A good start, but appears to be just that.

It is pretty unremarkable so far but could be a lot better. Go to Comment

The story does lack something. Maybe it's my ADHD, but I couldn't follow it. Too cluttered, or something. Go to Comment

it is a good item for a gameone for the players to go after but not use, but other than that it is way to strong for ANY player to have Go to Comment

It is Slovak, correctly noting the item is unusable for most people, not even for cutting apples. Additionally, Krishna proposes some item he knows to be submitted, some axe pulled of some undead dragon... we shall see.


Dear Krishna,

this webpage is supposed to be readable for anyone knowing English. Using other languages does not help us to understand each other, especially the lesser known ones. Sadly, Slovak is such a language. If you wish to give someone a note in a way most members won't understand it, you may as well use a 'PM' (a Private Message) through the forums.

Sounds like a deal?


Drahy Krishna,

tato stranka ma byt citatelna pre ludi, co vedia po anglicky. Pouzivanie inych jazykov nam nepomoze vo vzajomnom pochopeni sa, obzvlast ak su to menej zname jazyky. Bohuzial, slovencina je taky jazyk. Ak chces niekomu povedat nieco tak, aby tomu vacsina clenov nerozumela, mozes rovnako dobre pouzit 'PM' (Private Message) prostrednictvom fora.

Moze byt?

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Note: delete these comments until 15.2.2005 Go to Comment

Then why'd you post it?
The point of these items is to be used. So unless one of the players is a descendant of Lord Sky, it is useless to us.
And what if one of the players is a descendant of Lord Sky? That player will be able to hold this insanely powerful sword. WAY WAY WAY TOO POWERFUL.

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All I got out of that was "character" and "undead dragon". What language? Go to Comment

This is a good item in a story, where you the author can make sure it is used appropriately and controlling who and what can use it, but an awful item for a game. Go to Comment

Post the axe on the site,so that we ca have a look at it. Go to Comment

AAGH! Too strong! Weaken it by... a million and it would be a fairly decent device. Also, the story lacked... something. I really can't put my finger on it though. Go to Comment

Just a huge axe, the character was a wimp, + critical hit. Nothing to brag about. Huge guy with huge axe -> lots of damage -> character in a puddle of blood. Go to Comment

No Miso toto ti nevyslo. Je to nepouzitelne pre inych. Kebyze to najde dajaky iny charakter tak by s nim ani jablka nemohol krajat.

Inak povedz pls Petovi, nech sem odosle tu sekeru ktoru vytiahol Hlavyho nepriatel z toho undead dragona. Go to Comment

Exuse me using Slovak. It is my mother language, you know.

About that axe, it is great item, used on one Bale-character (K.O.in first round).

Just ask EchoMirage....:)

Inak manfred aj ty si z SVK? Dobre vediet :) Go to Comment

I Can't weaken it is not to be held by any other type of men or dragons beside Lord ky and his kin. Go to Comment

Updated: Currently the sword has been left in a land in which no dominant people rest in. The sword itself has thousands of deaths brought upon it from it. Basically the sword is meant for only the strong to wield and can kill dragons very quickly if in skilled hands. Go to Comment

Not a bad item really but would be pretty campaign specific. Also any game it was effectively used in would either revolve around one character... the descendant of Lord Sky... or involve the players getting messed up. Neither of which ruins the game but both require "understanding " players. Go to Comment

Ah yes the fabled sword of dragon slaying.  It might be interesting to place in your game world a magic sword of absurd but finite power and then apply all the sword stories on strolen's citadel to it.  A sword that had some many different yet similar tales would indeed be ancient and enigmatic.

 The text was a little disjointed, and it brings nothing new to the magic sword genre, but I like that you came back four years later to update it.  

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