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Strolen's comment on 2009-08-20 06:31 PM
See, I wasn't going to read a submission on my quick web forray today but for some reason my mind attention was directed to this submission.....did you have anything to do with that? Perhaps these things can be created by somebody with a strong enough psyche or could be able to draw these ideas out of the environment and abuse them for their own benefit. Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2009-08-19 01:10 PM
Now this is magic you can believe in... especially in this place. :)

Best are of course those multipurpose ideas with major destructive as constructive applications (nuclear power is a good example, but may be a bit too much). Then there's the usual "generator powered by life", sucking life out of anything nearby, very handy.

I'm glad this idea wasn't lost, Argus! Go to Comment
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axlerowes's comment on 2009-08-20 10:17 PM
I have often wondered what happened a lost idea. . .

I have heard people wonder

"Does it stink like rotten meat?
Or crust and sugar over--
like a syrupy sweet?

Maybe it just sags
like a heavy load.

Or does it explode?"

Perhaps it travels through time and recruits your old roommate from the orphanage into destroying your future.

Perhaps it floats across time and space only to misunderstood by the those who find it and sparking generations of war fare, the product of which is swallowed by a small dog.

Perhaps the lost ideas become visions....more empowered versions of ourselves that start fight clubs, murder our ex-wives and encourage use to finish that short story about flying monkeys we started in high school.

In short the unrealized the piece of intellectual effort as a force in and of itself is standard in the world of fiction and in the understanding of the collective psyche. I think it may be that writers themselves must lose so many ideas or have some many ideas that despite effort are never realized that it leads the artists to champion the concept that no idea is ever lost. I also think this concept will strike home with a great many roleplayers. Alternatively the idea of possession as form of creativity is something championed by a fictional Di Vinci and the video game "dwarf fortress" . I think players would take to this also because it will be familar to them. I think your post articulates well something that people struggle with in both life and art. I think this has been an under used plot device in the roleplaying genre. Thanks for bringing it to the surface. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2009-08-17 06:18 PM
A really good concept, but I think it would benefit greatly from an example with plot ideas.

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Fallen Angel's comment on 2009-08-19 02:41 AM
Solid, and the only ideas that come up are explained. (Unless I'm missing something.)

3.5/5! Go to Comment
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Fallen Angel's comment on 2009-08-19 02:41 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Moonlake's comment on 2009-08-17 08:56 PM
A very logical neat concept. Go to Comment
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Argus's comment on 2009-08-17 09:47 PM
As per request, a plot idea. Steampunk, since that's what's on my mind lately.

The Exposition:
Arthur Cross taught engineering and aether sciences at the nations oldest university; Oxford. He was well liked and worked closely with his students on their projects, often involving entire classes in his latest mad idea. But in summer of 1862, he died in a lab accident, much to the dismay of his peers and students. Foul play was, and still is suspected, but nothing has been proven. Since Albert was being uncharacteristically secretive at the time, and whatever he was working on was destroyed in the same incident he was, no one knows exactly what he was working on at the time.
The Problem:
Since about a week after his death, the lab and the area around it has been having problems. Students and faculty alike have blacked out in the area, only to wake up hours later somewhere else with no knowledge of what they were doing. Equipment and materials has gone missing from both public laboratories and private lockers. People have reported having problems with their memory, but can't seem to remember what they have forgotten.
The Solution:
The party can be contacted either or both privately by Valery Cross, daughter of Albert and the one personally experiencing the most incidents, or publicly by the Oxford Administration, primarily by Johnathan Ruskin, head of the engineering department. They are told only about the problems by Ruskin, not the circumstances of Albert's death. Valery will tell them everything with minimal questioning, but makes it clear that she doesn't believe that her father is a ghost.
The Quest:
This part is flexible. The what and how of the device that Albert's Lost Idea is constructing are up to you, but needless to say, it should be incredibly dangerous. Contraptions that bend the laws of physics, or outright ignore them, or devices that will have terrible consequences if even turned on add an element of suspense to the adventure.
The Lost Idea has been building the device in a hidden part of the lab, concealed to the point that the players will not find it at all unless they have read Albert's journal (in his desk in his office), or been told about it by someone who already knows it's there (Valery, or one or two of his students).
Valery knows about the Lost Idea, but thinks that it's the trapped soul of her father, and that helping it is the only way to let him rest. Unless the players can prove to her that it's really just one of his ideas trying to bring itself to life, she will lie and conceal information from them.
The Conclusion:
The only way to stop the Lost Idea peacefully is to finish the device. After that, the idea will disperse naturally. It actually doesn't even care if you turn it on or not, although you may want to wait a week before smashing the machine to pieces, just to be on the safe side. Destroying the progress that has been made on the machine already will only make the Lost Idea angry, and cause it to entirely abandon the kindness it has previously shown. It will begin possessing people directly, working them until they die, and then finding another labor source. If this isn't stopped within a week, it will learn the ability to possess more then one person at a time.
The Reward:
Players that succeed and manage to do so with no loss of life or limb earn the respect of Albert's students, and his daughter as a permanent contact in the university. Players that don't will just get their paycheck, and be told to leave. Depending on how bad things got, they may even make enemies at Oxford. Go to Comment
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Argus's comment on 2009-08-21 09:57 PM
Until now, I have never read a comment that has actually made me laugh out loud, especially when it's a comment on something I wrote. Thank you for fixing that. Go to Comment
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Blydden's comment on 2010-07-31 03:36 AM
Best idea that was never lost ever.

I really mean that.

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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-07-27 03:57 AM


 



History:



Serena Marinez was a brilliant courtier, the kind of mind found only once in a generation. A quick and avid learner of anything she could observe her greatest yearning was for a good intellectual challenge. Regrettably life as a courtier did little to exercise her phenomenal talent, leaving her bored and disdainful of her peers. What little pleasure she derived came from ruminating over what she considered would be a most difficult challenge: to murder every courtier, every lord and lady, and every royalty – an entire coup de tete - and stand completely blameless. The perfect crime. Serena never intended to act upon her musings, simply to entertain herself. The need grew even more pressing after a riding accident left her paralyzed below the waist. Shunning the attentions of well-meaning attendants and bitter over the loss of her independence Serena died slowly in a fevered delirium brought on by infection.



Situation:



A peculiar string of suspicious accidents seems to plague the palace, brought on by an assassin with intimate knowledge of the court. The delirious thoughts of Serena have begun wafting through the castle, and some have found courtiers with desire to kill. Every murder has been perpetrated by a different courtier, who has no memory of their actions. Each is seemingly flawless, but Serena did not have the benefit of learning from experience so there are consistent mistakes. Additional mistakes are made by those gripped by her ideas, as the ideas can only suggest and not fully elaborate. The great irony is that Serena has become the perfect murderer, how can you suspect someone who is dead?



Hook:



Someone of importance to the characters has been implicated in the multiple deaths of courtiers which have occurred over the past month. This person stands to be executed soon if someone does not prove his innocence and ferret out the source of the deaths. The real danger of this situation is not realizing the Lost Ideas are about, and sacrificing one innocent for another. 


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