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Dolmens Of Swaiar
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2009-01-01 03:25 AM
Probably depends on the place. It's doubtful whether or not they even remember enough about these places to have a suggestion of evil or ill omen. Go to Comment
Dolmens Of Swaiar
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2008-12-30 08:28 PM
Then he might make some fashion of return, Cheka, though twisted and darker than he ever was before.

This is you at your best, Captain, and I like it, especially for the 'this is just how it is' nature of the effects his Dolmens have. Go to Comment
Dolmens Of Swaiar
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Maggot's comment on 2008-12-30 07:05 AM
Creepy and sinister. But visiting the dolmens is a good way for those weary of life to kill themselves, I guess. Do ordinary folk, those not suffering from mental illness, regard these dolmens as a place of evil? Go to Comment
Dolmens Of Swaiar
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-01-02 08:26 AM
Short, but atmospheric and heavy. In short awesome. Go to Comment
Dolmens Of Swaiar
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-12-30 10:41 AM
The God must miss his former power. What if a small cult were to grow up worshipping him again? Go to Comment
Dolmens Of Swaiar
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2009-01-02 04:54 AM
w00t? Is CP active again? Go to Comment
Dolmens Of Swaiar
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2009-01-02 05:03 AM
Said it before: eloquent and powerful. It is a short, beautiful piece. 4.5/5 Go to Comment
Dolmens Of Swaiar
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Murometz's comment on 2009-01-05 02:16 PM
Indeed. Highly atmopspheric and usable. Great vibe! Go to Comment
Dolmens Of Swaiar
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valadaar's comment on 2009-01-05 10:36 AM
Nothing to add but my vote. Nice work Cap'n! Go to Comment
The True Lords
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Kassil's comment on 2008-11-07 07:39 AM
Definitely quite an interesting concept in the making here, Cap. Not many people can do the Lovecraftian component in things; it either gets overdone and either silly or grotesque rather than subtly horrific, or underdone and often fails to be noticed. You do a good job of striking the balance. Go to Comment
The True Lords
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Kassil's comment on 2008-12-05 06:15 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The True Lords
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Scrasamax's comment on 2008-12-08 11:37 AM
Sublime and baroque at the same time. I am in awe of this monstrous creation you have made Captain. Go to Comment
The True Lords
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EchoMirage's comment on 2008-12-16 03:38 AM
Nicely done! Go to Comment
The True Lords
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-12-05 03:20 PM
Rule by fearsome mecha-monarchs. 5/5 Go to Comment
The True Lords
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Murometz's comment on 2008-12-08 11:57 AM
What they all said. Fascinating material! Go to Comment
The True Lords
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valadaar's comment on 2008-12-09 11:20 AM
Ye Gods! What a vision. Nicely done Captain!

I could see this land being an excellent location, especially if it has completely collapsed and died. The True-lords, mere shadows of their original forms, hungering for any life that should arrive. Lesser machines perhaps patrolling looking for fuel for their masters, and the immense ruins that seem meaningless for dark-age technology adventurers. Go to Comment
The True Lords
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Demagogue's comment on 2008-12-16 07:42 PM
Dang. Really well written, a dark and interesting concept. Go to Comment
The True Lords
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-11-07 06:55 AM
Oh, yes...Immortal clockwork tyrants? Godcradles? Lovecraftian steampunk with a dash of Terry Brooks and a sprinkle of Miéville? I´m EXTREMELY curious what this´ll be when its finished. It´s quite thought-provoking as it is, but then, most of your subs are..

/David Go to Comment
The True Lords
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-12-05 01:18 AM
Well concieved and written. I will comment in greater detail when I have more time, but in the meantime: Great job!!

/D Go to Comment
Muggar the White Despiser
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2008-11-30 09:41 AM
Nice story!I wonder the feeling of your hair being torn apart.Oh my that really hurts! Go to Comment
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