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The Heart That Bleeds
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Spark's comment on 2006-02-23 02:58 PM
I'll make up some fantasy names for the characters that fit my world a little better (and that my friends could pronounce without a guide), but the plot is good. It's nothing exceptionally unique, but I like the idea of a war simply for the sake of war, caused by an unstable man. Either way, the PCs have something to gain. I'm wondering about the secret ally, though...it was only mentioned in passing. Is it a god? A nearby duke? Whatever it is, it sounds like it could be an important surprise for the storyline. Go to Comment
Shkur-Lotan the Boiled
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-03-02 09:30 PM
This is really quite bad, actually. Go to Comment
Shkur-Lotan the Boiled
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-05 04:41 PM
1125 views and no comments. People voted on it and didn't make a comment. What is up with that? Go to Comment
Shkur-Lotan the Boiled
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-02 12:12 PM
The 'Boiled Boiler'!

Its a bit cliche as far as his background, but the "boiling" makes him stand out from the throng of "wronged, and ticked off baddies"

*glances at his boiling mug of tea in a whole new way* Go to Comment
Shkur-Lotan the Boiled
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-02 09:35 PM
like I sort of said, it can be lots better. But I like the boiled/boils others part. So thats almost all I need for inspiration to make up the rest myself. Feeling inspired, makes me give decent vote. Go to Comment
Shkur-Lotan the Boiled
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-05 11:20 AM
It does bring me in mind of an Aquatic Freddie Kruger, minus the metal claws...

Think it does make a useful sea-based boogyman. Go to Comment
Children of the Families
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-10-17 10:51 PM
This is one of my older ones from when I first joined. Go to Comment
Children of the Families
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
forgottengods's comment on 2003-02-05 02:35 AM
i think is a good plot for a city adventure is reaaly good Go to Comment
Children of the Families
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Siren365's comment on 2003-07-07 02:25 PM
Cool idea. Go to Comment
Children of the Families
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
CirrusWind's comment on 2003-10-17 03:46 PM
Good one. A nice blend of politics and combat. It'd be great to get a player hooked on some powerfully addictive drug without their knowledge. Could lead to some interesting aftereffects. Go to Comment
Children of the Families
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-06-28 11:32 AM


Funny that the last post was 'this is one of my older ones' and that post is from 8 years ago :)



 


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The Dhole
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-07-22 12:36 AM
This thing sucks. I can't believe I ever conceived something so bad. Go to Comment
The Dhole
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-11-08 05:05 PM
I... don't know why this was HoHed. Go to Comment
The Dhole
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
forgottengods's comment on 2003-02-06 06:49 PM
he is like the tarrask (sorry i dont remember the creature name ) from the ad n d?? Go to Comment
The Dhole
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
MoonHunter's comment on 2004-07-22 02:23 AM
I can. You were in an elder god's tequilla kind of phase. Go to Comment
The Dhole
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Iain's comment on 2005-11-08 03:22 AM
I'm not claiming that is a particularly good submission (especially compared to other of Captain Penguin's stuff), but I've always had quite a soft spot for it nonetheless. I HoHed it partly because it's a perfect example of how even 2 star submissions can (sometimes) add a lot to this site and partly because, well, the concept of "a creature that eats space-time and is a mile long" is quite cool, there's no getting away from it! Go to Comment
The Dhole
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-03-29 10:59 AM
The Dhole is no good if *awake* but as the beast which the cultists are trying to awake it is very good indeed.2/5 as it is, but 4/5 if it is used in the right way. Go to Comment
The Dhole
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-11-20 10:27 PM
Iain explained. Go to Comment
The Dhole
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-03-29 07:47 AM
I disagree; not with your critique of the Creature, sorry Cap, but with your evaluation of powerful beings.

Powerful beasts, like Dholes, "Cthulhus", Dragons, Gods, Arch Demons, etc... ARE good for a purpose. While I agree with your assessment in regards to combat and ridiculously high level stuff, I find powerful beasts such as these good for ANOTHER purpose.

There are legends and myths to be built around such creatures. There are stellar constellations foresaying their arrival, ancient prophecies speaking of their manifestation. I cannot recount the endless plots that can be built around such legends and prophecies.

In addition you have to consider the tales and legends of such creatures. The fear which can be generated as PCs read a passage in an old cultist's journal is invaluable for building tension and a proper atmosphere for your game.

As a matter of fact I recently created a powerful being myself, just a short time ago, for Cheka's setting. That does not have to mean that you should actually USE it. Ambience my friend, ambience.

Cap: I think the Dhole would be ok, if it was not named after a Cthulhu mythos entity. (In some places this post is a Dhole (the original) rip off). Go to Comment
The Dhole
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Minsk's comment on 2005-03-29 06:23 AM
Dhole, huh? I see someone likes the Cthulhu Mythos, aye? I know that the Dholes in the Mythos were tough mofos, but this fellow's rather overkill. If the thing's so insanely powerful, then he really won't be an active part of any game... just like the Tarrasque (poor, poor Tarrasque). Go to Comment
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