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The Shade of You
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Cheka Man's comment on 2017-01-27 09:18 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Shade of You
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2016-03-27 10:02 PM
I am only voting because I'm not sure why I wouldn't. And I somehow find that I like this. It has given me an idea for a short side plotline in my story. A visceral idea of an oracle or wayward traveler speaking to a party member on a darkened rainy road. Go to Comment
The Shade of You
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2016-04-22 09:54 PM
Not a bad bit of petty. I like the, uh, I think "cadence" is the word I'm looking for.

From an RPG idea perspective, I don't get too much out of it, thouh. Go to Comment
The Shade of You
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Dragonlordmax's comment on 2016-04-22 09:54 PM
That should say "poetry", not "petty." Sorry. Go to Comment
The Shade of You
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Aramax's comment on 2016-03-28 08:03 AM
I'm glad you were inspired! My inspiration for my recent poetry writing was the newish Adele song Hello, which brought home some sins of my past........ Go to Comment
Brass Man
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Strolen's comment on 2016-03-20 06:17 PM
Gave me good visuals! Go to Comment
Brass Man
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Scrasamax's comment on 2016-03-20 07:59 AM
Brass Man
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Cheka Man's comment on 2017-01-27 09:20 PM
An interesting way of reanimating people. Go to Comment
Brass Man
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2016-03-25 05:55 PM
I agree with Strolen that I like the visual. I might be inclined to make it technological undeath rather than requiring a spell, but that's an easy adjustment.

I also find the eye/ear/brain thing interesting, in that it to some degree suggests different vulnerabilities for a brass man than for a normal human. Sure he has no heart, but maybe if you cut his ear off.... Go to Comment
Brass Man
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2016-03-25 05:57 PM
Oh yes, and I meant to say that you have to actually give it the robot freetext! That's part of the point! Go to Comment
Brass Man
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2016-03-21 02:13 PM
I like the brain, eye, and ear detail. Gives them a touch of the tragic. Go to Comment
Brass Man
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axlerowes's comment on 2016-03-19 10:56 PM
Very clear and accessible, good one. Go to Comment
Brass Man
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valadaar's comment on 2017-06-14 12:07 PM
Not bad 100. Like it!
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One Arrow
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Scrasamax's comment on 2015-09-12 12:35 AM
I don't know enough about poetry to tell good from bad, and have no informed ability to offer critique.

I can say thank you for posting it. Go to Comment
One Arrow
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
axlerowes's comment on 2015-09-12 08:31 AM
I think what is great about the poem is that it tells a story vividly and concisely. You feel sympathy for both the beast and the hunter. We wanted to put stuff like this in the ePub. Go to Comment
One Arrow
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-12 10:09 AM
Wow, Who knew we'ed see a day when Scras was basicly speechless! Lol. I guess then 'Thank you for reading" Go to Comment
One Arrow
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Aramax's comment on 2015-12-15 08:24 PM
Due to reasons I don't fully understand, axle wants me to delete this so we can put it in the epub Go to Comment
The Vision(a Tale of the young Wizard)
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2015-09-10 06:58 PM

I wanted to dislike this, because hack poetry (my OWN first and foremost!!!!!) is well, you know...hackey.

But this isn't bad. Has a nice flow!

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30 Weird Encounters
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
Cheka Man's comment on 2015-09-09 12:12 AM
It's ok. 3/5 Go to Comment
30 Weird Encounters
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 01:22 PM
Update: She gets out her washboard and scrubs and scrubs Go to Comment
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