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The Hellcoat
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Peppe Pepis's comment on 2009-08-07 12:16 PM
Creepy! And very well written. Some hint at possible plots involving it? pretty please? Go to Comment
The Hellcoat
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Ramhir's comment on 2010-09-23 04:11 PM
As MoonHunter said, very cool and very creepy. I like it. Go to Comment
The Hellcoat
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-07-18 12:16 AM


I like Manfred's idea, which could lead to a great plot. The characters are sent to kill a man who stands in the moonlight whispering horrible things and scaring the towndfolk. Turns out he was keeping everyone safe. Something about the coat being a large silver fox appeals to me. It makes me think of Regular Ordinary Sweedish Meal Time. 


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Aasimov
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-03-08 09:14 PM
I really don't think it's terrible. I think things like his orange eyes are a nice touch given his background. I think with some tweaking this could be good. Go to Comment
Aasimov
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-04-01 07:04 PM
The end of that should have been: And his name is Aasimov. Go to Comment
Aasimov
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-28 01:19 AM
This is so BAD!
It must have been an off day. A really, really off day. Go to Comment
Aasimov
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-28 10:19 PM
Yeah, like I said, it is a terrible character. Go to Comment
Aasimov
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-03-08 09:53 PM
No, it's terrible. Go to Comment
Aasimov
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2004-08-28 07:06 AM
Hmmm...flamboyant is certainly apt. I am curious as to how a person would go about wearing armor over a great coat. That seems to be rather contradictory.

People this colorful (orange eyes, purple and red coat, and a purple? sword) are generally either color blind, or playing at the fool.

More detail about the sword would be nice, as purple steel doesnt pop up every day. Why did the jealous mage blast the King into a fire elemental, wouldnt it have been easier to turn the slave girl into a toad, or a she-orc, or some other fate?

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Aasimov
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-28 10:55 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Balgrian Uprising of Midwessel
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Agar's comment on 2003-03-24 07:21 PM
C. A crafty merchant hires the PC's to try and talk to the leaders of the Midwessels and the Balgrains and reach a peaceful soulution. What the PCs don't know is his brother by marriage leads a weapons trading guild, and stand to profit alot from sales to both sides of the conflict. Go to Comment
The Balgrian Uprising of Midwessel
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-31 09:48 AM
The Balgrians sound like hippies who got tired of being oppressed by the man...man. Rousingly written for the beginings of a civil upheaval and civil war. Go to Comment
The Balgrian Uprising of Midwessel
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-06-28 09:30 AM


 Even at the start, CP's writing style is great!


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The Prince of the Endless Corridor
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Ria Hawk's comment on 2003-03-13 09:42 PM
Perhaps an entrance to the Endless Corridor is what's behind that iron door in the Vales of Kthor... Go to Comment
The Prince of the Endless Corridor
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-06-21 10:43 PM
Bump.
Gotta get my work out there. Go to Comment
The Prince of the Endless Corridor
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-06 08:47 PM
As I read more and more of your works, I realize that you really do have a Lovecraftian mind and creativity. Most of your stuff could go in a CoC campaign. Go to Comment
The Prince of the Endless Corridor
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Wulfhere's comment on 2007-05-14 11:47 PM
He's not as detailed as some, but I really like this guy. Go to Comment
The Nine Abyssal Vales of Kthor
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
ephemeralstability's comment on 2003-03-13 07:35 PM
Oh yes! Poetic, demonic and horrifying! I love it. It'd be an interesting topic for the forums to discuss exactly what sort of stuff went on behind the iron gate... Go to Comment
The Nine Abyssal Vales of Kthor
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-31 09:44 AM
A great and colossal door stands to be opened, what lies beyond that first gate? We are curious and take up torches and arms to see what wonders await us in the cthonian darkness. We will gird ourselves for misadventure and mephit vapours, and the darkest fantasies that lie ripening, newly exposed from their rocky wombs. Go to Comment
The Nine Abyssal Vales of Kthor
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2011-06-03 07:15 PM


A well invoked start - would love to see more, but it is an excellent starting point!


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