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Book of Memorization (a Tale of Mysantia)
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Aramax's comment on 2014-10-30 08:17 AM
I like pushing the edge. What could be more edgy than a sub expanding on Vancian magic! LOLs 1s and 4 s in my future. TWEEK! Go to Comment
Book of Memorization (a Tale of Mysantia)
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Aramax's comment on 2014-10-31 05:50 AM
Book of Memorization (a Tale of Mysantia)
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Moonlake's comment on 2014-10-29 04:00 PM
I like this. I find the various stories associated with the spells charming. Go to Comment
Book of Memorization (a Tale of Mysantia)
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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2014-10-30 08:51 PM
A very novel and interesting take on how to memorize spells. Could we get more than one entry per school? How about descriptions of the book's illustrations? Perhaps it would also be better to divide the sub by the various sections on schools rather than pages. Go to Comment
Queen Nekcrola the 47th (a Tale of Mysantia)
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Maggot's comment on 2014-11-03 07:29 AM
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Scrasamax's comment on 2014-10-28 07:29 AM
A fun read, and I can feel elements of Elric of Melnibone, and you probably shouldn't pick up Exalted, or you should, but it unfolds like Nekcrola's story.

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Pariah's comment on 2014-10-29 12:23 AM
It definitely fits the old school aesthetic, which is all I'm grading this on because I'm absolutely horrible at grading NPCs, the main reason I don't normally vote on them. Ignoring minor formatting issues, it's a solid submission. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2014-10-28 11:22 AM
Certainly has that old-school feel! It's still choppy in places, but ok, thats your style. Plothooks made me smile. You be Questing! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2014-10-28 07:29 AM
A good Old School villain with lots of possibilities. She seems a little too powerful, but given its vintage (1981), it works. It certainly has far more depth than anything I would have put together at the same age. I had not started gaming yet in 1981, much less worldbuilding.

There is a lot of detail packed into this one - hints and hooks into your campaign.
I'd like to see more of this!


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Silveressa's comment on 2014-10-28 09:36 AM
This certainly would feel at home in a module form the 80's, and captures the same slightly dry yet compelling and informative style that was the norm in those old school modules

A few more plot hooks and perhaps a role playing pointers bit might finish rounding her out, but as she stands she's a classic old school NPC that can figure prominently as either a patron of main antagonist of a campaign, nicely done!

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Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-05 11:41 PM
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Aramax's comment on 2014-10-27 08:00 AM
Note
This is almost EXACTLY the NPC from 1981 about 92% of this sub is how I used her, with only a little embellishment added Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2014-10-27 09:41 AM
It has been pointed out to me my comment makes it look like a copy of someone else's work, it is not Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2014-10-27 02:01 PM
C'mon 77 views and not even an "I hate it!" :( Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2014-10-28 07:00 AM
No offence taken, My subs have been sloppy and I was prob too concerned with grammar and spelling ,that the format suffered. I was trying to go old school and now at the same time..I am pleased that you found the sub solid for content (but that's never been a problem for me) Unfortunately your criticisms are valid. Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2014-10-28 07:38 AM
Your comment means a lot to me! Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2014-10-28 07:53 AM
not familiar w/ Exalted at all.But if true they plagiarized me! LOL! Go to Comment
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Aramax's comment on 2014-10-28 09:44 AM
Really happy with comments, guys! I was a little worried about this one as I thought it might be TOO old school, but she has a soft spot in my heart and I miss her! She has always felt ALIVE to me and it's nice that she is still appreciated! Go to Comment
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Moonlake's comment on 2014-10-28 02:21 AM
The content of this sub is solid, the character and her surroundings have been fleshed out properly. But I find this sub a bit hard to read as it seems quite ‘jumbled’ in terms of how content flows from one aspect of this Queen from the next. Besides the HOOK section, there’s no headings and this sub would probably read better with more of them.

One final point is that I’m not sure whether you’ve already tidied up this sub or just expanded a character sheet into words (at one point I thought you had done the later from your first comment but now I’m not sure, anyway, I hope you do not find it offensive for I mean none). I think that might be why no one had ventured to comment but then it could be just inopportune timing that you’ve posted this sub in. Also, the fact that you wrote 3 comments yourself could be why as well. On the Citadel, getting 3 comments is already very good catch.
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-10-28 10:29 PM
Aramax gets to be the second test, by virtue of this sub being right below the first. :P

Art - This is a quest were trite and overdone are virtues, and on that this merits a full point. :)
Craft - The writing is solid, but the formatting could be a bit clearer, with sections for important aspects. Half Point.
Style - It's very true to the style in play, but it's also a tad tangled. Half Point.
Substance - If I was running an old school D&D game, this would be my Villain. Full Point.
Extra Mile - Goddammit, I HATE old school. But you kept me reading all the way to the end anyway. Full point.

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