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manfred's comment on 2007-06-11 04:42 PM
Now come on, can't you think of something yourself? Though a few theories would be really nice.

I would be rather interested, how subsequent attempts to cultivate life here have fared. A dead planet will eventually become uninhabitable, so someone has attempted to set out a few plants. Would they survive, or would they die... on it's own, or from whatever befell the planet? Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2007-06-25 01:54 PM
Oops, you have edited it without us even noticing! The vote shall be 'upped to reflect this.

I liked the 'ancient terraforming technology' bit most, it is an interesting option with a tragic aftertaste.

The post itself could handle a little polish especially in the formatting department, but is readable so I won't throw stones for that. Pity that it isn't marked as a Quest submission, for it is one. Those issues aside, good work! Go to Comment
Outpost of Tydor
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-06-12 08:47 AM
It's half an idea, the front half. It does remind me of the whole Roanoke Colony vanishing but without any possible clues other than everything is completely gone. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-06-11 01:47 PM
vote held until later Go to Comment
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CaptainMayday's comment on 2007-06-12 03:32 AM
Actually, Manfred, that's an interesting suggestion. I may well look into that and add it in. Go to Comment
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CaptainMayday's comment on 2007-06-13 03:04 PM
Updated: Added more details, changed some parts substantially. Added GM notes and plot hooks. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-06-11 01:00 PM
This is a good start, but I think you should tell us what happened. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-06-11 05:07 PM
Yes I can, but it is not my sub :)

If this were an open scroll or codex asking others to fill 'what if' I would be okay, but right now it is a little empty.

My usual thought on these things is it is fine to have the common knowlege version, but there should be a GM version with the real details too.

Right now it is a planet-sized Marie Celeste. Go to Comment
WinterKill
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MoonHunter's comment on 2007-06-14 06:15 PM
Interesting piece of folklore manifested. The additions are useful. Go to Comment
WinterKill
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-06-12 08:44 AM
More like an Ice Ghost. Not bad. Go to Comment
WinterKill
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-06-11 01:46 PM
It's a bit like an Ice Ghoul . Go to Comment
WinterKill
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CaptainMayday's comment on 2007-06-12 03:36 AM
Actually, with that in mind I may modify the text somewhat when I have the chance. Go to Comment
WinterKill
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CaptainMayday's comment on 2007-06-13 03:31 PM
Updated: Added some details on the Touch, on Mindwards, and some incidental stuff relating to them. Attempted to conform document to folklore standard. Go to Comment
WinterKill
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Drackler's comment on 2007-06-13 12:11 PM
Very good Go to Comment
WinterKill
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valadaar's comment on 2007-06-11 01:04 PM
I think this is nice, classic undead with the feel of real folklore though the bits about telepaths seem a little out of place. Go to Comment
WinterKill
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Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 11:09 AM
Unvoted by sure does turn up some good stuff.

3.5/5 Go to Comment
Gesthari
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-31 06:48 AM
I like the amount of work that has gone into this, the imagry of sky-jellyfish feeding on lightning is cool. Go to Comment
Gesthari
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-03-24 03:19 PM
Lightning is very powerful indeed, so it would be likely to strike and kill them if they live in or near thunderclouds. Other then that, very good. Go to Comment
Gesthari
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CaptainMayday's comment on 2006-03-24 11:32 PM
Hm, point. But in theory, there is no reason they could not consume the static buildup before it resulted in a lightning strike, is there? Go to Comment
Gesthari
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CaptainMayday's comment on 2006-03-28 04:30 AM
Updated: Edited to take account of some details
Updating to finished piece. Go to Comment
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