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The Calcobrinian Hotblood
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-11 11:43 AM
Shameless plug! Go to Comment
The Calcobrinian Hotblood
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-23 03:29 PM
Useful for anyone who needs a horse. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-04-25 04:21 PM
This submission is great. While I do not love it I will definately give credit where it is due. It was packed full of information that was obviously known by you instead of just what you have been told or research.

I took a few points off for paragraphing though, which is why I gave you a 3.5 instead of a 4.0... please do not let that disuade you from thinking I am a very hard critique as I am not. Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2006-04-23 07:34 PM
To quote Moon: "Very nicely done." I can't really add anything to it, aside from perhaps a small grammar error at the end of the first paragraph. Read it aloud and it should make sense as to why it doesn't quite flow. Go to Comment
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Roack's comment on 2006-04-24 08:17 PM
Realistic, well explained, an awesome intro AND a cool name? That's everything I'm lookin' for! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-23 04:18 PM
Wow! Obviously written by a horse expert. I learned a great deal more about equines than I thought I knew. Well done!

If I was to nitpick, I think that the following sentence could have come first, followed by the opening paragraph.

"From the desert I come to thee on a stallion shod with fire." Go to Comment
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Appaloosa's comment on 2006-04-23 06:20 PM
There you go Muro I changed the opening just for you. Thanks man Go to Comment
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