer old Olbzan can hide the truth?" Go to Comment
Asarth knows what happens when the sword is drawn, wonder what kind of motives he may have for finding it. If he didn't draw the sword originaly (becoming a lich would be an interesting side effect though) then perhaps he wants the sword to return the destruction done on him. Some kind of revenge thing perhaps? Go to Comment
First an foremost, expand on this. Make a Asarth Awrun character, (Post it in characters). Also, how does he do it? There's a lot to build on, and I mean that in the most positive way.
P.S. Perhaps Asarth Awrun is the soldier who drew the sword Go to Comment
A doomday device as a sword. Why not a box or book or whatever? Is it just a simple activation, like flipping a switch, or does the sword only work for those who want the conflict to stop? A brute force artifact that acts like a kind of a-bomb is kinda blasie, but one that has purpose and drive is interesting.
Can the sword communicate? Is it's power always one hundred miles or is that a max range and it works on the need of the situation? Can the sword do anything else, like cut bread or poke a hole in an apple? Go to Comment
Wow. All good. Perhaps it should communicate. It couldn't cut bread or do anything like that because when you remove the blade from the sheath the detonation occurs. Maybe the range could extend. If you don't want peace you can't pull the sword from the sheath. Go to Comment
The point is that you're not supposed to draw the sword.
It destroys the user and everything around them, by a variable distance, so chances are, if it's connected to legends of peace as in the story of the sword, the drawer may end up destroying everything they wanted to save. Go to Comment