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Blind Spot
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Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-27 11:20 PM
Not bad, I enjoyed reading it, but the pace was rushed, when some sections of the story would have benefited from the pace falling to a crawl, showing the mage's waiting game before fighting and killing the demon. Go to Comment
Blind Spot
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Cheka Man's comment on 2017-01-27 09:02 PM
It's ok. Go to Comment
Blind Spot
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
axlerowes's comment on 2017-02-23 10:22 PM
This was the most commented on story submitted for the second ePub. Everyone agreed it was a solid story but lacking in emotional development, detail and an ending deserving of all the build up. I think you got a lot of good feedback on this one. Go to Comment
Chessboards
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Cheka Man's comment on 2017-01-27 08:57 PM
Endings
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Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-27 10:59 AM
It is a fantastic homage to my insanity, and Aramax feeding my muse crank and crystal meth.

He left out the part where I was killed by my publisher before I could release my manifesto of despair Go to Comment
Endings
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Cheka Man's comment on 2017-01-27 01:15 PM
Endings
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ScorpionJinx's comment on 2017-09-07 04:07 PM
Wow, this was short and disturbing - Well done, Aramax. Thank you for the note about the Ali Azif, I am woefully not caught up on things Lovecraftian. Go to Comment
Endings
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axlerowes's comment on 2017-02-23 10:27 PM
This a well written little story, clear and very quick and efficient on the character development. Go to Comment
Endings
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Aramax's comment on 2017-01-27 10:06 AM
Ok just so some of you don't get the wrong idea, I'm not deragened , don't own a gun and have been talking to Scras on FB about this and he told me he loves it. I'm afraid this might have been a little too good at what I was trying to do. Go to Comment
Endings
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Aramax's comment on 2017-02-24 05:24 AM
Thamx axle, I was particularly happy with this one as it was the first thing I wrote after a very long dry spell, just glad scras got the joke. LOL, need to link sub it was inspired by Go to Comment
Endings
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Aramax's comment on 2017-02-24 05:48 AM
AUTHORS NOTE: The Al Azif mentioned above is the arabic language precursor book to the necronomicon in lovecraftian lore Go to Comment
Sister Karnage
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-20 05:59 PM
That's pretty gonzo Go to Comment
Time Magic for any D&D
Systems  (Mystical)   (Specific)
Cheka Man's comment on 2016-12-31 05:08 PM
Happy New Year! Go to Comment
Aramax Ironbelly
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2016-04-08 10:47 PM
Aramax Ironbelly
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2016-04-07 11:19 AM
He's instantly likable. Go to Comment
Aramax Ironbelly
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Aramax's comment on 2016-04-07 09:44 AM
STAY ONE MILE AWAY WHEN HE USES THE OUTHOUSE! Go to Comment
Aramax Ironbelly
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Aramax's comment on 2016-04-07 10:16 AM
This self loathing dwarf goes beardless and tries to get other dwarves to call him "Elfy", also wears 12 inch boots Go to Comment
Aramax Ironbelly
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Mageek's comment on 2016-04-07 11:00 AM

Who needs a sphere of annihilation anyway, when you can take it to the 'Max?

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30 Magic Weapons of the Stolen World
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2016-04-06 09:42 AM
4/5 (-1 for the stats, but still a very good 30 with some very original magic weapons.) Go to Comment
30 Magic Weapons of the Stolen World
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Aramax's comment on 2016-04-05 10:34 AM
Minor = +1
above average +2
Moderate +3
Major +4 or 5 Go to Comment
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       By: Strolen

In nature, for instance, a rhino has flies and ticks etc, that live on the hide and live off the blood. Rhino will visit and lie in ponds where turtles will clean the underwater portion of the ticks and a species of bird will clean the the top of ticks and other parasites. What if where the characters camp there were a species of animals that lived off wounds of the creatures. PCs camp. Anybody with wounds on there body are soon covered with small rodent - insect - shadows - whatever. Would immediately see it as a threat I would imagine. But perhaps one of the wounded didn't wake up when it happened, and when they did finally wake they were completely healed. Perhaps somebody was warned of something attacking them but they were able to notice that the wound was actually getting smaller instead of larger. Or maybe they successfully beat the creatures off them and don't notice an improvement, marking this place never to rest at ever again....later learn that villagers send their wounded there but they keep it a guarded secret because they don't want all the attention or traffic and what comes with such a special gift. Could turn into something more too if characters decide to start blabbing about it.

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