Updated: Roack is right, lol.... fixed that Go to Comment

I didnt know that, haha.

Also, all it would require is a signiicant oxygen content in the atmosphere, and it is higher in rainforest areas. Plus, perhaps theis wasp has more evolved methods of absorbing air than other bugs Go to Comment

Fairly intelligent, I'd say, as far as bugs go, because it knows the proper chemicals to use and all that, but then, in real life, plants can pull that off too, haha. So, I'd have to say its at the high end of insect intelligence, but below that of a mammal

Also, with regards to the wings, at one point on the earth there were dragonflies about this size ^_^

Had about the same wingspan as a large eagle, so not quite the massive size you-d expect. If it was a bird, yes, but most bugs make up for wing size with rapidity of beats, and they do that part extremely well, as you can tell just from looking at them Go to Comment

My first HOH...
Thanks for that, Cheka, it means a lot... ^_^ Go to Comment

Updated: Mourn's right again, haha, added a small caveat about anaesthetics with regard to that egg Go to Comment

Oh, I should mention that some people go about with liver tumors of that size and feel only a mild discomfort Go to Comment

This is a really novel critter. An unusual lifecycle to say the least :)


I don't agree with Moon on their size. I do not see any need to rationalize giant insects in a fantasy post however. Go to Comment

lol I enjoyed the CoC influence......that is where you got this from right? Go to Comment

Very solid item, with a good history. Nice effort :) Go to Comment

While not earthshattering, a very well written and presented loup-de-noir type magic item, be careful what you wish for, as they say. Go to Comment

Nice. A wereband. 3 points +1 for the backstory. Go to Comment

Useful, but be careful with it. Go to Comment

What Scras said. It's nothing groundbreaking (which is again what Scras said), but it's well-presented, with a nice story as well. Go to Comment

The backstory really sells this one. A good job. Go to Comment

A nice item, with a good drawback Go to Comment

Very interesting as a legend, and could be useful as a red herring - what if the unbreakable property is the only one? You could add some generic bonus to combat abilities, if the blade aids the wielder, but nothing else.

As for breaking it, they would have to be 'broken' at the same moment - improbable, but impossible.


Bonus for reminding me of Lady Hawke, a great fantasy movie. Go to Comment

It is still a little tricky: edit the comment you have voted in, click 'Delete Vote', and post a new comment with a new vote. Go to Comment

The story is interesting, adequate, though to my tastes it has little *snap*... But that's just my personal preference.
I dislike that the powers are unknown- I understand that it's cooler for players if they don't know the powers, but we, at least, should know the powers, as GMs, and plus, undefined powers smell of munchkin to me.
I really like the bit about them being unbreakable while the other is intact- but you do realize that they are just unbreakable, right? Because one won't break unless the other does, but the other won't break unless the one does. Do you get what I'm saying?

Interesting, shows promise but work on it...

2.5/5. Go to Comment

Alright.
The powers are fairly basic, but fine... Dualistic items, meh. They work with the swords, I suppose. The real draw of it rests in the story, and the fact that they can take human form.

As for the part about transforming the user into a demon or warrior... I'd give it a miss.

3.5/5 Go to Comment

I am not able to re-vote? Go to Comment