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The Calcobrinian Hotblood
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-11 12:43 PM
Shameless plug! Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-23 04:29 PM
Useful for anyone who needs a horse. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-04-25 05:21 PM
This submission is great. While I do not love it I will definately give credit where it is due. It was packed full of information that was obviously known by you instead of just what you have been told or research.

I took a few points off for paragraphing though, which is why I gave you a 3.5 instead of a 4.0... please do not let that disuade you from thinking I am a very hard critique as I am not. Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2006-04-23 08:34 PM
To quote Moon: "Very nicely done." I can't really add anything to it, aside from perhaps a small grammar error at the end of the first paragraph. Read it aloud and it should make sense as to why it doesn't quite flow. Go to Comment
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Roack's comment on 2006-04-24 09:17 PM
Realistic, well explained, an awesome intro AND a cool name? That's everything I'm lookin' for! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-23 05:18 PM
Wow! Obviously written by a horse expert. I learned a great deal more about equines than I thought I knew. Well done!

If I was to nitpick, I think that the following sentence could have come first, followed by the opening paragraph.

"From the desert I come to thee on a stallion shod with fire." Go to Comment
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Appaloosa's comment on 2006-04-23 07:20 PM
There you go Muro I changed the opening just for you. Thanks man Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2016-02-23 09:11 AM
This is a great horse submission, but I would have liked just a
_bit_ more to tie it into fantasy. What differentiates it from a Wikipedia entry about an existing breed of horse to decidedly non experts such as myself?
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Racy Religion

       By: Spark

On a certain continent, nearly all kingdoms worship under the same pantheon. However, in the southern reaches the peoples take a much more...liberal stance on their Gods. Statues are nude, and very anatomically correct, and icons are often startlingly brazen. For instance, the icon of (insert name), the goddess of love, is an image of two nude twins embracing in a passionate kiss, signifying the love of both family and partner. This is a source of unending outrage and offense for the Northern churches, whose traditional and modest take on religion is constantly at odds with the near-blasphemous ideals of the Southerners. While this is not enough to provoke outright conflict, there is more than enough simmering discontent and long-held grudges between the two hemispheres.

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