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Scrasamax's comment on 2015-09-12 12:35 AM
I don't know enough about poetry to tell good from bad, and have no informed ability to offer critique.

I can say thank you for posting it. Go to Comment
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-09-12 08:31 AM
I think what is great about the poem is that it tells a story vividly and concisely. You feel sympathy for both the beast and the hunter. We wanted to put stuff like this in the ePub. Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2015-09-12 10:09 AM
Wow, Who knew we'ed see a day when Scras was basicly speechless! Lol. I guess then 'Thank you for reading" Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2015-12-15 08:24 PM
Due to reasons I don't fully understand, axle wants me to delete this so we can put it in the epub Go to Comment
The Vision(a Tale of the young Wizard)
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Murometz's comment on 2015-09-10 06:58 PM

I wanted to dislike this, because hack poetry (my OWN first and foremost!!!!!) is well, you know...hackey.

But this isn't bad. Has a nice flow!

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30 Weird Encounters
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Cheka Man's comment on 2015-09-09 12:12 AM
It's ok. 3/5 Go to Comment
30 Weird Encounters
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Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 01:22 PM
Update: She gets out her washboard and scrubs and scrubs Go to Comment
30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
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Scrasamax's comment on 2015-09-06 09:48 AM
The Chicago stockyards are my favorite of the 11/30 listed. The rest are an interesting mix of crypto-conspiracy and modern mythos and I like that a lot. There are a couple of things that come to mind to add to this.

There's nothing about the Nazis. There needs to be some Nazi wonder weapon secret lair.
Australia and the dreamtime
Devils Triangles and missing cruise ships
Dinosaur cryptids or isolated locations with dinos.
Cold War era simulations, like the American city replicated in Russia to train spies
An Ember/Matrix like buried vault city Go to Comment
30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
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Scrasamax's comment on 2015-09-07 09:17 AM
Updated, there are some cool ideas here, I didn't expect the doomsday vault looking to start a nuclear apocalypse or the Indian/Sasquatch team up, but wow, that works! Go to Comment
30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
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Cheka Man's comment on 2015-09-09 12:11 AM
Fun and thank you for writing this. Go to Comment
30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
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Murometz's comment on 2015-09-08 01:57 PM
campy, pulpy, crypto fun! Go to Comment
30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
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Murometz's comment on 2015-09-08 04:36 PM
Ideas for 29. And 30. Hy-Brasil and Lemuria/Mu Go to Comment
30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
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Murometz's comment on 2015-09-08 05:08 PM
Last thought. Strolen will probably hit me with a rolled-up newspaper for mentioning spelling but...

*because* this is a fun read and a great resource for pulling ideas for games, can you please go back and do a once-over on spelling? Things like holocost, beaurarcy, mongole, expairment, etc. the amount of typos is just a bit jarring. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2015-09-08 06:44 PM
ok, fixed what I found. There may be few more lurking in here, I'll take another look later. Go to Comment
30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
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valadaar's comment on 2015-09-08 11:20 AM
Update: Bolded the headers for you. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2015-09-08 11:20 AM
A great trove of strange locations!

Plenty of ideas. Good stuff.

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Aramax's comment on 2015-09-07 09:33 AM
Thanx for a couple of ideas! Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 11:27 AM
My computer skills are that primative......thanx Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 05:40 PM
No , I'm sorry. My spell check stoped working and I'm too much an IDIOT to figure out how to fix it. I have a new chrome book and it doesn't show me the squiggly lines that it used to.I'd be greatful for some help in this matter and again I am sorry. Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2015-09-10 09:58 AM
I am both honored and ashamed, Muro and Echo both have pitched in to fix my gemmer and spelling, I am sorry I presented a good idea in a terribly sloppy way. I'm not submitting anything new untill I figure out spell check on my new chrome book. I'm am thankful and sorry, I feel like I misused this site. again sorry Go to Comment
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