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The Altar Of R'gu
Dungeons  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Mythirion's comment on 2013-05-17 08:00 PM
Personally, Cap's the guy that made me wanna join in the first place. #HeroWorship Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
manfred's comment on 2007-12-02 08:40 PM
A likable fellow by all accounts, excellently described and characterized. The man is just made to be an unwilling sage.

A few uses would be nice to have, though. Say, what if someone starts to blackmail an important figure about a few nasty things he did during the war, and the person wants to find out the source... traces leading to a document on that war, where the historian off-handedly describes the violence, desecrating of temples etc. that were commonplace? Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
manfred's comment on 2007-12-02 08:44 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
manfred's comment on 2007-12-03 05:10 PM
No, I didn't. :) Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-12-02 05:15 AM
I found this in an old RP. I had forgotten about it, but I really love the character, and I feel (perhaps erroneously) that I did a very deft job of characterizing Aher. I dunno', I just like it. Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-12-04 02:39 AM
Exactly. It's a true roleplaying struggle for the heroes- they can't just chop or magic their way through it. And I think it adds a very real, human dimension to him that he isn't insane or catatonic, he's just deeply, deeply depressed. Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-12-04 02:46 AM
Before Aher's eyes there is blood, endless blood, a limitless sea of blood which rises from the gap in the mountains in a crimson tidal wave, containing the massed bodies of all the dead he has ever seen and killed, a storm of dead flesh, rising over him. And atop it, on a raft made from broken lances lashed together, there is Death, a dessicated monk in a robe made of living moths, who smiles at Aher.

Freaking Awesome! Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-02 11:44 AM
I thought he was going to be a werewolf at first. Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-12-02 09:14 AM
You did a very good job at describing him in the beginning, short but very effective! The flow and writing in this NPC submission is very nice. There are no unnatural sentences and they are all connected in a nice way.

I like his history, full of vivid images of the horrible acts of a young mercenary. The dream with Death is nice also, it reminds me of The Shining. Also a nice touch with the night closing around him.

I would like to see some more though, a few options of how to use him. A few plot hooks maybe. He would have vast knowlegde of history and much knowlegde about fighting and war. These are things the PC's could be interested in. Getting him to learn them anything aout war seems like a hard task though. Does he not have a single relative, family or friend left from before he became a mercinary? Any of those could help him find meaning again? Maybe something the PC's could help with, try to track down his nephew/friend/sister to remind him that there are good things in life still.

Anyways I like him, I like the style of writing, he can easily be modified to fit any fantasy setting and I like the name.

-Mike Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-12-02 08:43 PM
You forgot to vote ;) Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-10-08 08:16 AM


HoH and a shameless BUMP!


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Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Murometz's comment on 2007-12-07 09:27 PM
A fantastic NPC. Well-written and all that, obviously, but more so, he feels very "real". I can only repeat what others have said. The description and his reccuring nightmare takes him over the top. I'm stealing him lock, stock, and smoking barrel! Beautifully rendered.

I'm checking the box next to "Dont need any help in knowing exactly how to use him"

(first 5 in a while for me) Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-02 07:18 PM
Excellent CP! I like the way it is written and is quite usable! Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
epsilon's comment on 2007-12-03 06:27 PM
I too initially thought it could do with some, how to use, ideas. But then I realised what would be required of someone to gather all this information, the histories collected and written. All though he seems like he is on his own and interacts little nowadays he must of at some stage known all sorts of people. Like any historian in order to uncover the facts one must dig into peoples thoughts, travel vast distances, collect scrolls and stories.

So for our PC's, here we have a great wealth of information but his mental state keeps us from finding things out. Like a magical lock on a treasure chest, that in its self is a hook, save Aher, find the treasure. Go to Comment
Aher Wolfhound
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Ramhir's comment on 2010-10-09 10:25 AM


With a little rewriting to blend him into my campaign history, he will work very well. I like him.


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Aher Wolfhound
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Darkstand's comment on 2013-08-23 02:00 PM
Very usable NPC that can be dropped into any quest that requires historical information with little need to rework anything. Go to Comment
The Cursed Keep Of The Wastelands
Locations  (Fortification)   (Desert)
manfred's comment on 2007-09-27 04:58 PM
You have still the gift, I was suitably disgusted.

Improving Xaggarng is a tough one... since that room is called Trick or Setback, maybe he could persuade the heroes to take the wrong path to treasure; or push them out by surprise, and barricade a door or something... could be better, but at least it's unusual for a mummy. *shrugs*

Good work, anyway. Go to Comment
The Cursed Keep Of The Wastelands
Locations  (Fortification)   (Desert)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-09-27 02:31 AM
Updated: Note to all the kids: This should probably be in the Dungeon category... WOOPS Go to Comment
The Cursed Keep Of The Wastelands
Locations  (Fortification)   (Desert)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-09-27 12:11 PM
Well, the weak point is the encounter with Xaggarng, I feel. I just couldn't come up with something more clever for that. *sigh* Go to Comment
The Cursed Keep Of The Wastelands
Locations  (Fortification)   (Desert)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-09-28 01:31 AM
How about this- the hall doors seal off with iron portals. Arrow slits drop open between the hall and a hidden chamber, originally made so that attackers could be trapped and filled with arrows. Of course, there are no longer any guards to pincushion the heroes, but there are swarms of yellow-banded scorpions preventing them from crawling through the arrow slits to release the iron seals. Go to Comment
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