Creative...creative...I like it. 5/5

However, as a complete side-note, it reminds me alot of Highlander...Implander! Go to Comment

Thanks. I left that stuff pretty open. Best that way to fit the outcome into the campaign, and to fit the Imp to the party.

There's an interesting side-plot there, what if it promises wealth and then discovers it can't break out? A trip to see a practitioner of the dark arts, maybe? Perhaps one of the old cult leaders still lives, or is unliving? Go to Comment

argh, I hadn't thought of that comparison. Go to Comment

Great Item, it is definetely a great way to screw with your PC's.

5/5 Go to Comment

This is cool, especially used with 30 imps as a source for imps. Go to Comment

Great potential here, and plot hooks!
Love the concept, and the idea can be adapted to other games. A definite bonus. Go to Comment

I'm not sure that I completely understand the item's power, but otherwise good. See Dragon Lord's comments.
Also, try a more interesting name. The name of the item is the first thing that really grabs the reader's interest.

4/5. Go to Comment

Interesting but con-fu-sing. 4/5 Excellent for a first-time post, though. Go to Comment

5/5 Very good. Go to Comment

This armour should be found in a Barrow by some grave robbing PC. Go to Comment

Solid backstory with believable motives for the primary NPCs involved - nicely explains why such a baneful item was made

The armour itself is a nice take on the old possession / mental domination idea, providing plenty of plot potential

The madness resulting from this is a nice touch, but it might be more interesting if this didn't necessarily result in violence (why has the king's mightiest warrior suddenly started acting "odd"?)

Excellent - 5/5 Go to Comment

Hit pretty much out of the park on a first post. Sad he did not seem to stay. Go to Comment

Only voted Go to Comment