Not bad, I enjoyed reading it, but the pace was rushed, when some sections of the story would have benefited from the pace falling to a crawl, showing the mage's waiting game before fighting and killing the demon. Go to Comment
This was the most commented on story submitted for the second ePub. Everyone agreed it was a solid story but lacking in emotional development, detail and an ending deserving of all the build up. I think you got a lot of good feedback on this one. Go to Comment
Ok just so some of you don't get the wrong idea, I'm not deragened , don't own a gun and have been talking to Scras on FB about this and he told me he loves it. I'm afraid this might have been a little too good at what I was trying to do. Go to Comment
Herbalist in the group mistakes one plant for another and mistakenly poisons the group. Not to death, but pretty darn ill with recurring symptoms until the cause and cure are realized. (Local people may be able to help rather easily. "You ate Dragon's Rot you fool, looks and smells just like mint except it has these small thistles on the root. Only grow in the Hornwood Forest, that must be where ya got them. Eat this and you will feel better in 4 hours."